"If you want to learn poetry, you should put your energy into the world outside poetry.": If you want to learn to write poetry, you should put your energy into the world outside poetry. That is to say, when learning to write poetry, you should not just study poetry, but should focus on mastering profound knowledge and participating in social practice.
Word definition:
Ru: You.
Kung Fu: The energy and time spent doing something. Also known as "work".
This sentence comes from "Shi Ziyu" written by Lu You, a writer in the Song Dynasty, to teach his son Lu Xun how to write poems. The main idea of ??the poem is: when he first wrote poems, he only knew how to use words, techniques, and techniques. I worked hard on the form, but only in my middle age did I realize that this approach was wrong. Poetry should focus on content and artistic conception, and should reflect the people's requirements and emotions. Lu You said in another poem, "What you see on paper will eventually be shallow, but you will definitely know that you have to practice it." It can be seen that the so-called "kung fu lies outside poetry" means to emphasize "practicing" and to engage in extensive activities in life. Broaden your horizons.
The original poem is as follows:
"Shi Zi Dun"
I have just begun to learn poetry, but I want to start painting; The less you realize, the more you glimpse the grandeur.
Strange things also appear from time to time, like stones washing over a turbulent sea.
Counting Ren Li and Du Qiang, I often regret not understanding.
Yuan Bai was leaning against the door, Wen Li was really sitting there.
Even when I ordered my pen to carry the cauldron, I did not create samadhi.
Poetry is one of the six arts, so why should it be cunning? If you want to learn poetry, your time lies in poetry.
If you want to learn poetry, you should put effort into poetry.
Kung fu in poetry means learning to compose poetry. You should not just study poetry from poetry, but should put your effort into mastering profound knowledge. knowledge and participate in social practice.
"Kung Fu lies beyond poetry" was originally a line from a poem written by Lu You, a great poet of the Song Dynasty, when he taught one of his sons the experience of writing poetry one year before his death.
The main idea of ??the poem is: When he first wrote poems, he only knew how to work hard on rhetoric, technique, and form. It was only in middle age that he realized that this approach was wrong. Poems should focus on content and artistic conception, and should reflect the people. requirements and emotions.
Lu You also said in another poem, "What you read on paper will eventually become shallow, but you will definitely know that you have to do it.
" We can know that the so-called "Kung Fu lies outside poetry" , that is, to emphasize "doing one's best", to explore extensively in life, and to broaden one's horizons.
Once, I listened to an old professor talking about education.
He said: A teacher must really do a good job in the educational work he is engaged in and do it at a high level. In fact, the skill lies beyond poetry.
This old man with a lot of talents all over the world has a view of "education - Kung Fu lies beyond poetry", which gives people a refreshing feeling and left a very deep impression on me.
"Kung Fu lies beyond poetry" was originally a line from a poem written by Lu You, a great poet of the Song Dynasty, when he taught one of his sons the experience of writing poetry one year before his death.
The main idea of ??the poem is: When he first wrote poems, he only knew how to work hard on rhetoric, technique, and form. It was only in middle age that he realized that this approach was wrong. Poems should focus on content and artistic conception, and should reflect the people. requirements and emotions.
Lu You also said in another poem, "What you read on paper will eventually become shallow, but you will definitely know that you have to do it.
" We can know that the so-called "Kung Fu lies outside poetry" , that is, to emphasize "doing one's best", to explore extensively in life, and to broaden one's horizons.
Talk about the poem "If you want to learn poetry, the effort lies in poetry." What inspiration does this poem have for your future writing? ...
"If you want to learn poetry, the effort lies in poetry."
Once, I listened to an old professor talking about education.
He said: A teacher must really do a good job in the educational work he is engaged in and do it at a high level. In fact, the skill lies beyond poetry.
? This old man with a lot of talents all over the world has a refreshing view of "education - kung fu lies beyond poetry", which left a very deep impression on me.
? "Kung Fu lies beyond poetry" was originally a line from a poem written by Lu You, a great poet of the Song Dynasty, when he taught one of his sons the experience of writing poetry one year before his death.
The main idea of ??the poem is: When he first wrote poems, he only knew how to work hard on rhetoric, technique, and form. It was only in middle age that he realized that this approach was wrong. Poems should focus on content and artistic conception, and should reflect the people. requirements and emotions.
Lu You also said in another poem, "What you read on paper will eventually become shallow, but you will definitely know that you have to do it.
" We can know that the so-called "Kung Fu lies outside poetry" , that is, to emphasize "doing one's best", to explore extensively in life, and to broaden one's horizons.
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Let’s talk about if you want to learn poetry, your skills lie in poetry. What inspiration does this poem have for your future writing?
Shi Zijun, I am a beginner in poetry, but I want to learn poetry. Gongzao Hua; I started to realize little in my middle age, and gradually I felt like I had a glimpse of the grandeur.
Strange things also appear from time to time, like stones washing over the turbulent sea.
Counting Ren Li and Du Qiang, I often regret not understanding.
Yuan Bai was leaning against the door, Wen Li was really sitting there.
Even when I ordered my pen to carry the cauldron, I did not create samadhi.
Poetry is one of the six arts, so why should it be cunning? If you want to learn poetry, your time lies in poetry.
If you want to learn poetry, your skills lie in poetry.
What does it mean?
For most students, composition is undoubtedly a very painful process.
In their own words, "It took me a long time to make up an article.
"The word "hold" shows how much embarrassment; How helpless it is! People should be able to write, because writing is not too difficult. It is just an expression of feelings and the appearance of thoughts.
You see, the ancestors who lived in the era of "The Book of Songs" had not received education, let alone learned to write, but they could write poems; there were also the famous writer Shen Congwen and the Bashu ghost Wei Minglun. They had never read any books, and could not even get a primary school diploma. Naturally, no one taught them how to write, but their works were truly moving and full of literary talent.
But why can’t our students write? I started learning writing in the third grade of elementary school, and it took six or seven years until I was in the fourth grade of junior high school. In such a long time, the protracted Anti-Japanese War was almost over, but I still hadn’t learned such a small thing as writing. As a result, some students feel as if they are in danger when they hear that they have to write a composition. Isn't this strange? Is this a problem with our education? Reflecting on our composition teaching, I suddenly shuddered - our students are not born unable to write, but learn how to write through reading and studying! Think of the lessons our students receive from us.
First of all, thoughts are imprisoned.
Human thoughts are naturally active, especially in childhood and adolescence. Their thoughts are like birds in the sky, able to fly freely; and like galloping horses on the grassland, they can gallop as they please. .
When you are among children, you will often be amazed by the tiny pink lips.
In their eyes, stars can cook, tadpoles can think, the sun has a mouth, and the wind has colors... But for a long time, our education, especially the teachers in writing classes, have been diligent in putting their Thoughts were tightly locked up.
Before writing an article, the teacher repeatedly explained that it should express positive themes, embody noble and pure sentiments, show beautiful hearts, expose ugly ideas, and talk about unity, friendship, selflessness, and civilization. Be polite, sacrifice yourself to save others, etc., and then start writing.
With these constraints, who can still think freely, and who can let their hearts fly? "Cogito ergo sum".
Descartes said; "Our whole dignity lies only in our thoughts.
" Pascal also said the same; even Mr. Lu Xun often "suddenly thought of" and then remembered What he thinks.
While our "obedient" children learned to be obedient, they also learned to follow blindly and follow others' opinions. As a result, they gradually lost their independent thinking, the ability to independently express their thoughts, and their ability to write. Ability.
The second is that true feelings are suppressed.
The composition you just started is just an expression of your true feelings, a carrier to express your true emotions and attitudes.
And human childhood and adolescence are the periods when emotions are richest and develop most rapidly: the desire for understanding, the melancholy of being misunderstood, the pride after playing a prank, the anger after being teased, The joy of being accepted, the pain of being rejected, the collision of souls, the entanglement of contradictions... Every minute they have emotional waves rising and falling, waves splashing.
If they are allowed to express their feelings freely, they are likely to write beautiful articles.
It is a pity that our teachers often evaluate students’ compositions with the freshness of life from the perspective of adults. They always use such a philosophy and such experience to “guide” students, but it is precisely Ignoring the most important point - understanding, not to mention some students' naive or even extreme compositions, it makes the teacher feel like he is facing a powerful enemy, and he will always get a profound and cold teaching.
As a result, the students’ distress cannot be released, and their happiness has no one to share it with.
However, those compositions that are made up or plagiarized are often praised by teachers.
As a result, true feelings are gone, but compositions writing about false things and expressing false feelings have sprung up in endlessly.
Third, literary thought is suppressed.
Writing should actually be like walking, unfettered: walking in square steps, taking small steps, jumping forward, and jumping backward; while walking, you can pick flowers and pick up stones. Son, listen to the chirping of birds and look at butterflies; when taking a walk, you can let your thoughts fly and explore the world.
But if someone really comes to teach you how to walk, tell you how to put your left foot out, how to step your right foot, how to place your left hand, and how to put your right hand when walking, you will definitely learn it. There will be no more walks.
The same goes for writing. The teacher always "patiently" tells you how to start, how to end, how to transition in the middle, how to foreshadow, how to set up suspense, how to echo the beginning and the end, and some even sum up like this Such a series of secrets and mental methods.
Well, as soon as you pick up the pen, your mind is filled with how to do this and that. Do you still have the thoughts to compose? Of course, we are not saying that we don’t need necessary guidance on writing skills, but the most important thing is the idea, the theme, and the technique and form always come second, right? Otherwise, wouldn’t we be back to the era of eight-legged essays? Zheng Yuanjie, the king of fairy tales, once said that he recently sat in on half a class teaching children how to write. "I was shocked when I heard it. Almost all the teacher said were words that would make it impossible for people to write good articles in this life.
< p> "He said: "When I teach my son, I don't teach writing, but train six parts: eyes, nose, mouth, ears, hands and feet.Anyone who can write good articles. With keen observation and unique perspective, I will tell you how to train your eyes into eagle eyes
Then the nose, and so on
The six parts. After that, the children will be able to write essays
"Reflect on our composition teaching.
Needless to say, the composition teaching over the years has been deformed in concept and stereotyped in practice.
As a result, students’ writing thinking is rigid and superficial; they follow everyone else’s opinions, and their individuality is lost; their language is boring and monotonous.
They are all like standard parts produced on an assembly line. They are lifeless and have no personality.
This is a dead end in teaching composition.
Mr. Yu Qiuyu once said: In the final analysis, composition training is the training of expression and communication between life and life.
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These words pointed out the root cause of composition teaching-...
Cui Hao's "Yellow Crane Tower" was rewritten as a composition
The sun was shining brightly and the sky was blue.
In a trance, the immortals in the trees on the north bank of the Han River have flown away on the Yellow Crane, leaving only an empty Yellow Crane Tower; the Yellow Crane never came back and became a long-missed building. My beloved, standing in front of me.
The warm sunshine filled the river, warming my loved ones.
Suddenly, a man walking upright and drumming came from the grass on Parrot Island. Mi Heng, who scolded Cao Cao, faced Huang Zu's butcher's knife and looked down upon death, spilling his blood on the green grass. It was the selfless dedication soaked in blood and tears of countless wanderers who built countless unforgettable hometowns.
< p> The sun sets, the night comes, the birds return to their nests, the boats return to sail, and the wanderers return to their hometowns. But where is the hometown of the wandering children? The fog on the river is misty, and there is a thick fog in the eyes. Then It is a kind of faint tears and a broad sense of nostalgia for the people all over the world. When you ask about hometown, you don’t say anything, and when you miss your hometown, you don’t see it.Faced with this situation, there is no reason for anyone not to feel homesick.
p>He couldn't help but recite a poem: The legendary immortal flew away on the Yellow Crane long ago, leaving only the empty Yellow Crane Tower.
The flying Yellow Crane can never return. Only the long white clouds have remained unchanged for thousands of years.
The green trees of Hanyang Qingchuan Pavilion are still visible, and the fragrant grass of Parrot Island grows densely. At dusk, I don’t know where is my hometown? The vast river is worrying!
Homemade modern poetry!
China is a country of poetry. , and as a member of the poetic nation, we must have an indissoluble bond with poetry.
However, what is poetry? How to write poetry has become a mystery that we cannot solve. We are teenagers who are full of yearning for poetry but are often rejected by it.
So how can we approach poetry and how can we make poetry embellish our youth? This is what I want to talk about below. .
1. What is poetry? If someone asks me what poetry is, maybe I can only answer this: "I know what kind of words are poetry, and I also know what kind of words are not." Poetry, but I don’t know what poetry is.
"Poetry has no definition.
But at least you have to have a rough idea! Yes, in fact, poetry is not mysterious. Anything that is sentimental and beautiful is poetry.
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Simply put, mental image (emotion) + physical image (beauty) = poetry
For example: thin branches are like wires; small yellow flowers are like lights. Glowing electric lights; the earth is like a power plant in spring
(Zhang Shiyun's "Spring Flowers") In this poem, "branches", "yellow flowers" and "earth" are mental images, and "wires". ", "electric light", and "power plant" are objects. Such wonderful poems are because after seeing the green branches and yellow flowers in spring, I feel a love for the spring of the earth, and then through imagination, I imagine the images in my heart. Metaphors are created by combining emotion and beauty skillfully.
Of course, this is not a fixed pattern of poetry. Poetry is free and diverse.
To truly know and understand poetry, we still need to understand it through long-term reading and creation.
2. Basic characteristics of modern poetry For the creation of modern poetry, we must first understand the characteristics of modern poetry. This is extremely important for us to learn to create modern poetry. Only by knowing the enemy can we be victorious.
Modern poetry is a group of sentences arranged with modern words and phrases based on the modern emotions felt by modern people in modern life.
Therefore, modern poetry is about feelings about the era we live in, and it is written in modern language (that is, modern Chinese, not classical Chinese) - this is the most basic aspect of modern poetry. specialty.
In addition, compared to junior high school students, modern poetry has the following important characteristics: 1. In terms of content: beautiful imagination, seeing the extraordinary in the ordinary; 2. In terms of thought: writing Move people's affection.
That is to say, personal emotions and experiences should be added; 3. In terms of format: it should be divided into lines, which can be divided into lines according to sentences or according to content.
After understanding the basic characteristics of modern poetry, we can start to try to create it. So what must we pay attention to when creating it? 3. How to write poetry? Poetry is beautiful. To make ordinary things shine with beauty, we must use imagination.
Imagination is the source of beauty and the warehouse of poetry.
A good imagination is a poem in itself.
For example: Open your big mouth and serve the people.
(He Zhou's "Scissors").
Only by using imagination can we create distinctive images. The vitality of poetry is given by imagination. Without imagination, the poems written will be dry.
Imagination can make a small thing show amazing charm.
For example: Flowers in the corner, when you admire them alone, the world becomes smaller.
(Bing Xin's "Stars") Flowers growing in the corner are ordinary and easily ignored by people. If they only appreciate their own beauty, they will become even smaller.
The poet here uses imagination and metaphors of flowers to derive extraordinary truth from an ordinary thing.
Without imagination, it is impossible to write such inspiring verses.
Secondly, the sentiment of poetry must be true, and only true things can be beautiful.
You must be able to find content that moves you from life, and then express it in the language and form of poetry.
Only in this way can people resonate with the soul and make the poem meaningful.
For example: You are so small running in the dark night... But even though you are a small insect, you still want to make the night a little brighter (Bu Cong's "Fireflies"). The little poet is full of emotions at the end of the poem. The line "But even though I am a small insect / I still want to let the night have a little more light" - an affectionate eulogy for the devotees.
But such poems need to be experienced from the heart to come out.
If the little poet had not carefully observed the fireflies, had not used his heart to have a dialogue with the fireflies, and had not put himself into the fireflies to experience the life and life of the fireflies, he would not have been able to write such a vigilant story. Poetry comes from.
With the wings of imagination, the power of emotion and the beauty of poetry will emerge.
But we must be clear that the format of poetry is also an issue that must be paid attention to. In addition to writing according to content and lines or sentences, especially in the organization of language.
Mainly manifested in two aspects: one is the use of rhetoric; the other is breaking the conventional combinations.
Flexible use of various rhetoric can enhance the vitality of poetry, and boldly breaking conventional combinations (that is, not matching according to grammatical requirements) can achieve unexpected effects, but it should not be too excessive.
Rhetoric is an important technique in poetry.
Including personification, metaphor, parallelism, questioning, repetition, thimble, duality, exaggeration, symbolism, etc.
It can be said that every expression technique has its own uniqueness.
The use of ratio can express the content of poetry more vividly and vividly.
The use of xing can allow readers to understand the artistic conception of the poem from the beginning, making the poem more affectionate and charming; and the use of exaggeration, symbolism, synaesthesia and other techniques can inject fresh blood into the poem , making the poems more imaginative and approachable without making people feel that the meaning is ambiguous or obscure, allowing readers to truly understand the thoughts and feelings the author wants to express.
Symbolism is the use of specific things to express a special meaning. This is the most commonly used technique in poetry.
For example, Bing Xin's "Paper Boat" symbolizes the longing for her mother, and Feng Zhi's "I Am a Little River" in which the "little river" symbolizes the pursuit of love.
Usually we also like to use symbols, such as using "plum blossoms" to symbolize perseverance and "candles" to symbolize silent dedication.
In "Beyond the Mountain" by Wang Jiaxin, "sea" and "mountain" are used to symbolize "ideal" and "difficulties and setbacks encountered in pursuing ideals."
Do you know the commonly used symbolic meanings of the following objects? Sun, bees, flies, mosquitoes, snowflakes? (Brightness, selfless devotion, filth, exploitation, purity).
The use of other techniques will not be discussed in detail with examples one by one. We need to continue to learn to use them in the creative process.
We also mentioned above that poetry has other aspects in the organization of language...
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