The sun awakens the birds and makes them sing; The sun awakened the earth, awakened it; The earth woke us up and let us get up and work.
3. I came to the garden with red flowers; There are hundreds of flowers; There are purple flowers; There are yellow flowers.
Chinese knots can be seen everywhere. Agency door; The child's neck; On the clothes of old overseas Chinese.
I wrote it all myself, but no one else did. My answer is the same, because they are all mine. If anyone else has a date and name, please read it clearly!
2. How to write the parallelism at the beginning of a composition or the figurative sentence "parallelism and momentum" at the beginning of a wonderful composition 1. The secret of constructing wonderful paragraphs 1: use metaphors to form parallelism sentences 1. One of the progressive exercises: love is sunshine, love is dew, and love is greeting.
Love is a dove, love is Populus euphratica and love is a guzheng. Step-by-step exercise 2: Love is sunshine, love is a drop of dew, and love is a greeting.
Love is a dove, love is Populus euphratica and love is a guzheng. Step 3 exercise:? Love is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, love is dew falling on calyx, and love is a greeting floating in the cold morning.
? Love is a dove flying in the sky, love is a Populus euphratica standing in the desert, and love is a guzheng ringing in my mind. Step by step exercise 4: love is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, which makes people who are poor and sick feel warm; Love is the dew sprinkled on the calyx, nourishing the people whose hearts have been dry for a long time; Love is a greeting floating in the cold morning, which makes tired people feel warm.
Practical exercise: love is _ _ _ breeze, which makes _ _ _ successful; Love is the sunset glow, let _ _; Love is _ _ nectar, which makes _ _. Example 1: love is a breeze floating between heaven and earth, soothing impetuous people; Love is the sunset glow hanging in the sky, which makes people with dim faith see hope; Love is a drop of dew that stays among the leaves, which makes thirsty travelers full of strength.
Example 2: Love is the spring in the desert, which makes people on the verge of despair firmly believe in survival; Love is a bonfire lit in the snow, which makes the confused people feel clear; Love is a ballad floating in the night sky, which gives spiritual comfort to lonely and helpless people. 2. Appreciation of wonderful passages of figurative sentences 1. Kindness is an umbrella opened for you in the wind and rain, and kindness is a lamp lit for you in the dark.
Kindness is a helping hand extended to you in times of crisis; Kindness is the door that opens to you when there is no way out. 2. Maturity is a bright but not dazzling brilliance, a mellow but not greasy voice, a calmness that doesn't need to look at other people's faces and colors, an atmosphere that eventually no longer attracts the surrounding, a smile that ignores the hustle and bustle, an extreme indifference that washes away, a thickness that doesn't need to be told, and a height that is not steep.
3. Youth is the nectar made of blood drops of will and sweat of struggle, which lasts forever in Micari; Youth is a rainbow woven with eternal hope and eternal yearning, gorgeous and brilliant; Youth is an iron wall built with eternal persistence and tenacious toughness.
3. The composition begins with parallelism and then how to write it. Who can tell the end of the process first, and then tell the beginning?
If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "bells". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people memorable."
Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending.
People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right. Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily.
That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still uneasy and determined to shake a few words, leaving the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one and piercing the meaning that could have been realized. Empty slogans.
Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme. 3 sloppily.
The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article. From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions.
1, natural beam. No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending".
It completely avoids the ending fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness. It is concise, simple and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so we should not pay too much attention to "form" and "law".
As long as you are rich, you can play freely and you can fully express your feelings. However, paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary development. There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here.
2. Echo from beginning to end. The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles.
This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail. For example, A Precious Shirt says, "In my house, there is a white shirt, which is really cool."
Finally, I wrote: "I have carefully collected this precious shirt for four years, and I have never been willing to wear it once." Praise the end of the poplar and the beginning echoed at a distance: "I want to praise the poplar loudly!" " 3, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi style.
This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "making the finishing point". For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing the nation does not mean changing the national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are."
At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties. -Remember a spinning wheel. "
4. Famous sayings and epigrams. Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life.
It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings". At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere."
5. Lyric discussion. Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal.
This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing. There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency.
For example, at the end of Flower Market, it says, "She stands among hundreds of flowers with a smile, like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid." Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Missing Mother, which are typical lyrical endings.
The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable. The end of a composition is the same as the beginning, although it is different, it also has its own rules to follow.
The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the students' solid training at ordinary times, in the candidates' improvisation and in the candidates' "extra-poetic merits". Please look at the end of a candidate's composition: If life is no longer green, we are still looking for it. Why can't we take actions to protect green and the environment, so that we can always have green?
At that time, green would sing: "I come gently, just like you (desert) walk quietly ..." (Anonymous "If life is no longer green") Comments: The author naturally thinks of green from the environment, and then launches a topic around "If life is no longer green". The article starts with the comparison of "past", "today" and "tomorrow", and then skillfully uses Xu Zhimo.
Middle school students' friends, there is no fixed method for writing. Which ending method you use depends on the stylistic requirements and your own preferences, and you can't copy dogma. If some can be discussed, some can be described, some can be suspended, some can be quoted, and so on.
Middle school students' friends also need to exercise more and experience more in practice, and try their best to explore in order to achieve the same effect. In this way, I believe that the students will be able to write the ending of "When the bell rings, the reverberation will be around the beam".
Migration training The ancients said, "A good end is like chewing.
4. Compared with the beginning of the article (as long as the beginning), all the interesting childhood stories are forgiven. Who often lingers in my childhood dreams? I really want to stay awake like a sleeping beauty. If I were to describe the fun of childhood, I would compare it to a flower, a fragrant flower; A box, a box with many secrets; A grape rack, a grape rack full of countless grapes.
Let's enjoy fairy tales together! Soul-the soul is a vast sky, which contains everything in the world; The mind is a calm lake, occasionally rippling; The mind is a snowy area, reflecting a colorful world.
Pain-pain gropes in the dark, and the road ahead is bumpy; Pain is a kind of sadness that no one understands, and it is helpless in the face of all setbacks; Pain is the deepest torture of the soul, and it cannot be confessed without tears; Pain is a natural expression and a devil in trouble. Stupidity-stupidity is a natural helplessness, an acquired laziness, a bad result planted by oneself, and a moth in good fruit.
Lies-lies are moths of the mind, eating people's hearts beyond recognition; Lies are a deep quagmire in which people can't extricate themselves; Lies are an endless black hole, which makes people fall into the abyss of sin. Insidious-insidious, is a wolf in sheep's clothing, doing shady business; Sin is a good enemy and a jealous friend; Insanity is the iceberg of the soul, which makes people feel chill through clarity.
Selfishness-selfishness is a mirror, in which you can only see yourself forever; Selfishness is a piece of cloth that covers your eyes and can't see the pain of others; Selfishness is a layer of glass, which looks transparent, but always separates each other. What is kinship? Affection is the winter night when the north wind whistling, and the needle and thread in the mother's hand; It is the banana fan in dad's hand that repels mosquitoes in hot summer. This is an unremarkable question asked by relatives who meet after a long separation; This is a punch when my father was furious ... greeting cards are warm friendship and warm wishes.
It brings the message of spring, it spreads the seeds of love, it conveys good wishes, and it conveys the true feelings about the world. Conditional parallelism sentence
For example, with a firm ambition, you can be smartly satisfied with the difficult environment of "eating, drinking and drinking"; With extensive intelligence, we can plan skillfully and win thousands of miles; With extraordinary courage, we can wisely turn the tide in the crisis and remain calm. The chic in my eyes can never be achieved overnight.
It is wine that needs years to accumulate, and it is a pearl that needs sand and stone polishing. That kind of mellow and mellow, always built on the long and even painful accumulation. Inflectional sentence parallelism.
For example, some people want to be the king of China Edison's invention, but they are afraid of the difficulty of learning scientific knowledge; Some people want to be Mo Bosang of China, but they are afraid of the hardships of practicing calligraphy all the year round; Some people want to be great musicians, but they are too lazy to work in the field of staff. So ambitious, ambitious, you can't even catch a small fish, let alone a big ambition. The parallelism of causal sentences (mind and action).
For example, it is precisely because of the lofty sentiments of keeping promises, that Xiao's tragic song was played. Honesty-the eternal law of China chivalrous man.
It is because of the persistence of vows of eternal love that the dance music that became a butterfly was sung. Honesty-China's lingering swan song.
It is precisely because of the commitment to make a living for heaven and earth and to seek happiness for the people that one song after another has popped up. Honesty-the immortal song of China literati.
A rhetorical question. Such as: full pond sludge, black or not? Black! However, the lotus leaves the mud and is not stained.
"Swallow and black magpie, nest and altar", in the late Chu State, was it black? Black! However, Qu Yuan is "the world is cloudy, and I am the only one". Eunuchs are in power, and villains are rampant. Was the Ming Dynasty black? Black! However, Yu Qian only left innocence in the world.
He who is near ink is not black. Will we still be moved? Will the children preparing for the college entrance examination be moved by a glass of milk brought by their mother? Will an overbearing boss be moved by a humble suggestion from his subordinates? Will tourists be moved by the trees that are scratched all over, but still strong and straight? If you can still be moved, prove that your blood vessels are not hardened and your nerves are not numb; If you can still be moved, prove that you can still see the world and know yourself.
Love is a sweet spring, which makes unfortunate people forget the bitterness of life; Love is a beautiful ballad that makes boring people feel the joy of life. Love is a flowing spring, which makes thirsty pedestrians feel the sweetness of life journey; Love is a beautiful ballad, which makes people who walk alone feel the beauty of life; Love is a clear spring flowing in my heart, which makes people immersed in pain feel the sweetness of the world; Love is a ballad that reverberates in the ear, making lonely people feel the warmth of the world; Love is the spring that knocks on the ice door and shakes the heart of stone; Love is a beacon that shines in the dark, allowing lost ships to find a harbor; Love is a drizzle in spring, which makes lonely people enjoy the nourishment of their hearts; Love is a tear flowing in a clear spring on a summer night, which makes people who are hot and sleepless appreciate the poetic peace; Love is a small umbrella held up on a rainy night, which allows people wandering in a foreign land to get the shade of family; Love is a rainbow flying from the horizon, so that people full of sadness can see the beauty of the world; Love is a glass of ice water sprinkled on the top of your head, which makes people feel dizzy and dizzy with high fever. Love is a piece of milk candy in the mouth, which makes people who drink coptis chinensis for a long time taste the sweetness of life. Caring is a look, giving students a silent blessing; Caring is a green wind, which gives students physical and mental comfort; Caring is a spring rain that moistens students' hearts; Caring is a greeting, giving students the warmth of spring.
Gratitude if love is the spring breeze in March, gratitude is the new green exposed by grass; If love is the sunshine of early summer vitality, gratitude is the thick green of wood growth; If love is snow in winter, gratitude is wheat with full grains; Praise you is not rain and dew, but brings new hope; You are not spring, but you bring the sweetness of life; You are not the sun, but you bring the warmth of the world. You are like a stream, without the turbulent waves of the river.
5. At the beginning of parallel writing, the teacher:
Teacher, you are like a diligent gardener, cultivating our little flowers one after another; Teacher, you are like our mother, giving us love; Teacher, like a great architect, you have built a bridge for us. Teacher, you are like a street lamp, illuminating the front for us.
Teacher, you are like a candle, burning yourself and illuminating our teacher. You are like a lighthouse, standing for a long time, just to show us the way. Teacher, you are like chalk, but the reduction of that point has become the accumulation of our knowledge. Teacher, you are just like your mother. You care about us, compared with your mother.
Teachers are kindling, igniting the fire in students' hearts; Teachers are stone steps, carrying students to climb steadily step by step. The teacher is a candle. Although thin, it is hot and scattered, illuminating others and exhausting yourself. This selfless dedication is unforgettable.
The language of your lectures is as sweet as a tinkling mountain spring, as cordial as a gurgling stream, as intense as a rushing river ... Your love is as warm as the sun, as warm as the spring breeze and as sweet as a clear spring.
Your love is more severe than father's love, more delicate than maternal love, and purer than friendship. Your teacher's love is the greatest and cleanest in the world.
6. The article that begins with parallelism in the composition-the mind is a vast sky, which contains everything in the world; The mind is a calm lake, occasionally rippling; The mind is a snowy area, reflecting a colorful world.
Pain-pain gropes in the dark, and the road ahead is bumpy; Pain is a kind of sadness that no one understands, and it is helpless in the face of all setbacks; Pain is the deepest torture of the soul, and it cannot be confessed without tears; Pain is a natural expression and a devil in trouble. Stupidity-stupidity is a natural helplessness, an acquired laziness, a bad result planted by oneself, and a moth in good fruit.
Lies-lies are moths of the mind, eating people's hearts beyond recognition; Lies are a deep quagmire in which people can't extricate themselves; Lies are an endless black hole, which makes people fall into the abyss of sin. Insidious-insidious, is a wolf in sheep's clothing, doing shady business; Sin is a good enemy and a jealous friend; Insanity is the iceberg of the soul, which makes people feel chill through clarity.
Selfishness-selfishness is a mirror, in which you can only see yourself forever; Selfishness is a piece of cloth that covers your eyes and can't see the pain of others; Selfishness is a layer of glass, which looks transparent, but always separates each other. What is kinship? Affection is the winter night when the north wind whistling, and the needle and thread in the mother's hand; It is the banana fan in dad's hand that repels mosquitoes in hot summer. This is an unremarkable question asked by relatives who meet after a long separation; This is a punch when my father was furious ... greeting cards are warm friendship and warm wishes.
It brings the message of spring, it spreads the seeds of love, it conveys good wishes, and it conveys the true feelings about the world. With a firm ambition, we can be smartly satisfied with the hard environment of "eating, drinking and drinking"; With extensive intelligence, we can plan skillfully and win thousands of miles; With extraordinary courage, we can wisely turn the tide in the crisis and remain calm.
Some people want to be China's Edison-style invention king, but they are afraid of the difficulty of learning scientific knowledge; Some people want to be Mo Bosang of China, but they are afraid of the hardships of practicing calligraphy all the year round; Some people want to be great musicians, but they are too lazy to work in the field of staff. Honesty-the eternal law of China chivalrous man.
It is because of the persistence of vows of eternal love that the dance music that became a butterfly was sung. Honesty-China's lingering swan song.
It is precisely because of the commitment to make a living for heaven and earth and to seek happiness for the people that one song after another has popped up. Honesty-the immortal song of China literati.
Love is a sweet spring, which makes unfortunate people forget the bitterness of life; Love is a beautiful ballad that makes boring people feel the joy of life. Love is a flowing spring, which makes thirsty pedestrians feel the sweetness of life journey; Love is a beautiful ballad, which makes people who walk alone feel the beauty of life; Love is a clear spring flowing in my heart, which makes people immersed in pain feel the sweetness of the world; Love is a ballad that reverberates in the ear, making lonely people feel the warmth of the world; Love is the spring that knocks on the ice door and shakes the heart of stone; Love is a beacon that shines in the dark, allowing lost ships to find a harbor; Love is the drizzle in spring, which makes lonely people enjoy the nourishment of their hearts; Love is a tear flowing in a clear spring on a summer night, which makes people who are hot and sleepless appreciate the poetic peace; Love is a small umbrella held up on a rainy night, which allows people wandering in a foreign land to get the shade of family; Love is a rainbow flying from the horizon, so that people full of sadness can see the beauty of the world; Love is a glass of ice water sprinkled on the top of your head, which makes people feel dizzy and dizzy with high fever. Love is a piece of milk candy in the mouth, which makes people who drink coptis chinensis for a long time taste the sweetness of life. Caring is a look, giving students a silent blessing; Caring is a green wind, which gives students physical and mental comfort; Caring is a spring rain that moistens students' hearts; Caring is a greeting, giving students the warmth of spring.
Gratitude if love is the spring breeze in March, gratitude is the new green exposed by grass; If love is the sunshine of early summer vitality, gratitude is the thick green of wood growth; If love is snow in winter, gratitude is full of wheat. It is not rain and dew that praises you, but brings new hope; You are not spring, but you bring the sweetness of life; You are not the sun, but you bring the warmth of the world. You are like a stream, without the rushing waves of the river and the grandeur of the sea, but the tinkling among the rocks is your cheerful melody.
You are like a star, without the dazzling light of the sun and the charming romance of the moon, but the light in the night sky is a flash of your life value. You are like gravel, without the vastness of mountains and the leisure of streams, but a little bedding between mountains and rivers is your silent dedication.
Your smile is the warmest spring breeze in the world, your tears are the most precious pearls in the world, and your wrinkles are the scars of hard times. Your portrait is a symbol of courage and tenacity; Your concern makes us feel the care of our elders; Your encouragement made us raise the sail of struggle; Your profundity makes us bathe in the sunshine of knowledge; Your dedication has made me appreciate the elegance of teachers' morality. 1. love: love is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, which makes people who are poor and sick feel the warmth of the world; Love is the spring in the desert, which makes people on the verge of despair see the hope of life again; Love is a ballad floating in the night sky, which gives spiritual comfort to lonely and helpless people.
2. Beauty: Still life is the beauty of solidification, and moving scenery is the beauty of flow; Straight lines are smooth beauty, while curves are euphemistic beauty; A noisy city is a prosperous beauty, and a quiet country is an elegant beauty. There is beauty everywhere in life, as long as you have a pair of eyes to find beauty and a heart to feel beauty.
3. Accumulation: As the old saying goes: "If you don't accumulate steps, you will be thousands of miles away; If you don't accumulate small streams, you can't become rivers and seas. " Those who have made meritorious deeds are well-known in the world, starting from a small place, paying attention to the accumulation of dribs and drabs, consciously cultivating their moral talents and constantly improving themselves.
If there is no persistent perseverance to smell chickens and dance every day, how could Zu Ti be famous for his northern expedition to the Central Plains? If there is no long-term effort to brush off the dragon snake ink and dye the pool water, what about the wave of Wang Can Xihe?