I bypassed it, among the bauhinia flowers behind the tree fence.
Clear air falls on tiny branches and leaves.
A compact fruit ball rolls quickly.
This is April, red bauhinia and broadleaf grass.
It was carefully observed before I noticed it.
The light is on the way to get wet.
Small animals that are easily frightened are clear in their hearts.
At this point, it is not too late.
I heard my father's voice before it rained.
Sometimes, I pass some inclined branches.
Walking in plenty of sunshine for a long time
There are some shiny flowers around me.
It seems that I met them for the first time.
A slightly sad sweetness answered an uneasy childhood.
My days are too long and too slow.
About a few years later, on my father's bike.
Vanilla leaves light in the garden of bauhinia.
Shunji Iwai has a film The Story of April, which is short but full of poetry. Yes, what I want to say is the association when I watch this April. This poem, like the story of April, gives people a sense of unity and can be carefully distinguished. In fact, there are many skills in the poem, especially the skills of jumping.
The first paragraph of the poem begins with the behavior of "I", like the beginning of a narrative poem. But obviously, the author doesn't want to describe it, and instead focuses on small things, "a tight fruit ball rolls quickly." The tension can be seen from "small", which shows the author's skill in detail description. The second paragraph only reveals the time background. After this is April, it turns to the presentation of the external environment. From bauhinia to small animals, several things have been written continuously, and the change of views is actually relatively fast, so the separation of sentences replaces coherence independently, which brings readers a pleasure of reading: when reading the last sentence, they don't know what to write next; Every time you read a sentence, you can refresh your feelings. Then, "it's not too late at this time", it's still a jump to take back the line of sight looking out into time. In the third paragraph, the timeline is disrupted again, "at this time" becomes "sometimes", and then turns back to the past. The author recalls his childhood, "On his father's bicycle, a herb that has been in the garden of Bauhinia for many years is leaving light", leaving a very vivid ending.
It can be seen that there are many jumps in this poem. Compared with the common prose logic of China's classical poetry, new poetry emphasizes jumping and breaking, but if it is not well operated, it may lead to the distraction of poetry. The author of "April" mastered these leaps with pen power, and connected the poems into an inseparable whole with keen aesthetic feeling.
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Brief introduction of poet
Yabei, pen name Yabei, Qingshui Lingxin, born in Liuzhou, Guangxi. He was born in a scholarly family and likes poetry, music and travel. His works are scattered in literary periodicals at all levels, such as Caotang, Poetry Monthly and Guangxi Literature.
Expert introduction
Yang Biwei is from Zhaotong, Yunnan. Doctor of Literature, postdoctoral fellow in Peking University. Member of Chinese Writers Association and China Literature Critics Association. Main works: Love Sitting Opposite, Prose Collection, Academic Criticism Collection, Bi Yi or Nan Hong: Mutual Interpretation of Poetry and Art. ..
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