The theme of "Live Lyrics" is very extensive. It can be said that all poems about lyrical scenery can be classified into this category, whether homesickness, homesickness, farewell or war-weariness. Whether it's talking about fate, national disaster, expressing feelings, expressing feelings, etc., as long as you express your inner feelings through scenery description, it belongs to this category. The common expression of "live lyric poetry" is scene blending. Others personify by metaphor, contrast and contrast, or render by painting, or combine static and dynamic, virtual and real, or audio-visual and cadence. This kind of poetry has great appreciation value and is favored by college entrance examination questions.
Type one
How does this poem describe the scenery? Or what are the characteristics of this poem in writing landscapes? Please analyze the techniques of scenery description in this poem.
Solution thinking
(1) The order of scenery writing: from high to low, from far to near, from inside to outside, etc. The perspective includes looking down, looking up, looking down and close-up.
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(2) Mobilize the senses: such as vision (coloring), hearing (imitating sound), smell (smell) and touch (cold and warm).
(3) Application skills: rhetoric (metaphor, personification, exaggeration, etc. ), expression techniques (contrast, dynamic and static combination, combination of reality and reality)
Combination, point and surface combination, front description combination, line drawing, etc. ).
(4) Word training: verbs, adjectives, overlapping words, flexible words, etc.
Classic example
Read the following Tang poems and then answer this question.
Quatrain
Du Fu
Jiangshan bathed in spring, how beautiful, flowers send flowers.
Swallows are busy nesting in wet mud and sleeping in pairs on the warm beach.
(1) What are the characteristics of this poem in spring?
② The artistic technique of writing this poem.
The short quatrains of this poem's appreciation vividly depict the scenery in spring. The first two sentences give a general description of the splendid spring. Just ten words, including sunshine, mountains and rivers, spring breeze, flowers and their fragrance, arouse readers' senses to experience, feel and associate the beauty of spring. The last two sentences focus on swallows and mandarin ducks. Swallows fly high and low around the warm spring mud and nest in the mud, giving people a relaxed and happy feeling. The poet used the rhythmic words "always" and "cha-cha" to make this bright and complicated picture full of emotion. It also gives poetry a brighter and smoother rhythm. The language of the whole poem is full of colloquial colors, which makes people feel very cordial to read, and the heartfelt happiness that the poet feels in spring is also on the paper.
Reference answer
(1) Write about the vibrant and thriving nature in early spring.
(2) Hint: One or two sentences combine vision and smell, and three or four sentences combine movement.
Type 2
What kind of picture does this poem show? What kind of thoughts and feelings are expressed? Or what kind of scenery is depicted in the poem? Or what kind of artistic atmosphere does this poem create?
Solution thinking
(1) closely follow the poem text and vividly reproduce the poem picture with descriptive language. The image should be complete and the language should be as excellent as possible.
Beauty is vivid and should not be translated directly and rudely.
(2) According to the content of the picture, summarize the characteristics of artistic conception with one or several concise words, and point out these words.
What kind of emotional tone is laid for the whole poem and what kind of atmosphere is rendered.
(3) accurate use of technical terms, such as borrowing scenery to express feelings and setting colors against feelings.
The relationship between emotion and scenery is generally divided into three categories;
A to look at Syaraku's feelings. For example, Du Fu's "Jueju": the late Tianshan Mountains are beautiful, and the spring breeze is fragrant with flowers and plants.
Swallows are busy nesting in wet mud and sleeping in pairs on the warm beach. B Write a sad mood with a sad scene. For example, in Du Fu's "Ascending the Mountain", apes sob from the vast sky in the strong wind, and birds fly home on the clear lake and white beach.
The endless trees are rustling leaves, and the Yangtze River is rolling unpredictably.
C set off sadness with music scenes. For example, Du Fu's quatrains: Jiang Bi's bird is too white, and the mountain blue flowers are burning. I watched it again this spring. When is the year of return?
(4) According to the characteristics of the situational atmosphere, pay attention to the key words expressed in the poem and the background introduction in the notes, and reasonably analyze the poet's thoughts and feelings.
Classic example
Read the following poem and ask questions after the question.
Wang yue
Du Fu
What a magnificent scenery Mount Tai is! Out of Qilu, green peaks can still be seen.
The magical nature brings together thousands of beautiful mountains in the south and the separation between morning and dusk in the north.
Caiyun lave? My mind is free and easy, and birds fly back and forth in front of my nervous eyes. ..
Try to climb to the top of the mountain: it dwarfs all the peaks under our feet.
(1) has a "hope", but every sentence is written in a clear hierarchy. Try to make a brief analysis.
(2) Naruto Mo Ruzhong commented on the following sentence of the first couplet: "Qilu is still young, who can write poems after Ling Du?" Think nothing of this poem.
What do you think of someone who can continue?
(3) Later generations praised this poem as a "swan song" with profound ideological significance. Please make a brief analysis of this.
Reference answer
(1) The whole poem is about looking at Yue, with the distance from far to near, and the time from morning till night, which is associated with the future through looking at Yue.
Deng Yue When I first saw Mount Tai, I was very happy. I didn't know how to describe my amazing admiration. It was very vivid. Then answer it yourself. Zhuan Xu wrote two sentences about the magical beauty and lofty image of Mount Tai, which is the footnote of the last sentence "Unfinished Youth". The two poems of the Neck Couplet are carefully written and contain the poet's love for the motherland and mountains and rivers. Write two sentences about seeing Yue, and you will have the will to climb Yue.
(2) "The greenery is dripping, and the land is high." It is the answer that the poet got after he figured it out, which can be described as a stunning sentence. Neither abstract nor abstract.
To say that Mount Tai is high is not to describe it in general terms like Xie Lingyun's "Cui Bi stung the sky", but to write his own experience in an ingenious way-you can still see Mount Tai from a distance outside the two ancient countries of Qilu, and set off the height of Mount Tai with distance. Mount Tai is the land in the south and the Qi in the north, so this sentence describes the geographical characteristics and cannot be used when writing about other mountains.
(3) Later generations called this poem the swan song of Du Fu's poetry because of its last couplet. "once you climb to the top of the mountain and peek, you will see that other mountains are short under the sky ..."
This sentence is enlightening and symbolic, from which we can see the poet's ambition and spirit of not being afraid of difficulties, daring to reach the top and overlooking everything. This is the key to Du Fu becoming a great poet and everything.
It is indispensable for people who have done something. This is why these two poems have been told by people for thousands of years, and they can still arouse our strong * * *.
Poetry Development Practice of "Writing Scenery and Expressing Emotion"
1. Read the following poem and answer this question.
Say goodbye to Hu Xing 'an at night.
He Xun
People living in the city turned to poetry, and the guests kept the boat for the time being.
Look at this feast and laugh in two places.
Dew wets the grass in the cold pond, and the bright moon reflects the Huai River.
Fang holds a new hatred and stays alone in his hometown in autumn.
Note: It refers to Hu Xing 'an who saw me off. Hang Shi Zhuan: I'll bring the car back. V: bolt,