Ma Zhiyuan's "Tianjingsha Qiu Si" is a Yuan Dynasty Sanqu with particularly beautiful artistic conception and deep feelings. Its biggest feature is that it adopts the method of image superposition. The whole song is 28 words, and the first three sentences use nine images in succession. The whole song is not decorated, and the scenery is directly described by line drawing. In order to deepen students' impression of image superposition and line drawing, I ask students to copy Tianjingsha to express their inner feelings.
Then I watched dozens of children's imitations of Tianjingsha. No matter how flat the rhyme is, I am just expressing my feelings and looking for landscape images that can be used in poetry in my life in order to deepen their impression. Although it is not standardized, it is very lovely and gratifying, especially for some children who have recently learned the knowledge of "Colorful", "Early Spring, Mid Spring, Late Spring" and "Wei Zi Zigui Tea" in their poetry writing.
Reading:
1 "Tianjingsha? Room: windows, desks, beds, desk lamps, pen containers, bookshelves, cabinets and books. Warm and comfortable, my warm room. (Qiao Cai)
2 "Tianjingsha? Looking forward to winter, bald trees, weeds, snowflakes, glaciers, small winds, plum blossoms, snowy roads and north wind crows. Every minute goes by, and I hope the flowers will bloom in spring. (blue)
3 "Tianjingsha" leaves spring breeze and green grass, and spring mountain ponds and green willows. The orioles are singing and dancing, and a hundred flowers are blooming, and those who flourish are in the end of the world. (Liu Yitong)
4 "Tianjingsha? In search of spring, new vines, green trees and red flowers, students go home from school. The park is full of vitality and sunset glow, and the road of spring is at your feet. (Li Ruize)
5 "Tianjingsha? In early spring, thunder rumbles and flowers bloom again. Birds sing from time to time, and early spring is a good time of the year. (Cao Yu Jie Rui)
6 "Tianjingsha? At night, the night is deep and the room is brightly lit, so I can't afford to sit down. Desperate, I don't know when to go home. (Li Runda)
7 "Tianjingsha?" "Spring Dream" Huayang green grass Zigui, stone bridge foothills, alley Dongfeng beautiful birds, spring day by day, travelers set sail on the road. (Zhai Huajie)
8 "Tianjingsha" green water and green hills, Chuyang, Shan Ye Trail, and barns. When the sun rises, the whole family is talking and laughing. (Zhu Haiyue)
9 "Tianjingsha? Homework "Chinese, Math and English, School-based History and Politics, one person starts to write." When the bell rang, the homework was finally finished. (Wang Zixuan)
10 "Tianjingsha? Spring resentment "green vines, green trees and old crows, small bridges and flowing water." "The ancient road is strong, Asahi was born in the east, and people are worried about the end of the world. (Peng Yuyang)
1 1 "Tianjingsha? On the night of Mid-Autumn Festival, the breeze blows, symbolizing our reunion, singing and dancing together. On the night of Mid-Autumn Festival, you and I enjoy the moon together. (Wang Shihao)
12 "Tianjingsha" Autumn wind, clear water, sunset, reading aloud after class, smiling in the evening breeze. At night, the wind falls and outsiders are on the road. (Zu Jinze)
13 "Tianjingsha? Beauty "slender spring breeze willow waves, graceful and elegant courtyard willow yellow." "The willows in Xia Zi curl up, the sun sets, the willow pond is beautiful and the moon is full. (Zou)
14 "Tianjingsha? In "Spring Thoughts", the new branches lead the rattan warbler back, and the old branches are strangled by the new willow. Flowers are flying in the east wind and butterflies, and the sun is rising in Ran Ran, thinking of old friends in the horizon. (Huang Yuxiang)
15 "Tianjingsha?" The hope of spring has new buds and tender willows, and the flowers are green and beautiful. The east wind steeds in the rain lane, the rising sun rises, and the sower is in the horizon. (Dai Le)
16 "Tianjingsha? Spring thoughts: new trees sprout, green mountains and green waters smoke. The spring breeze on the grassland is beautiful, and the sun is setting. The reunion people are all in their hometown. (Gu Jingbo)
17 "Tianjingsha? Xia Nian, a tree with green leaves and a bird, cook and cook. Livestock, chickens, cows and horses. In the morning, the whistle is opposite. (Lu) According to
18 "Tianjingsha" flowers and trees have fallen down, and farmland houses smoke. On warm days, the sky is high and the clouds are light, and at dusk, the farmer is still in the field. (Xu Tianyu)
19 "Tianjingsha" drizzle cotton grass spring flowers, rural grass house farmers, kites and piccolo dolls. The east wind blows, and hope fills people. (Li Jierui)
20 "Tianjingsha" clap your hands and laugh, Chinese, math, English, pour six dragons and sharks. Under the silver lamp, the redding people are fishing. (A?vagho?a JIU)
Ha ha ha ha, pony is killing me!
Xuesen:
1 "Tianjingsha?" "Spring" gathers begonia, peach blossoms, willow buds, butterflies, bees and grasshoppers. Spring rain falls and puddles are everywhere. (Liu Yuyao)
2 "Tianjingsha? Dinner: crab, turtle, prawn, lamb chop, roast duck, lettuce, vegetables and bean sprouts. As soon as the knife and fork fell, all the delicious food was in your mouth. (Liu Yuyao)
3 "Tianjingsha? The dead branches are broken with snow, and the snow outside the window is rustling. The north wind roared as if it were beating. As the cold sun sets, no one who comes home is homesick. (Panino)
4 "Tianjingsha? Spring scenery: the trees are tall and the vines are slender, the green buds are tender, the bridges are flowing, and the ducks are singing in the cutting-edge east wind. Sunset and sunset let travelers travel all over the world. (Yao)
5 "Tianjingsha? Outside dusk, sunset glow, autumn wind, falling flowers. One person, one book and one tea, autumn dusk, picturesque outside the department. (Xu ruoyu)
6 "Tianjingsha?" In spring, "the breeze is flowing, the warblers are sounding peach blossoms, and the Haitang oriole grass kite." Willow weeping willows, juvenile whip hoof. (Jia Anzhe)
7 "Tianjingsha? Fall in love with spring, spring breeze in Liu Xufei, flowers falling all over the world, picturesque mountains and rivers. If the hometown book is not updated, tourists will look to the horizon. (Zheng Xiner)
8 "Tianjingsha? In winter, Cangshan Mountain is windy and frosty, geese and swans soar, and the lonely moon flies in the snow and cold lanes. Sweet wintersweet, when will the old friend return? (Dai) according to
9 "Tianjingsha? Homesick autumn leaves are cold, lonely geese wander the sky, and the flute is melodious outside the window. Dreaming of going back to my hometown, a person was heartbroken in the sky. (Tang Mengyang)
10 "Tianjingsha" Spring Rain Breeze Cherry Blossoms, Small Pond Water Plants, Fish and Shrimp, Kite, Young Leaves. Spring is full, sitting alone under the cherry tree. (Yao Yuxi)
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12 "Tianjingsha" The breeze returns to the sunset, the pond ripples and frogs croak, and at dusk, under the buttonwood leaves. The years are picturesque, and it is summer in a blink of an eye. (Hu)
13 "Tianjingsha? Flowers bloom in early spring, in mid-spring, and catkins float in late spring. Looking around, it really looks like a beautiful dream. (Feng Yuxi)
14 "Tianjingsha? Spring is a colorful year, with small bridges flowing green hills and pear blossoms in the south of the Yangtze River. The weather is warm and sunny, and looking back, it is spring. (Zhu Yuxi)
15 "Tianjingsha? Qiu Si: Wild geese return at sunset, breeze, clear water, reeds, solitary boats and long rafts. When the sun goes down, the afterglow is perfect. (Yang) According to
16 "Tianjingsha? Sunshine: the morning sun raises hope, the sun shines at noon, and the sunset weaves heaven. Laughter and laughter echoed, and the past was vivid. (Lu Jiyang)
17 "Tianjingsha? At dusk, the wild geese return to dusk, the flowers by the pool fall in smoke, and the red clouds sing in the evening breeze. When the sun goes down, tourists look forward to the morning. (Zhu)
18 "Tianjingsha? Jiangnan water town: white walls and green water stone bridges, misty rain folk songs, willow lotus leaves and water chestnuts. Gradually drifting away, Jiangnan water town is very good. (Xing Junxi)
19 "Tianjingsha? Campus: In the early morning, birds are singing in the treetops, several fragrant flowers are in full bloom, and the sunset is on the grass playground. Walking in the garden keeps the heart clean. (Xiao Yulin)
20 "Tianjingsha? Moonlight night: The sun is setting, the bell is drizzling, the crow is faint, and it is difficult to sleep. How many stars are there in the month, and wanderers stay all over the world. (Xu Jiasheng)
2 1 "Tianjingsha? The path is gravel and fine sand, ginkgo, crape myrtle, green grass, dragonfly and butterfly, and red maple. Sunset, a scholar on campus. (Zhang Daze)
Finally, share a song written by teacher susu.
"Day crystal sand? autumn
Mountains in the distance, tall trees and sunset clouds,
Qiushuiyuan Sang Ma.
The long road is lonely,
Laughter and noise,
People in the pool appreciate the lotus flowers.