1. An essay describing a wonderful episode
In the summer vacation a few years ago, I watched a TV series called "Little Soldier Zhang Ga". I was impressed by the Ga Zi's courage to compete with the Japanese. I was deeply moved by his courageous and unyielding qualities.
These episodes are about a Xiaobalu who fought against the Japanese. It mainly talks about how after Gazi’s grandmother was killed by the Japanese, Gazi became a He was an orphan, but after burying his grandmother, Gazi wanted to join the Eighth Route Army. Drive the hateful, abominable, and murderable Japanese devils back to their hometown in Japan.
After Gazi joined the revolution, the Baiyangdian District Team took him in. And a wooden pistol was made for him, which was exactly the same as the real one. The first big thing he encountered was to protect the commissioner and successfully receive the medicine. During this period, Gazi was not afraid of hardships and enemies, and escaped from the Japanese headquarters many times. He also saw through the fake special agents and spies of the Japanese sect, successfully completed the mission, captured alive the Japanese leader who invaded Baiyangdian, and seized a pistol and a machine gun to avenge his grandmother. Being able to serve the country with loyalty at such a young age really touched me deeply. Gazi is so brave!
One of the most exciting scenes in this movie is: two children's league members were setting up traps in the door, when a group of Japanese soldiers came to look for the golden Buddha statue. A Japanese officer who was as stupid as a big bear came to open the door. His eyes were completely cross-eyed and he walked like a big frog. He opened the door! As soon as the door was opened and the mechanism was activated, a large bucket filled with water hit the Japanese soldier. In an instant, he shot out of the door like an ejected shell. They did not dare to enter the door after seeing this. Go around to another door. A traitor "suffered a hardship and gained wisdom", so he opened the door. He opened the door carefully and saw a bucket hanging on it. He took off the mechanism and thought it was safe, but it was not. He moved another mechanism and the big bucket hit him hard. He cleverly dodged it. As a result, The Japanese soldier who was stupidly behind was knocked out of the door again. The Japanese officer who was not with them went and drank half a bottle of wine. Seeing this, the children's league members carefully fished up the bottles and gasoline bottles and replaced the wine with gasoline. ha! Now they feel better. The guerrillas began to attack. The Japanese officer was in a hurry to drink, and ended up drinking the entire bottle of gasoline and spitting it out. Two smart children's league members took a slingshot and shot the firecracker into his mouth, and it exploded all of a sudden. Suddenly, his mouth burst into flames, and a traitor asked him to come into the well. He jumped down immediately. The traitor said, "You hold the rope, and I will pull you up!" He pulled hard, and it took a lot of effort. It took two tigers to pull the officer up, but the officer sprayed water on his face. As soon as he let go, he fell down again... 2. A fragmented essay about "that moment" asking for help. A fragmentary essay based on "that moment" For the title, use
1. You can continuously extend and stretch the movements of one second. For example: At that moment, I saw ***’s originally tense face slowly relaxed, and the corners of his mouth gradually rose. Pull out a beautiful arc. The tightly clenched hand slowly loosens, and the sun pours down through the gaps between the fingers. *** raised his hand, making a big V, with two slender fingers. Bathed in the sun, shining with the glory of victory. He won! 2. You can use movie effects to change the scene from noisy to quiet and then noisy. For example: the originally noisy auditorium was silent for an instant, everyone was holding the big screen tightly, and even the heartbeat was clearly visible. Everyone They all stared with bated breath, fearing that a heavy breath would break the scene. "Win!" Everyone cheered. "China won!" More people cheered. 3. You can write from the perspective of an athlete. Example: This moment , there seemed to be silence around me, and I could only hear my deep breathing, one, two, three times. At this moment, it seemed that there was no one around me, no opponents, no spectators, no referees, nothing, just Myself. One step, two steps, three steps, I reached the end. At this moment, I knew that I won! 4. You can write from the perspectives of spectators, coaches, referees, opponents, etc. I won’t write examples for this, just imitate the way athletes write.
3. Help me write a fragment composition
One Saturday night, I went to art class. Passing by an overpass. People come and go on the overpass, and vehicles shuttle under the overpass. Amidst the noisy and joyful sounds of people, cars and stereos in the video store, I heard a particularly incongruous sound, hoarse and desolate, that was the sound of the erhu. Following the sound, I saw a man in his fifties sitting on the ground on the side of the road, with his eyes closed, playing the famous erhu song "Er Quan Ying Yue". There was an open iron box in front of him with some scattered coins in it. ah! He is a beggar and a blind man.
People on the bridge walked back and forth in front of the blind man, but no one gave him money. The sound of the erhu kept whimpering. At this time, a little boy of five or six years old pulled his mother to the blind man and quietly listened to a piece of music he played. The little boy suddenly said: "Mom, give him some money!" I saw the little boy's mother glared at the child: "Why give me, how many beggars are there now?" At this time, I clearly saw There was a slight change on the blind man's face, which showed a sense of grievance, pain and helplessness. The mother took the little boy's hand and was about to leave.
Unexpectedly, the little boy broke free from his mother's hand and ran to the blind man. He put his little hand into his pocket and fumbled for a long time, finally took out a medal and put it into the iron box. He also said: "I'm sorry, this is all I have." At this time, the blind man raised his head and "looked" at the boy a few times. I saw a grateful look in the blind man's eyes.
The overpass returned to its original bustle, and the erhu sounded again.
The only thing that increases is a beautiful heart 4. Use reverse thinking to write a fragment of composition
The reason why Yinggu who "rebounds the pipa" and Zhang Guolao who "rides the donkey backwards" can leave people with The main reason for the deep impression lies in their "anti" and "inversion". This kind of expression that is contrary to common sense has something in common with logical reverse thinking. If you use this reverse thinking reasonably in writing, you can Receive original and unconventional expression effects. How to cultivate reverse thinking in composition teaching? 1. Reverse thinking in conception. Conception is to establish the theme. If the material is the "flesh and blood" of the article and the structure is the "skeleton" of the article, then the theme is the "soul" of the article. It can be seen that the establishment of the theme is in an article. Occupy a pivotal position. The idea must be novel. This is the basic requirement for writing. How can we achieve this? A convenient way is to use reverse thinking, that is, "use it contrary to its meaning." For example, when the ancients wrote about falling flowers, they often wrote in a very miserable way. For example, "The flowers are withered and the flowers are flying all over the sky. Who can pity the red and fragrant flowers?", "Non "People who are buried with flowers today are laughing and crazy, but I don't know who they are when they are buried next year." If you write an article based on this idea, you can't get rid of the sad and miserable mood. We might as well use it in the opposite sense, borrowing Gong Zizhen's "Falling red is not a heartless thing." ", turn into spring mud and protect the flowers", by praising the fallen flowers, you can write articles with novel ideas. In teaching, I attach great importance to cultivating students' reverse thinking ability. Remember to ask questions after finishing "Lychee Honey": "The article enthusiastically praises the noble and valuable sacrificial spirit of bees. However, is it also unsatisfactory? Can you start thinking and associating from things to people?" Then the students spoke one after another: "Bees don't Dare to get paid according to work, busy all day long, but in the end the fruits of one's labor are possessed by others, this is not the attitude towards life that modern people should have." "Bees are too conservative. They will only work hard for generations and lack a pioneering spirit. Just like farmers in the past who only relied on single farming to make a living." "Bees don't know what they like and hate. They don't distinguish between good and bad, and they sting everyone." These views of the students may not be entirely correct, but after all, they break the rigid monoculture. Ideas can be considered from multiple sides and reverse thinking, which should be encouraged. Another example is when I ask students to write an article on the topic of "snow". Students are generally used to "praising snow" from the front, such as writing about snow. "Innocent", "dressing up the world", "selfless", etc., while students who use reverse thinking think in the opposite direction, denouncing Xue's "hypocrisy", "cruelty", "not seeing the light of day", etc. In this way The idea often gives people a refreshing feeling. 2. Reverse thinking in conception Conception is the organization and structure of the article. The use of reverse thinking in conception can make the article achieve an expression effect that is orderly and unconventional. But here Reverse thinking is not a way of thinking that is contrary to common sense in a complete sense, but it is to oppose stylization, win by surprise, and write articles that everyone has in mind. I remember ancient books record that during the reign of Emperor Huizong of the Song Dynasty, Many painters gathered in the capital to hold a painting competition. The question was "The fragrance of horse hoofs after stepping on flowers". Some painters painted many petals and worked hard on the word "flower", while some painted a leaping horse and a whip-swinger, with the word "horse" on it. After making up their minds, some drew a horse hoof and made fuss about the word "hoof"... None of these could be consistent with the poem - there was no "fragrance" in the painting. Only one painter used reverse thinking and did not start from the word "flower". Instead of writing "horse" and "hoof", he took a unique approach and drew a few butterflies dancing around the horse's hooves. This idea painted the fragrance and perfectly expressed the poetic meaning of "returning from stepping on flowers with the fragrance of horse's hooves". As With the development of the times and the progress of society, the meanings of many idioms, sayings, and idiomatic expressions have become obsolete, and the existing opinions are outdated and one-sided. Therefore, those concepts, opinions, and opinions formed under certain historical conditions have also evolved with the society. And change and update. Therefore, in composition teaching, students are required to be new and different in conception, and use reverse thinking to adapt to the needs of the times. For example, "playing tricks in front of the class", sometimes, you cannot "play the ax in front of the class" " Otherwise, you will be ridiculed by others, but sometimes, you have to "play the ax" to the "class door", otherwise, you will never perform, and you will be wronged. Another example is "look at the wind and steer the rudder", which is used to describe those who are slippery and sophisticated. It’s too vivid to describe a person who relies on other people’s faces to decide his or her actions. It’s really despicable. However, if it is not to please, but to adapt to changes in the situation and take corresponding countermeasures, isn’t this the right thing to do? A scientific attitude? Why not do this? Therefore, there is a lot to write about how to read the wind and how to grasp the general direction. I remember that Li Quan, a classmate in my class, wrote a very good composition based on idioms. The title was "Without "Imagination", How Can "Heaven Open"" "", the author uses "whimsical" instead of its derogatory meaning and adopts its positive meaning - "whimsical thoughts are the source of the evolution of knowledge", and clearly points out that if you dare not "whimsy" and cannot "whimsy", creation and invention will be very difficult. It is difficult to have hope, which reflects the novelty and ingenuity of the concept. In short, reverse thinking is a kind of creative thinking. If it is purposefully trained in composition teaching, students' innovative consciousness and creative ability will be cultivated, and students' composition performance will be improved. 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5. Write a fragment
16. If I had seventy-two transformations
Fragment: If I were Sun Wukong, then I would have his seventy-two transformations, and I would Becomes many things. If I have seventy-two changes, I will become a sun. When there is darkness, I will take him to dawn; when there is cold, I will give him warmth. I will burn myself to illuminate others, be their morning star, and guide them to the bright road. I radiate my brilliance to enable animals and plants to reproduce and survive, and human beings will also survive and develop because of them...
17. Piano Complex
Excerpt: I pass by a piano store on my way to school every day. As the bus drives past the pianos displayed in the floor-to-ceiling windows of the store again and again, I feel a sense of helplessness in my heart, which turns into a touch of sadness and slowly spreads and echoes in my heart. ...My favorite is the piano...
18. Watch the seventy-two changes in the world
Excerpt: There are so many things that can change in the world today. Just take myself as an example. I used to be really bad. I would enjoy myself when I had something to do, and I would bully my younger brothers and sisters when I had nothing to do. I don’t know how many complaints I got for free from my three aunts, six women, seven aunts, and eight aunts. But it doesn’t matter. Times are changing, and the sun and the moon are changing. I I am willing to fall behind others. I take it for granted that I am also changing. Thinking about it, it should be due to the "Eighteen Changes of Women". Although I am not a tall and graceful person, I am a role model for everyone, but I can be regarded as knowledgeable and polite, and I am a beautiful woman from a small family. Know how to love your younger siblings and respect your parents. This change has become really big.
19. Let the heart freeze
Excerpt: "On this day last year, in this door, the faces of people and peach blossoms reflected each other's red. The faces of people don't know where to go, but the peach blossoms still smile in the spring breeze." The power of time It is so huge that every second that passes, everything around it may change. Leaves turn yellow in autumn and turn green in spring; they are full on the fifteenth day of the month and fade on other days; stars gather together on summer nights but are very rare on winter nights...Nothing wants to be fixed, everything changes mercilessly...
20. Familiar places with scenery
Excerpt: Put down the day's homework, and walk in the afterglow of the setting sun in the mangrove park with grass, flowers, trees, rivers and bridges. A treat. Here, I can let my thoughts fly freely, let them float across the sea, let them shuttle between heaven and earth...
21. Is the window really open?
Clip: Sitting in the revolving restaurant on the top floor of the China World Trade Center Building. A man ordered a cup of coffee and sat quietly. The coffee here is so expensive. But life is too tiring, let’s be luxurious once in a while...
22. The autumn wind sweeps the sycamore leaves again
Excerpt: It is the middle of winter. The cold wind in autumn has already blown off the sycamore leaves in my hometown. Most of these sycamore leaves have turned into the ground. My hometown is Xi'an. Xi'an is a typical city with distinct four seasons, and the growth and decline of trees has a special pattern. The place where I live is full of French plane trees, and the leaves of the plane tree are very generous. Every time I pick one up, it feels heavy, just like the heavy hometown complex I have accumulated now...
23. Mock examination essay: Where to Miss the Moon Bridge
Excerpt: Night, as quiet as water. I leaned against the railing and let the river breeze gently lift my clothes. Like fairy music lingering. Listen to the wind singing, think about the bridge, and look at the misty stars in the sky. Thinking of the flowers singing last night, the orioles dancing in the morning light, the laughter of that year, and the memories of old friends. For several long years, like a scroll, nothingness expanded and roamed at the bridge...
24. Mock examination composition: Single-plank bridge
Excerpt: A rushing river crossed me like a ferocious snake In front of me, the whirlpools twisting above made me tremble. I have to go to the other side of the river, but there is only a single-plank bridge across the river-if this wood that looks very uneasy is a bridge...
25. Mock examination room composition: Toward hope Bridge of Desire
Fragment: (1) Entering the Bridge of Desire, there is a Bridge of Desire in front of me. I stared at it dreamily. Temptation came to me and said: You will enjoy the joy of heaven. Reason whispered to me: You will taste the pain of hell. I faced temptation and reason, thinking and hesitating. I want to move forward, but reason won’t let me; I want to retreat, but temptation won’t give in. A cold wind blew, and reason was swept away. So, temptation took my hand and walked into the bridge of desire...
26. Mock examination composition: I am a bridge
Excerpt: I am a bridge, in a busy city An extremely ordinary overpass, the soil and rocks on my body all come from the same remote village. These united brothers and sisters make up who I am, and their memories have become my precious memories. I think of the past, in that remote mountain village, it was very peaceful, with birds singing and flowers fragrant everywhere. Although the people there were a little poor, they were very happy
27. Snow in the North Country
Excerpt: Some people may like the beauty of spring, some may like the beauty of summer, and some may like the golden color of autumn, but I prefer the unique landscape of the North - snow. When early winter comes, the long-awaited snow elf quietly comes to the world. Like pear blossoms; like goose feathers; like catkins flying in the air; like window flowers; like stars; like the radiance of fairyland, all in various shapes and forms. He landed gently, softly and unconsciously on your face and body, suddenly startling you and making you feel a little chilly.
An innocent voice shouted - it's snowing, and then countless childish voices cheered - look, it's snowing, and then a group of happy children were running around in the snow... 6. Please write A wonderful piece of composition
Ideal is a sail, ideal is an oar, helping you row to the other side of happiness.
Ideals are bricks, ideals are tiles, helping you build the building of your dreams.
Ideals are ropes, ideals are ropes, helping you climb the mountain of hope.
The wind whispered to me: "Life is as light as mine!"
The rain sang to me: "Life is as vivid as mine!"
Thunder roared at me: "Life is so sonorous and powerful!"
Lightning blinked at me: "Life is so bright and transparent!"
Integrity is the most beautiful thing in the world.
It is the joy on a child's face when he puts the penny he found in the hands of the police uncle, and it is the sparkle in the eyes of the young pioneers when they take the oath.
It is the spring breeze that Jiao Yulu pushed open the firewood door of the villagers and sent it, and it is the deep affection of Kong Fansen when he held the frostbitten feet of the old Tibetan mother in his arms.
It is the promise made by the founding leaders of the People's Republic of China to the Chinese people in the face of the first ray of dawn of New China.
It is the call from the chief architect of reform and opening up looking back at the blue waves of Zhuhai for the Chinese people to become rich.
It is the decision of the Chinese nation to realize the great rejuvenation made by the leader looking over the west to carry forward the past and open up the future. . 7. A piece of composition with character description
Deep in my memory, there is a peasant girl. I don’t know her name, I don’t know her age, but I know she has a heart of gold.
That day, the bright sunshine coated the earth with a layer of golden light. I'm riding my bike to go to my "hand in hand" partner's house. She lives in the country, and she said that the air there is fresh and the scenery is charming, and she wants me to take the time to go and take a look.
I was humming a song while riding my bike. As the saying goes, "Unforeseen circumstances can happen in the sky." I was halfway through the ride and there was a "pop" sound and the chain slipped off. What to do? I'm as anxious as an ant on a hot pot.
"Hey, what's wrong with you?" When I was at a loss, a sweet voice came into my ears.
I raised my head, and a peasant girl came into my sight: two black and thick braids hanging by her ears, two watery eyes, and a bright smile on her dark face. The corners of his mouth were slightly tilted upward, revealing his white teeth.
"My bicycle chain slipped." I was very distressed.
"You have found the right person," she said in high spirits, "My father used to be a car repairman, and I also know a few tricks. I can take care of this little thing."
I felt like I had met a savior, "Really? That's great! I'll trouble you then."
"It's nothing." When I said it, she was embarrassed, her face " The ground suddenly turned red.
She stood up, looked here and there, brought a small wooden stick, squatted down, took the small wooden stick, lifted up the car chain, buckled it on the gear, and then put the pedal on One turn and it's fine.
I picked up a dollar and gave it to her, and she hurriedly gave it back to me. I wanted to give her chocolate, but she shook her head like a rattle: "You can save it for the road!"
She seemed to think of something and ran away, saying as she ran: "Goodbye!"
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Looking at her leaving back, I found that she melted into the bright sunshine, shining brightly!
On the stage of history, who can tell clearly who is right and who is wrong, and who has merits and demerits.
——Inscription
Left Hand Beauty
No love is perfect, even the love between Xiang Yu and Yu Ji is not perfect. It leaves behind a poignant ending that will make future generations sigh.
Some people say that Yu Ji is Xiang Yu's burden. Without Yu Ji, Xiang Yu might be able to win, and Xiang Yu is too indecisive in dealing with feelings. I don't think so. During the seven years of marriage between Xiang Yu and Yu Ji, although the two of them did not raise eyebrows and respect each other like guests, they also did not make an oath of alliance between flowers and moonlight. Their relationship is similar to that of an eagle and its nest. Xiang Yu is an eagle. When he is tired from flying in the wind and rain, he returns to Yu Ji's warm nest to rest. In other words, they are like water and fire, and there is no need for an oath of friendship. In the occasional look at each other, Yu Ji's water is flowing quietly, and Xiang Yu's fire is slowly extinguishing.
8. Write an essay of about 180 words about an unforgettable scene
In my mind, the “him” I can’t forget is a disabled person. I don’t know his name, but I admire him today.
On a lively street in Changsha City, there was a large group of people gathered around. I
squeezed in and saw only one end of a long painting spread on the ground. Look, my dear, this painting is several meters long! At the other end, a little boy was lying on the ground concentrating on drawing. I squeezed forward again, and when I came to the little boy, I looked at him carefully: He had a haircut. He has flat black hair, a short stature, a pair of big watery eyes, and a small mouth. He looks like he may only be seven or eight years old, but what attracts attention is that his right hand is gone.
There is only one flesh ball left in his left hand, but he still uses his remaining flesh ball to paint. The most incredible thing is that the paintings he made with his flesh ball are so lifelike that people don't forget it while watching. I feel sorry for this little boy. What a good boy. Unfortunately, he lost his right hand and was reduced to painting on the street and relying on people's charity for a living. Maybe he used to be a lively and cute normal person. Boy, but the reality is cruel and ruthless for some reason
It makes this perfect life incomplete. But look at how strong he is and how hard he studied to achieve what he is today! I didn't dare to think too much and left the crowd, but I still can't forget him.
What makes him unforgettable to me is his unyielding spirit to fate at a young age.