The prose of seven to eight hundred words should be more powerful.

The beautiful prose "October in My Hometown" is both lyrical and powerful. From the first sentence, a vivid and busy rural scene comes to us under the author's delicate writing style, "The crows of chickens, geese, and ducks merge into happy music, and the villagers, with smiling faces, carry a Return with loads of golden rice.” The author uses psychological changes as clues to develop the text. The living conditions and living conditions of the people in his hometown in different periods are the main line and described in layers. During the Anti-Japanese War, the pain in Tucheng was in the hearts of the people in my hometown, and it was also painful in my heart. In special times, scars left the people without laughter. Now in October, it is the harvest season. Looking at the smiling faces of the villagers, I no longer feel spasms in my heart, and I am no longer under the pressure of sadness. And when I "return from Tucheng, I look at the paved streets" The silver path of green leaves makes the heart seem affectionate. "The ups and downs of psychological changes can also reflect the changing process of the times.

At the end, the author raised the theme, "Although October in my hometown has been lifted out of the poverty line, it is still far from the October I imagined in my heart. The kind of skylark singing, When will the rumbling machines, the warm sunshine, and the wind-swept October, when the cattle and sheep grow strong, come?" This ending is a bit unexpected. The author often stops at praising the current boisterous harvest scene, and the author makes a comment. , pointed out the shortcomings and put forward a new blueprint to make October in my hometown more exciting.

The work is like a prose poem, with beautiful and fresh writing style. The poetic and picturesque scenes are interspersed with descriptions of past events and different psychological changes of oneself. The structure is rigorous. Enjoy and read this masterpiece!