1. Edited version of the original part of Lesson 8 "Climbing the Peak" in the first volume of Senior One Chinese.
Gordon Dufu
The wind is fast and high, the ape cries sadly, and the birds are circling in the white sand.
The endless trees are rustling leaves, and the Yangtze River is rolling unpredictably.
Li in the sad autumn scenery, a wanderer all the year round, lives alone on the high platform in today's illness.
After all the hardships and hatred, the white hair is full, and the wine glasses are damaged.
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It's sad when the wind is strong and the sky is high.
There are birds hovering on the clear river and the white beach.
Endless trees rustle with fallen leaves,
The endless waters of the Yangtze River are rolling in.
Sad to autumn, I feel that Wan Li has been drifting for many years.
I have been ill all my life, and today I am alone on the high platform.
After all the hardships, I hate my white hair and my sideburns.
2. The lesson plan of "Climbing the Mountain" in the eighth lesson of Chinese in the first volume of senior one is compiled by the Ministry.
Teaching objectives 1. Grasp poetry as a whole and experience the poet's depressed thoughts and feelings.
2. Read and rewrite poems, and learn the concise and rich features of Du Fu's poems.
3. Appreciate the artistic features of blending scenes and majestic weather.
Teaching emphases and difficulties
1. Please appreciate the gloomy tone laid by the images in the first couplet of this article.
2. Appreciate the artistic features of blending scenes and majestic weather.
Teaching hours: 1 hour.
Teaching steps:
First, the introduction of new courses.
1. Creation background
The Double Ninth Festival is a festival for climbing and praying. But Du Fu, an old man, had a rough life and was down and out. It seems that he has reached the winter of his life. Moreover, at this time, the country is in a state of war, and he is far away from his hometown and wandering alone. At that time, Du Fu lived in Kuizhou, aged 56. His long wandering life, coupled with depression, made the poet seriously ill. When Chongyang climbed the mountain, the old man felt a lot of worries. Facing the Wan Li River, lonely flying birds and decaying dead trees, he didn't want to enjoy the scenery and felt sad. He wrote the poem "Climbing the Mountain", which was sung through the ages, and expressed his infinite sadness.
2. Features of the work:
This is a seven-character poem, belonging to modern poetry. In terms of composition, it broke through the writing method that only the middle two lines are dual and the four lines are dual, which is known as "the first of ancient and modern rhythmic poems".
Second, read the whole poem by yourself.
1. Read the text
Listen to the music and recite the tape first, then correct the pronunciation and orthography, and then read the text.
2. Athena Chu
Zhu (zhǔ)(zu) guest cream (bìn) turbid (zhuó) wine.
3. Word Note ① Zhu: a small continent in the water. 2 fallen wood: fallen leaves.
(3) Rustle: the scene of the leaves bleak.
4 guests: guests living in foreign countries.
⑤ One hundred years: I still say all my life.
Down and out: I'm still very tired and depressed.
⑦ Bitterness and hate: I hate it very much, and I have a lot of hate in my heart.
⑧ Frost temples: describe the gray temples.
9 new stop: just stopped. Du Fu had just given up drinking due to illness.
⑩ Turbid wine: unfiltered water wine.
4. Poetry translation
The sky is high and the wind is urgent, the apes whimper, and the wind is high and the apes crow, which is very sad.
Birds fly over the clear lake and white sand beach and fly home. -returning birds fly on the river with clear water and white sand.
Leaves fall like the spray of a waterfall-endless leaves fall in the rustling sound,
When I watch the long river roll forward. -the flowing Yangtze river water is rolling in.
I came from three thousand miles away. Sad this autumn, Wan Li, who left his hometown, lamented in front of autumn scenery that he had been wandering all the year round.
With my hundred years of sorrow, I climbed this height alone. -I've been sick all my life. Today, I climbed the platform alone in the cold autumn.
Bad luck has laid a bitter frost on my sideburns-hard and miserable, hateful, with white hair covering my sideburns,
Heartache and fatigue are a thick layer of dust in my wine. -Ill, I have to stop the sad cup.
Third, independent appreciation.
1. Global perception
Question: This is a lyric poem about the scenery. What is the content level of the whole poem from the aspects of scenery and emotion?
Very clear; The whole poem is divided into two layers:
The first four sentences describe the scenery and depict a magnificent and lofty autumn scenery.
The last four lyrical sentences express the poet's patriotic feelings and long-term loneliness and sadness.
2. Independent appreciation. (Write an appreciation essay of not less than 100 words for each couplet)
The first two sentences describe the scenes of high winds and high waves, chilly autumn air, apes crying and wailing, clear rivers, white sand beaches and seagulls returning to Xiang at low altitude, point out the seasons and environment, render a thick autumn, and form a magnificent and desolate picture of autumn scenery, which sets a sad and desolate tone for the whole poem. Dual stability, strict syntax and extremely concise language.
Zhuan Xu put pen to paper from a big place and looked up to write the mountain scenery: the fallen leaves are falling, endless, swirling and rustling down; Look down and write about the river view: the endless Yangtze River is surging and rolling forward. It not only reminds people of the sound of falling flowers, but also reminds people of the surging Yangtze River, which invisibly conveys the sadness that youth is fleeting and ambition is hard to pay. At the same time, it reminds people of the disappearance and limitation of life and the infinity and eternity of the universe. Through the gloomy and high-precision dialogue, it shows the poet's superb brushwork and has always been regarded as a good sentence.
Necklace is a high summary of the poet's wandering life all his life. Write "I came from three thousand miles away. First say "sad this autumn" horizontally, and then say "with my sorrow for a hundred years, I climbed this height alone" One horizontal and one vertical, connecting the preceding with the following, points out the theme of the whole poem, which is harmful to nature and goes astray; Expressed the poet's deep depression. Long-term guests are most likely to be sad for autumn, and they are ill and go on stage alone. Extreme depression. Luo Dajing, a scholar in the Song Dynasty, commented in He Lin Yu Lu: "Wan Li is far away; Sad autumn, when sad; Be a guest and travel; Frequent visitors, long-distance travel; For a hundred years, teeth are dying; Sick and sick; Taiwan, high also; Alone on the stage, no relatives or friends; There are eight meanings between fourteen characters, and the duality is extremely accurate. " It can be seen how sad and painful the poet is.
3. Knowledge points of "going up the mountain" in the eighth lesson of Chinese in the first volume of senior one.
I. Creation Background This poem was written in the autumn of 767 AD (the second year of Tang Daizong Dali), and Du Fu was in Kuizhou. He wrote this book at the age of 56. One day, he boarded the high platform outside Bai Di, Kuizhou alone. The bleak scenery in Qiu Jiang triggered the feeling of his life falling, which permeated his old illness and loneliness. Thus, there was this song "Ascending the Mountain", which was known as the "crown of seven laws".
Second, the author introduces.
1. Du Fu (7 12-770), with beautiful words, is a great realistic poet in the Tang Dynasty, and is also called "Du Li" with Li Bai. In order to distinguish Li Shangyin, Du Mu and Xiao Du Li, Du Fu and Li Bai are also called Da Du Li, and Du Fu is often called Lao Du.
His representative works include Up the Mountain, Spring Hope, Northern Expedition, Three Officials (Xin 'an Official, Tongguan Official and Shihao Official) and Three Farewells (Newly Married, Homeless and Resigned). About 65,438+0,500 poems of Du Fu have been preserved, most of which are collected by Du Gongbu.
The core of Du Fu's thought is benevolent government, and he has the great ambition of "making the monarch Yao and Shun superior and then making the customs pure". Although Du Fu was not famous during his lifetime, his fame spread far and wide, which had a far-reaching impact on China literature and Japanese literature.
Du Fu's influence on China's classical poetry is far-reaching, and he is called "the sage of poetry" by later generations, and his poems are called "the history of poetry". Later generations called him Du Shiyi and Du Gongbu, and also called him Du Shaoling and Du Caotang.
2. Grandpa
Du Fu's grandfather was Du Shenyan, a poet in the early Tang Dynasty. Du Shen Yan is very talented, but he is proud of his talent. Shao, Li Qiao, Cui Rong and Su Weidao are called "Four Friends of Articles".
3. Du Fu's famous poems
Chang' an fell, the country was broken, and only the mountains and rivers remained; Spring has come, and the sparsely populated Chang' an city is densely forested. -"Hope in Spring"
Gao Che Li Fu is the capital, and you are brilliant, and you are haggard. -Li Bai's Dream
This kind of music should only be in heaven, where can I hear it several times? -"Send Flowers to Qing"
Song Xin doesn't hate thousands of feet, so he should be beheaded! -"On the way to Chengdu Caotang, I will first send five poems by Gong Zheng, the fourth one."
Indulge in painting, you know that the age of youth is coming. In fact, wealth and status are like clouds floating away to me. -"Four quatrains"
He can only see the smile of his new love, but he can't hear the cry of his old love. -"Beauty"
The war lasted for more than half a year, and letters from home were rare, with a hundred thousand gold. -"Hope in Spring"
On a green spring day, I began to go home, singing my songs loudly and drinking my wine. -"The banks of the Yellow River were recovered by the imperial army"
The wine and meat in Zhumen stink, and the road has frozen bones. -"Reciting 500 words from Beijing to Fengxian"
There are tens of millions of buildings in Ande, which greatly protect all the smiles of the poor in the world, and the wind and rain are as quiet as mountains. -"The hut was broken by the autumn wind"
Try to climb to the top of the mountain: it dwarfs all the peaks under our feet. -"Wang Yue"
But before he conquered, he died, and since then the heroes have been crying on their coats. -"Shuxiang"
After the life of your generation has all turned to dust, nothing will hurt the torrent flowing to the endless river. -"This play is a six-line poem."
The dew turns to frost tonight, and the moonlight at home is bright! -"Remembering Brothers on a Moonlit Night"
It was drizzling, and the fish jumped out of the water happily; The breeze is blowing gently, and the swallows slant across the sky. -"Water Threshold of Two Hearts"
I like to try to find a good poem all my life. The language of the poem is not surprising, and I will not stop. -"Talking about the value of water on rivers like the sea"
Never thought, in this Jiangnan scenic area; It is the season of falling flowers, and I can meet you, an old acquaintance. -"Meet Li Guinian by the River"
Reading has broken thousands of volumes, and writing is like a god. -"Twenty-two Rhymes of Wei Zuocheng"