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All the changes, charm and beauty in life are made up of light and shadow. -lev tolstoy
Please write an article of not less than 800 words according to your thoughts and associations.
Requirements: ① Independent decision; 2 self-made titles; (3) Style is not limited, except poetry; (4) distinctive stylistic features.
Waiting for success on the cold bench
Some people have to experience setbacks in life, and some flowers have to wait for spring. Although the "spring" of some flowers comes late, each flower should have its own blooming appearance.
There was an unattractive girl who once had a dream: to stand on her own stage and sing her own songs. But one day, in the studio of a famous musician, a pot of cold water was poured on her: "Your voice is as unattractive as your appearance, and I think it is difficult for you to develop in the music industry."
Hearing this, the girl didn't choose to leave, but stayed silently. She served tea, made a performance schedule, and brought a costume for the singer ... Someone asked her why, and she solemnly said, "No, this is the closest place to my dream." Finally, one day, she stood on her own stage with a smile and touched everyone present with a warm voice that was not amazing. She is Rene Liu who was once rated as "the most realistic singer".
Life is like this, and often you can't succeed at the beginning. If you can't succeed for the time being, then stand in the position closest to success first, so that you can get opportunities that others can't get. Once the opportunity comes, you may be the first person to succeed.
She is also a girl. She is thin and black. Although the girl worked hard, she still failed to enter the women's football team in the province. After the exam, the unsuccessful girls left in disappointment, but she still sat silently on the edge of the field and watched the players train.
Seeing her sad face, the coach felt a little guilty and went over to comfort her. "Can you keep me?" The girl looked up with tears in her eyes. "But our main players are enough." The coach said awkwardly. "Then let me be a substitute teacher. Someone has to bring clothes and mineral water to the main players. " "Why do you have to stay?" The coach asked curiously. "I want to stand in the nearest place to success, where I have the opportunity to become the main force at any time, don't I?" The coach looked at her begging eyes and could not bear to refuse, so he left the girl.
Since then, whenever the players on the field are training, the girls practice the ball silently outside the field. Her persistence finally won her a rare opportunity. In an important game, the striker was injured unexpectedly. In desperation, the coach had to send her on. As a result, the girl scored two goals in the second half, which not only helped the team win, but also made herself famous in the first world war. This girl is Sun Wen, winner of the Golden Boot Award in the Women's World Cup.
No one can reach the top in one step, whether it is a gold medal, a person's to beno. 1, or a successful career. They always stand on the edge of success and save enough energy-that is, learn more knowledge, experience more setbacks and accumulate more wisdom in life, and then they will naturally bloom beautiful flowers in life. We usually only focus on the most glorious moment of the winner. In fact, we can't see or imagine the long-term efforts and ups and downs behind them, but we have to taste them one by one.
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Go through setbacks and wait for spring. Overcome the shadow and usher in the light.
Rene Liu, whose voice and appearance are equally ugly, became the "most realistic singer"; Sun Wen, a thin and dark substitute, became the winner of the Golden Boot Award in the Women's World Cup. Standing on the edge of success, accumulating energy, experiencing setbacks, and accumulating wisdom will eventually blossom beautiful flower of life and usher in dazzling success.
The article focuses on two well-known stories, vividly clarifying the process of experiencing setbacks and blooming beautiful flowers, which is convincing and infectious!
20 10 Jiangsu college entrance examination perfect score composition selection: green life (1)
Green, full of vitality and pleasing to the eye.
Green is closely related to life and ecology. Today, green has become a new concept, which is closely related to everyone's life.
Please write an article of not less than 800 words on the topic of "Green Life".
Requirements: ① Angle is optional; ② Self-determination; (3) Besides poetry, the style is optional.
Sustainable life
Every time I am restless, I bow my head and say nothing. All I can think of is the bridge, the running water under the bridge, and the laughter and laughter of my childhood melting into the running water. ...
In early spring, when it's so-called "it's still cold at first", we will sneak out of the house, ignoring the unmelted snow behind the house and the floating ice in the water tank. In our eyes, there are only frozen gurgling water and wild ducks who are not afraid of cold on the water. Laughing and chasing in the greasy wheat fields by the river. Sometimes, I will run with my beloved kite and that naughty puppy, completely ignoring the troubles of homework and never worrying about global warming. I just laughed in my heart, like the cry of wild ducks on the river.
When the spring night becomes a dream, our children will walk along the river bank together, hoping to see someone swimming in the river. Someone swimming indicates that summer is coming. We never stick to the rules of the calendar. Summer really approached, but there was no one walking into the river. There was nothing we could do. We took off our clothes and shouted "one, two, three, jump", but we shrank back when we shouted. Whoever shrinks badly will be thrown into the river, and whoever goes in will stick his head out. "Not cold, not cold!" "Inadvertently grabbed the mud and threw it on others. Helpless, I had to bite my teeth, like a martyr who died of learning, and bravely went underground, only to find that the river was really warm.
We laughed one after another in the water, and the water flowed one after another, so the warmth of summer was washed away, and the cool autumn came with the water. The river in autumn has become a graceful girl, dignified and demure. Occasionally, she was kissed by the bluebird in the air and blushed. However, she will not refuse to have close contact with us children, and we will do something poetic. Support a long wormwood and go deeper into the reeds; Carrying a nest of duck eggs, holding them and singing ... until the sunset kissed the river goodbye, we reluctantly went ashore and touched our pockets, only to find that the duck eggs had been lost, leaving only one hole, so we thought about going home to mend our pockets, but we forgot when we skipped. Therefore, it is not only the duck eggs that are missed, but also the whole autumn.
If you miss autumn, it's really just winter. The cold north wind screamed arrogantly, trying to trap us in the house. But we were not afraid. We rushed out of the house and ran to the river bank, flying around on the ice, not to mention how happy we were. It's just that adults are too scared to go down and catch them on the shore. I don't know whether the ice is too thin or their hearts are too thick ...
Yes, my river and I had a similar life when we were young, full of laughter and endless green. But what about now? Only memories are left. The bridge is still the same bridge, except that the river turns black, the wheat field turns into a brick factory, and occasionally you can see wild ducks, but they are all bodies floating on the water. ...
Green life can only be recalled now. Who can tell me where to look?
A brief comment on going back to childhood and my life with Xiaohei * * * * is our dream today, but no matter how we describe our wonderful childhood, the undeniable fact is that "green life" is no longer melancholy. Childhood memories are full of warmth and laughter, and "green" is meaningful enough to impress readers and add a lot of color to this article. (Yan Longwen)
20 10 Jiangsu college entrance examination perfect score composition selection: green life (2)
Green, full of vitality and pleasing to the eye.
Green is closely related to life and ecology. Today, green has become a new concept, which is closely related to everyone's life.
Please write an article of not less than 800 words on the topic of "Green Life".
Requirements: ① Angle is optional; ② Self-determination; (3) Besides poetry, the style is optional.
Sustainable life
In recent years, what "green concept" and what "low-carbon life" are popular. A city leaders decided to follow the trend of the times, develop green economy and create green life according to their own characteristics. ...
Because a city is backed by mountains and has lakes in its territory, it is rich in wildlife resources. A municipal party committee decided to build an ecological zone for wildlife protection by the lake, led by the Environmental Protection Bureau.
The leaders of City A worked very efficiently and soon laid the foundation stone for the "Wild Animal Ecological Reserve of City A".
On the day of laying the foundation stone, the leaders of city A basically came, and the scene was spectacular. I don't want the spectacular foundation laying scene to scare a wild duck living nearby. As a result, the wild duck ran into the signboard being erected, hurt its wings and landed in the lake. It happened that this scene was photographed by one of the most influential local evening newspaper reporters and published in the newspaper.
The next day, Director Liu of the Environmental Protection Bureau found this scene while reading the newspaper, and immediately called his secretary Xiao Wang: "How could this happen on such an important occasion and in such an important area?" Call someone to save the wild duck! "Soon, the secretary wang went away with people. Fortunately, they found this dying wild duck by the lake and quickly organized an animal doctor to rescue it. Soon, the wound of the wild duck was bandaged. After expert appraisal, this wild duck can fly smoothly as long as it is properly conditioned and does not need a month.
Director Liu is very happy. Every day, he asks Xiao Wang, his secretary, about the situation and visits the injured wild duck in person.
Time passed quickly and the wild duck recovered smoothly. On the day of the release, Director Liu came in person. Everyone unanimously elected director Liu as the main film, and invited several media, especially the evening news reporter who had photographed injured wild ducks.
The next day, Director Liu made headlines in various newspapers, and the titles of "animal protection model" and "caring leader" were put on his head by reporters. City leaders also called to praise him for giving the people of the city a demonstration lesson in green life, and he will praise him at the year-end performance report meeting. ...
Director Liu is very happy. He thought he had a good chance of promotion this year and decided to celebrate it a little. So, after coming home from work, I took my family to the best restaurant in the city for a meal.
When ordering, Director Liu asked his family to order first. Finally, Director Liu took the menu from the waiter, thought about it, and added a special dish "Steamed Wild Duck". ...
A brief comment on a wonderful mini-novel. The theme of the story has a strong sense of reality, which accords with the meaning of the title of this composition. It is both accidental and reasonable to pave the way for wild ducks to be injured, found medical care and released. The image of the protagonist has naturally become a "model of caring for animals". At the end of Steamed Wild Duck, the protagonist's true colors are revealed, which is shocking, unexpected and chilling. O Henry's brushwork. (Zhang Zhongyuan)
20 10 Jiangsu college entrance examination perfect score composition selection: green life (3)
Green, full of vitality and pleasing to the eye.
Green is closely related to life and ecology. Today, green has become a new concept, which is closely related to everyone's life.
Please write an article of not less than 800 words on the topic of "Green Life".
Requirements: ① Angle is optional; ② Self-determination; (3) Besides poetry, the style is optional.
Sustainable life
In the space where light and shadow are intertwined, in the noisy and floating world, everything seems to be a dreamy flash. In the eternal night, a green bud quietly emerged from the soil, trying to touch it with open hands, but it scattered like a moon shadow in the water. When I woke up, it was still a blank and monotonous wall. Outside the window are still crowded streets and people, and the sky is still foggy as night; Rivers have long lost the leisure of fish playing in water lotus; Mood, or depression ...
The city, like a steel structure space, always feels lack of movement, although it is bright and beautiful. Chimneys as huge as gun barrels are rendering the blue sky all the time, and those seemingly flowing rivers can no longer reflect the birds flying by. People are constantly eating into nature and wasting resources. There is always a tail behind the famous cars in the street, and there is always too much garbage next to the community. Everything is destroying people's hearts. ...
I want to pursue a different life, and return to that quiet village alone, so quiet. Just then, the sun broke and a green figure kept beating flashed before my eyes. It was a wave of wheat waves dancing in the wind, and the oncoming breeze, with a faint fragrance, penetrated my heart and lungs. There is no pollution, no noise, only blooming green and emerald green.
Walking alone on that path and picking a leaf is really a long-lost touch. It tastes sour, but it is slightly sweet in your mouth, which is the taste you remember. In front of us, a hill appeared. Bamboo fluttering in the wind on the hillside is not as unreasonable as a chimney. Bamboo has brought the world a rhythm full of green vitality. Far away, they heard a flute, jumping and jumping, and couldn't stop the joy. My heart was suddenly magnified infinitely, as if to melt with the breeze.
When I walked back to the village, I suddenly found that the unforgettable sunset smoke had disappeared.
My grandmother's figure came to my feet in the sunset. This scene is very familiar, and my eyes can't help feeling a little damp and hot. In the evening, I asked Grandpa why he didn't see the chimney. My grandfather replied faintly that biogas, solar energy and firewood are used in rural areas now, and no one has used them for a long time. Such a clean and accessible energy source not only pollutes the environment of our village, but also facilitates everyone's life. So that's it, compared with the urban and rural life where big coal burns energy.
On a clear night, the moonlight is particularly bright. I listened quietly to grandpa playing the bamboo flute, and I couldn't help thinking of the green leaves and bamboo forest. Maybe they have dyed my heart green. I believe that as long as I don't give up that vibrant green, time will always be green.
I slept soundly. In my dream, a leaf fell on the soft soil of my heart and spread into a vibrant green forest. ...
A brief comment on this article vividly explains the main idea of the article through sharp contrast-green life is people's eternal pursuit. You see, the dreamy reality makes the author return to nature and pursue a green life. The green leaves, bamboo and the beauty of family ties in the countryside have dyed the soul green. From this, the author realized that as long as there is green in the heart, life will always be green, lovely and full of vitality. This article is beautifully written, and the lyrical brushwork is full of love for nature and praise for life; The "waking up from a dream" at the beginning of the article echoes the "dreaming" at the end, which is rich in meaning and intriguing. (Xue Mingde)
20 10 Jiangsu college entrance examination perfect score composition selection: green life (4)
Green, full of vitality and pleasing to the eye.
Green is closely related to life and ecology. Today, green has become a new concept, which is closely related to everyone's life.
Please write an article of not less than 800 words on the topic of "Green Life".
Requirements: ① Angle is optional; ② Self-determination; (3) Besides poetry, the style is optional.
Sustainable life
At the moment, there are some green leaves in full bloom outside the examination room where I am sitting. They are scattered into dark green or light green lakes under the sunlight, and green ripples appear under the breeze.
In an instant, my uneasy heart because of the college entrance examination calmed down inexplicably.
In present life, green has been given too many meanings. It is the olive green won by the dove of peace, the unbeaten vitality of pine and cypress in four seasons, and the hot low-carbon environmental protection at present. But how many people still remember that it belongs to a green and primitive life?
How many people remember all the power of green itself and the magic of calming people?
Su Dongpo looked at the surging blue waves of Chibi and shouted: "The river of no return, the waves are exhausted", and the relegated depression was swept away;
Seven sages of bamboo forest wander in the green ocean of bamboo forest, drinking and writing poems. In turbulent times, they emerge from mud like lotus flowers, and their hearts are quiet and peaceful.
Since ancient times, how many hermit gentlemen have lived a real green life under the immersion of green, sharing weal and woe.
It's just that such a green life is leaving us.
We are getting busy. Students are busy with exams, businessmen are busy making money, and politicians are busy canvassing. Green has become a toy in the window, which is occasionally glanced at by pedestrians. Green life-a leisurely and quiet life, is more of an elusive myth, forgotten in the dust of the past.
Watching Foxconn employees jump down one by one; Watching Toyota cars being recalled one after another, I can't help asking: What's wrong with life now?
Toyota used to be famous for its high quality and excellent service, but it was eager to attack the city in the market and let all myths try to return to their original form.
Because life lacks green!
This kind of green is not a small indoor bonsai, a small urban greening, or a sapling planted occasionally on Arbor Day. This green color comes from the heart.
This kind of green life is not the gradual reduction of carbon emissions, the gradual low-key friction in the world, or the tenacity of life reflected in repeated disasters. This green life is no longer brought by wealth and anonymity.
Green is a poetic and peaceful color. Green life should also be a life that people can enjoy slowly on the road!
I am looking forward to the green life I yearn for. On that day, all people can smile at others from the heart, and the world will be truly peaceful.
Outside the window, green leaves are shaking, as if cheering and clapping for me.
This article gives a brief comment and explains "green mood" in combination with reality, which is well written. "On that day, all people can laugh at others, the world, real peace", what a pure and lovely prayer, no wonder the green leaves outside the window "seem to cheer and applaud for me." (He Yongkang)
20 10 Jiangsu college entrance examination perfect score composition selection: green life (5)
Green, full of vitality and pleasing to the eye.
Green is closely related to life and ecology. Today, green has become a new concept, which is closely related to everyone's life.
Please write an article of not less than 800 words on the topic of "Green Life".
Requirements: ① Angle is optional; ② Self-determination; (3) Besides poetry, the style is optional.
Sustainable life
"Low carbon" and "green" are actually imported products in recent years. For a poor country like ours, words with foreign characters or a little blood relationship are all good things except "foreign devils".
However, from another perspective, this is actually a luxury. Obviously, we can't force the United States to burn natural gas, nor can we force a white-collar worker who has worked hard for years to buy a car to use clean hydrogen energy. In this way, "green life" seems to have nothing to do with us ordinary people.
This involves a very compelling topic-equality.
"Equality" is a high-frequency word in the laws of western countries. No matter what kind of crown they wear, they always publicly declare that "all men are created equal." Actually, it's not. Hundreds of years of lessons tell us that all men are born equal, but they are not. For example, you were born in the United States, with a well-off family and a bright future, and you naturally have the ability to burn natural gas. If you don't need hydrogen, you can also take public transportation such as magnetic levitation. Unfortunately, when you were reincarnated, you brought the wrong reincarnation. When you were born in China with 5,000 years of civilization, you had to carry extinct plastic bags, breathe the waste gas produced by industrial civilization and run around the city. More unfortunately, you often see or hear western countries (or foreign devils) accuse you of not being environmentally friendly and green, so you are angry and indignant and clamoring for what to do. But taking back the distant sight and facing the real life, "green" is still far away and belongs to something beyond the horizon.
Western scholars always ignore equality when considering problems. Of course, the problem here refers to the interests of other countries. No matter what kind of doctrine or theory, we can't ignore the actual situation, that is, people often say "special national conditions" now.
Living standards, social development and people's cultural quality determine the values of different places and also limit their lifestyles. Green life can naturally be used as a way of life in developed countries, but it cannot be used to force poor countries that have not yet developed. The concept of "green life" is naturally correct and worth emulating, but we can't force mules to plow instead of cattle, nor can we let sheep produce milk. Similarly, people who have difficulty in burning coal can't burn more expensive natural gas and hydrogen, can they?
Although we are born unequal, we can use our wisdom to eliminate some differences. For green life, we can't cover everything, but we can do what we can, reduce the pressure on the environment with less pollution and waste, and tell our friends and neighbors to use less plastic bags.
If we can look at problems objectively with an equal eye, aren't these little things in life a part of green life?
This paper is a brief comment on the masterpiece of playing pipa. With keen insight, the author sees that "green life" is a luxury for poor countries, and then puts forward the argument that "green life can't cover everything, but we can do what we can". The viewpoint of argumentative writing is unique. This article is not only cutting-edge, but also reasonable in analysis and has inherent logical power. (thunderstorm)
20 10 Jiangsu college entrance examination perfect score composition selection: green life (6)
Green, full of vitality and pleasing to the eye.
Green is closely related to life and ecology. Today, green has become a new concept, which is closely related to everyone's life.
Please write an article of not less than 800 words on the topic of "Green Life".
Requirements: ① Angle is optional; ② Self-determination; (3) Besides poetry, the style is optional.
Sustainable life
Now, people finally know that sleeping on the grass is far more comfortable than taking a nap on the bus, and the black smoke from the chimney is not as cool as the shade under the big tree. Green is the essence of life.
Man is essentially just an animal. The ancestors of mankind are apes, an animal that lives in the forest, surrounded by green, eating leaves and living on branches. People have evolved to the present, naturally retaining the original genes that love green. In my opinion, people's pursuit of green life now is more like an atavism. They have lived in a city with many tall buildings for a long time and want to live in the forest for a few days. Therefore, it is natural that many people are keen on camping and picnicking.
After people are tired of eating big fish and meat, they find that vegetables are so delicious that people really pursue all kinds of fresh fruits and vegetables like animals. More and more people are eating raw food, from lettuce to raw meat, just like their ancestors. The nature of animals is clear to human beings, who seem to have lived a primitive life again, calling social buddies to find fresh fruits and raw meat. ...
Dig a hole in an empty place, bury yourself in it, drink some water, and then stand up straight and wait for a long time. You may only have backache and numbness in your feet. Man is not a plant. He doesn't know the freedom and satisfaction of plants in the soil, but only knows that he is suffering unbearable pain in the soil. Therefore, people should go back to the house, plant a few pots of flowers and leave some grass in the yard or balcony. We can't live in the dirt, so let them live in the dirt for us. People are always smart, and what they can't do will always be done for us by other things. People don't look for cows, people look for dogs to watch the door when they want to rest at night, and people can't get up regularly every day to look for chickens to crow. Therefore, when people found that they could not take root and sprout in the soil, bonsai appeared.
Green is a vibrant color. When people see a large area of green, there will be a pent-up impulse in their hearts. That is what our ancestors left in our hearts. It has always dominated us, and it is manifested in every place of life, such as a few trees outside the courtyard wall, a potted flower on the balcony, fresh vegetables in a bowl, algae and goldfish in a glass jar, and so on.
In fact, we have been pursuing "green life", but the current pollution and the civilization of machinery industry make this pursuit more impulsive and incisive. In the past century, the industrialization trend of pursuing economic development has finally slowed down, and the idea of pollution first and then treatment has finally been blocked. People began to pay attention to the green of life and realized that industry and technology are not the whole of life. Only by protecting the green in life can we gain natural rationality and develop science, technology and industry!
The pursuit of green life is an outbreak of natural genes inherited by ancestors and a clever move of "reconciliation" between man and nature, which is commendable.
Harmony between man and nature, Chinese dream. Harmony between man and nature is the best living condition. We went from apes to humans, and from humans to apes.
A brief comment on the origin of "green life", that is, can human beings return to nature? The article shows a rare big idea. From the historical development and contradiction between apes and humans, the fundamental problems of human life are touched. The author's thinking is quite conscious of historical dialectics, but because it is carried out in perceptual and concrete discussions, he can see the interest and wisdom in it. (Luo) According to