Close? Keys? Words: 200 words in the summer vacation of the second grade of primary school.
Word count: 200 words composition
This article is applicable to: the second grade of primary school.
Composition source:
This composition is about the 200-word composition of grade two in primary school. The title is: "This is how summer comes". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Buzzing. Buzzing. This is the mosquito army attacking us. It turns out that summer is like this. Got it!
Got it!
Cicada kept chirping in the tree. It turns out that summer is like this. Boom!
Boom!
My father-in-law, Lei Gong, drums as if welcoming the arrival of summer. It turns out that summer comes like this. Teacher's comment: This poem expresses how summer comes: in the buzz of mosquitoes, in the cry of cicadas, and in the drums of Father Lei. Poetry description is meticulous, the text is appropriate and has connotation; The sentences are lively and jumping, full of rhythm and poetic meaning. The real onomatopoeia runs through the whole poem, as if there were wonderful notes in the poem, which touched people's hearts. However, there is a lack of flowery rhetoric. If there are some beautiful words, it would be better to make the poetic mood beautiful!
(Master China: Teacher Xu) 2008-10-512: 26: 00