1. A composition adapted from He Zhizhang's "Ode to the Willow"
In spring, by the beautiful lake, the willow trees stand tall and graceful, their slender young leaves glowing with green light. Looking from a distance, it looks like a tree of green gems, and like little eyes watching everything around it.
The willow branches are no less beautiful, with low eyebrows and pleasing to the eye. They are lingering and lingering, like a graceful beauty, swinging their long hair.
Several swallows drew beautiful arcs in the air, whispering, as if dancing in the beautiful spring light.
Beside the lake, people were enjoying their spring outings freely, either in pairs or in groups. It was not easy to be happy. A scholar-like person was particularly eye-catching. He was He Zhizhang. He is thin and fair-skinned. He wears a bamboo hat, carries a bag on his back, and walks briskly. He saw strands of wicker, and wondered who cut it?
Oh~! It turns out that it was cut by the spring breeze in February. The spring breeze in February is like a pair of magical scissors, cutting the willow leaves so beautifully~The spring of the motherland is so joyful~~! !
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!!!! 2. Change "Ode to the Willows" into a composition
Spring has arrived quietly.
The willow tree that had slept by the stream all winter finally woke up. She stretched her waist and dressed herself up carefully.
She slowly combed her long hair with the spring breeze, and pinned the light green hairpins carefully and meticulously. The hairpins are so delicate and beautiful. She pinned them so carefully and placed them just right, making her hair look as beautiful as silk ribbons.
Willow sticks and willow leaves wrap the tree trunk, like a piece of light green and delicate jade, without any flaws. Willow lowered her head and looked at the spring mirror in front of her, probably admiring her beautiful hair! A small fish raised its head out of the water, opening and closing its mouth as if praising the soft hair of the willow tree.
Another soft spring breeze blew gently across the willow tree's cheeks, and her hair was flying in the wind, making her more charming and beautiful. Spring has arrived quietly. 3. Rewrite Ode to the Willows into a 500-word composition describing the scenery
Spring has arrived quietly.
The willow tree that had slept by the stream all winter finally woke up. She stretched her waist and dressed herself up carefully.
She slowly combed her long hair with the spring breeze, and pinned the light green hairpins carefully and meticulously. The hairpins are so delicate and beautiful. She pinned them so carefully and placed them just right, making her hair look as beautiful as silk ribbons. Willow sticks and willow leaves wrap the tree stem, like a piece of light green and delicate jade, without a trace of flaw.
Willow lowered his head and looked at the spring mirror in front of him, probably admiring his beautiful hair! A small fish raised its head out of the water, opening and closing its mouth as if praising the soft hair of the willow tree. Another soft spring breeze blew gently across the willow tree's cheeks, and her hair was flying in the wind, making her more charming and beautiful.
Spring has arrived quietly. 4. A composition adapted from He Zhizhang's "Yong Willow"
Adapted from "Yong Willow"
Class 2, Grade 6, Qixia Experimental Middle School, Shandong Province; Zhang Naiqian
Early spring February.
The poet He Zhizhang walked by the pond and admired the spring scenery.
A gust of wind blew, and a wisp of willow leaves touched his head.
He was fascinated by the willow tree.
Once a year, the willow tree grows new green leaves, drooping, with a charming will in the spring breeze.
"Ah!" He Zhizhang sighed, "What a beautiful girl!"
As a result, these thousands of strands of drapery became the poet's heart. The straps of her skirt were removed, highlighting Tingting's slender grace.
Ah, spring is so beautiful, everything is revived and full of vitality.
The poet is thinking, what makes spring so beautiful?
The spring breeze blows gently.
The willows floated up, the grass fell down, and the flowers laughed.
By the way, the beautiful spring breeze is the spring breeze that creates tender green flowers and plants and puts new clothes on the earth. The spring breeze is the symbol of natural vitality and the inspiration of beauty that spring brings to people.
He Zhizhang was intoxicated, extremely addicted.
In the evening, he went home.
Source of this composition: Composition.com 5. Write and rewrite the ending of the composition "Yong Liu"
"Yong Liu", look, the green curtain slowly opened.
The continuous spring rain is like silver threads, spreading to the world. At this time, the earth began to come alive.
The first ones to turn green were the pine trees, and then the poplars and willows all sprouted new buds.
On the grass, the roses are dressed in bright red costumes, as if they are competing with spring; the winter jasmine waves its little hands, reporting the good news of spring to people; the rose flowers smile with red cheeks, dancing with spring...
In the creek, the sound of gurgling water is as clear and sweet as ***, the water is crystal clear, and a few small fish swim freely. Not far from the creek, the tall willow trees are covered with new green leaves, which seem to be decorated.
Thousands of soft willow trees, like hanging green ribbons, are gently swaying in the spring breeze, swaying gently in the air. Looking from a distance, they look like clouds of smoke blowing in the wind. . Who cut the beautiful and lovely thin leaves? It turns out that the spring breeze in February seems to be a clever scissor for cutting thin leaves, making spring more beautiful.
So many green leaves grow on the branches in clusters, leaving no gaps. With a simple and tenacious pioneer attitude, it has dedicated its youth to the motherland. 6. Rewrite the ending of the composition "Yong Willow"
"Yong Willow"
Look, the green curtain slowly opened. The continuous spring rain is like silver threads, spreading to the world. At this time, the earth began to come alive. The first ones to turn green were the pine trees, and then the poplars and willows all sprouted new buds. On the grass, the roses are dressed in bright red costumes, as if they are competing with spring; the winter jasmine waves its little hands, reporting the good news of spring to people; the rose flowers smile with red cheeks, dancing with spring... In the creek, the sound of gurgling water is as clear and sweet as ***, the water is crystal clear, and a few small fish swim freely. Not far from the creek, the tall willow trees are covered with new green leaves, which seem to be decorated. Thousands of soft willow trees, like hanging green ribbons, are gently swaying in the spring breeze, swaying gently in the air. Looking from a distance, they look like clouds of smoke blowing in the wind. Who cut the beautiful and lovely thin leaves? It turns out that the spring breeze in February seems to be a clever scissor for cutting thin leaves, making spring more beautiful. There are so many green leaves growing on the branches in clusters, leaving no gaps. With a simple and tenacious pioneer attitude, it has dedicated its youth to the motherland. 7. How to write a sample essay on "Ode to the Willows"
Throughout his life, He Zhizhang, a poet of the Tang Dynasty, liked to drink and write poems, and he also liked to visit mountains and rivers in his spare time. On this day, he came to a beautiful place. In the small countryside, that night, he stayed at a small inn.
The next day, there were a few white clouds floating in the blue sky, and the sky was clear. He Zhizhang got up early in the morning, opened the window, and a burst of fresh air hit his nostrils. The beautiful scenery in front of the window made him intoxicated.
He went downstairs in a happy mood and met the waiter at the top of the stairs. The waiter said: "Master He, how did you sleep last night?" He Zhizhang (stroking his beard) said: "Not bad, what's the good scenery?" The waiter said: "Sir, we have a lot of beautiful scenery here, it's not far away. There is a Swan Lake everywhere. It has beautiful scenery. You must go and see it."
He Zhizhang said, "That's great, I'll go right away." He walked slowly towards the lake. , the green grass danced in front of his eyes, and the beautiful flowers smiled at him. He Zhizhang became very interested in poetry, and recited poems as he walked. Suddenly, he stepped on a pile of soft cows. Shit, he couldn't stand firmly and fell down.
Not only was he not angry, he even wrote a limerick, "If you step into it, you will just fall. If anyone dares to laugh at me again, you will be covered in cow dung and stink to death." At this time, A shepherd boy riding an old ox came from a distance. He Zhizhang asked: "How can I get to Swan Lake?" The shepherd boy said: "Sir, just walk one mile to the west."
He Zhizhang walked. , suddenly his eyes lit up, and a majestic white pagoda stood in front of him. There were several farmhouses next to the pagoda, and smoke was floating on the roofs of the farmhouses. Under the pagoda is the beautiful Swan Lake. There are a few ducks on the mirror-like lake, and they are playing happily.
There is a strange willow tree by the lake. This willow tree seems to be made of jade, and its green willow branches dance in the wind on the lake. ah! Who cut these thin green leaves? It turns out that the spring breeze in February is a pair of scissors.
He Zhizhang wrote a poem "Ode to the Willow" out of emotion: the jasper made up a tree as high as a tree, and thousands of green silk ribbons hung down. I don’t know who cuts out the thin leaves. The spring breeze in February is like scissors.
Hope this helps. 8. How to convert the poem "Ode to the Willow" into a composition
A little practice writing "Ode to the Willow" In spring, by the beautiful lake, the willow trees stand tall and graceful, their slender leaves glowing with green light, far away From a distance, it looks like a tree of green gems, and like little eyes watching everything around it.
The willow branches are no less beautiful, with low eyebrows and pleasing to the eye. They are lingering and lingering, like a graceful beauty, swinging their long hair. A few swallows drew beautiful arcs in the air, whispering, as if dancing in the beautiful spring light.
Beside the lake, people were enjoying their spring outings freely, either in pairs or in groups. It was not easy to be happy. A scholar-like person was particularly eye-catching. He was He Zhizhang. He is thin and fair-skinned. He wears a bamboo hat, carries a bag on his back, and walks briskly.
He saw strands of wicker, and he thought who cut it? Oh~! It turns out that it was cut by the spring breeze in February. The spring breeze in February is like a pair of magical scissors, cutting the willow leaves so beautifully~The spring of the motherland is so joyful~~! . 9. The ancient poem "Ode to the Willows" was rewritten into 400 words
"Ode to the Willows" by He Zhizhang of the Tang Dynasty
The jasper is made up to the height of a tree, and thousands of green silk ribbons hang down.
I don’t know who cuts out the thin leaves. The spring breeze in February is like scissors.
The willows in early spring and February are new and charming. So where should I start when writing about Yangliu? There is no doubt that its beauty lies in its long and draping branches. Once a year, it grows new green leaves, drooping, and has a charming attitude in the spring breeze. The beauty's slender figure and graceful waist are so fascinating. "Jasper makes up a tree as tall as a tree". From the beginning, willow appears as a beauty; "Ten thousand green silk ribbons hang down", and these thousands of draping silks also become her skirt. The word "high" brings out the graceful grace of the beauty Tingting; the word "hang" suggests the slender waist flowing in the wind. There are no words "willow" and "waist branch" in the poem, but the weeping willows in early spring and the beauty incarnated by the willow trees are vividly depicted. "Southern History" said that Liu Zhizhi, the governor of Yizhou, presented several willow trees, "the strips are very long and look like strands of silk." Emperor Wu of Qi planted these willows in front of the Yunzuo Palace in Taichang. He admired them and said they were "romantic and cute." ". The wicker is referred to as "green silk ribbon" here, which may be a metaphor for this famous allusion about willow. But this is chemical use, and no trace can be seen.
"Jasper makeup" leads to "green silk ribbon", "green silk ribbon" leads to "who cut it", and finally, the invisible and elusive "spring breeze" is also used. "Like scissors" is vividly depicted. These "scissors" cut out green and bright red flowers and plants, giving the earth a new look. It is the symbol of natural vitality and the inspiration of beauty that spring brings to people. From "jasper makeup" to "scissors", we can see a series of processes of the poet's artistic conception. The series of images that appear in the poem are closely linked to each other.
Some people may wonder: There were many famous beauties in ancient my country, Liu, why are they only compared with jasper? I think this has two meanings: First, the name Biyu is related to the color of willow. "Bi" and "green" in the next sentence are complementary to each other. Second, Biyu will always leave a youthful impression in people's minds. Speaking of Jasper, people will think of the widely circulated "Jasper Song" "When Jasper Breaks the Melon", as well as poems such as "Jasper's Little House Girl". Jasper has almost become a general term for young and beautiful women in ancient literary works. Comparing willow with jasper, people will imagine that this beauty has not yet reached the prime of beauty; this willow is still a young willow in early spring, when there are no dense leaves hiding crows; and the following "thin leaves" and "February spring breeze" "There is a connection again.
"Jasper makes up a tree as high as a tree" refers to the whole, saying that the tall willow tree looks like it is made up of jasper. "Jasper" is used to describe the emerald green of the willow tree, highlighting the beauty of its color. "Ten thousand green silk ribbons hanging down" refers to willow branches, saying that the drooping willow branches are like thousands of ribbons, highlighting its softness and beauty. "I wonder who cuts the thin leaves" refers to willow leaves, highlighting the delicate and delicate shape of the willow leaves. The three lines of poetry are divided into various parts of the willow tree, and each line has its own characteristics. The third sentence and the fourth sentence form a hypothetical question. "I wonder who cuts out the thin leaves?" - Ask yourself; "The spring breeze in February is like scissors." - Answer to yourself. With this question and answer, the willow tree subtly transitions to the spring breeze. Speaking of cutting these delicate willow leaves, of course you can also cut green and bright red flowers and plants. It is a symbol of natural vitality and the creativity of spring. This poem praises the willow tree and then praises spring, eulogizing the infinite creativity of spring.