Seagulls spread their wings and flew.
Little snail drips and blows.
The waves smiled slightly.
Little snail drips and blows.
It's time to call the boat home
Little snail drips and blows.
Dad, come back soon after hearing this.
Endless beach
Blue sea water
wind
The beauty in my heart ... "
The teacher led us to appreciate Li's Little Snail, Little Conch, Little Kelp, Little Fish on the Beach, The Beach from Gu Cheng, Naughty Sea from Zheng Chunhua and Sleeping Sea from Liu Ruomin.
Teacher Li told us a story. A little boy kept sending light rain back to the sea on the beach. A man asked, "How can you send so much rain back to the sea by yourself?"
"This little fish cares! This little fish also cares! " The little boy sent the little fish to the sea and said, "I care about this one!" " "
In teacher Li's story, we read the truth, goodness and beauty in poetry.
"Why doesn't my mother let me go to the seaside?" Because it is dangerous there, my mother is worried about our safety, from which we read my mother's love.
The poetry writing requirements of this class:
Have you ever seen the sea? If you have seen it, write a poem about you and the sea, your mood when you look at the sea and so on.
If you haven't seen the sea, you must have seen it in TV movies, right? You must also have a beautiful vision for the sea! Write your imagination and yearning for the sea into your poem!
What structure will you use in your poems? What rhetorical devices will you use in your poems?
The children have hardly been to the seaside, felt the vastness of the sea, experienced the temperature of the sea and played with the fish and shrimp in the sea. They are written according to the image of the sea seen in the media. I selected several representative records as follows:
1. Ma Shuai's poem-"Laughing at the Sea"
Mom and I are on the beach,
I asked my mother:
"What kind of mouse walks on two feet?"
Mom said:
"Mickey"
Then the sea smiled,
His saliva,
My hair is all wet.
Writing poetry in the form of dialogue highlights the innocence and loveliness of children and the kindness of mothers. The last three sentences are highlights, which show the cheerful personality of the sea. Why does the sea laugh? Interesting.
2. Li Xiaoyan's poem "The Sea"
The sea is boundless,
There are small fish and shrimp in it.
They are playing,
It's like people are talking.
I like the blue sea,
I like flying boats,
A ship like a man,
We all like boats,
Ships like the sea.
A very interesting poem, kind and natural, let people see the picture of going to sea, how nice!
3. Hu Yibin's poem "Listening to the Sea"
The sea is so blue,
The sound of the sea is crazy.
Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa. ...
The ocean is a mysterious field,
Let's go to listen to the sea together.
Writing about the sea from the perspective of hearing gives people a different feeling. The content can be more delicate and vivid, and you can write about the sound of sea water heard in different situations.
4. Dong's poem-The Sea
The sea is blue and small fish are swimming.
Mom has a baby in her hand,
There are fish, shrimp, crabs and seaweed. ...
Starfish are made up of five triangles.
The yellow one is covered with small thorns.
On the rocks at the bottom of the sea,
Plants of different colors and shapes,
The underwater world is really charming!
By writing about the diversity of underwater creatures, it highlights the charm of the underwater world, which is very good and poetic.