Yueming, Qing Xiang.
Cuiping hides the candle shadow, and tea is the curtain sound.
Sitting for a long time and singing, but your dream has not come true at the beginning of sleep.
Who teaches parrots, so the words are shocking.
This is a modern poem, because its rhyme, antithesis and balance all meet the basic requirements of metrical poetry.
Its rhyme, antithesis, and leveling (including difficulties) are as follows:
Rhyme: The first sentence rhymes with Geng rhyme. The first, second, fourth, sixth and eighth sentences use rhyme, and the rhyme feet are "Ming, Qing, Sheng, Cheng and Jing" respectively. These words are all Geng Yun words in Ping.
Confrontation: the first joint, the parallel joint and the neck joint are all opposed, but only the tail joint is not opposed. That is to say, the first antithetical couplet "Man makes the moon clear" is opposite to "Xiang Xiao Zhen Qing", "Jade screen covers the candle shadow" is opposite to "the sound of tea under the curtain", and "sedentary singing a song" is opposite to "the dream of first sleep is not round".
Flat:
Yueming, Qing Xiang. Cuiping hides the candle shadow, and tea is the curtain sound.
Very flat, very flat, very flat. Flat and light, flat and light.
Sitting for a long time and singing, but your dream has not come true at the beginning of sleep. Who teaches parrots, so the words are shocking.
Flat and light, flat and light. Flat and light, flat and light.
This poem conforms to the law of "righteousness" and "stickiness" in metrical poetry, and there is no mistake between right and wrong. And "people", "Cui" and "red" are not on the same level. There is a dilemma, that is, the sentence "Who teaches parrots", in which the third word should have been written in a flat voice, and the word "ji ao" was used here, and then the word "parrot" was omitted from the fourth word that should have been written in a flat voice.