From my perspective, in terms of artistic conception, I recommend the first song. The reason is: not only is the hidden head good, but the artistic conception is also very flavorful! (If you read it carefully, it seems to have a bit of rhyme. Haha.) But this poem also has shortcomings: there are typos, and hanging means suicide (that is, the ancient method of hanging with gauze or cloth or satin), it should Yes: self-restraint. The whole poem is too empty and has no real sense.
Looking at the second song: the first two sentences seem very bland, but the realistic and prominent situation is also created, which can be said to be well combined. The last two sentences shape and strengthen the artistic conception based on the first two sentences. They can be said to be the highlight of the whole poem! Although the artistic conception of this work is slightly worse than the first one, judging from the overall wording and sentences of the poem, the second one is indeed better than the first one!
The third song: a bland work, without any artistic conception, but the combination of words is still good. It's a pity that there is only a jade pot, not a jade lake. The author's original intention here was to create some artistic conception, but as a result, the sentences were not well matched, resulting in the whole work being lifeless! A failure!
Finally, to summarize: the first song has a good artistic conception but is empty.
The second song has the best overall sense among the three. The words and sentences are well matched, and the artistic conception is also outstanding. In terms of overall comprehensive review, I recommend the second song! The third song is too bland, with no artistic conception and no scenery. Although I have worked hard on the matching of words, the overall sentence does not have any characteristics at all. It is a failure!
By the way, I seriously despise poems created using so-called high-tech software! Thanks!