The ideas of poetry are piled up.

It's too wordy to say "spend a lot of money" first and then "draw a grand plan". "Xing Yun Zhi Yu zui Xian Weng" has no other meaning except drinking (this has been said before), and this sentence is redundant; Is this a reunion or a reunion?

In addition, the sentences that should be at the end of the rhyme are flat and even, such as "picture" and "Weng", which are very uncomfortable to read, so don't say anything about other metrical patterns.

The overall feeling is too sloppy, so it is better to simplify it into a quatrain.

Catch a toad, study ink, stir up the breeze,

Fighting wine is poetic.

The sound of a song will eventually dissipate,

He will discuss who is a hero again.