I love this land.
If I were a bird,
I should also sing with a hoarse throat:
This land hit by the storm,
This river of sadness and anger will surge forever,
This endless wind,
And the tender dawn from the forest?
? And then I died,
Even feathers rot in the ground.
Why do I often cry?
Because I love this land deeply?
Appreciation of works:
Literary appreciation
Is this poem based on? Hypothetically? At the beginning, the head is abrupt and novel, and there is a feeling of deep meditation. From the poem? Bird? It is a generic name, a * * * name. Unlike the cuckoo and partridge, which have been repeatedly sung by poets in past dynasties, they have a natural and special charm and meaning, but they have to rely on the author to pursue new art without support. What's more, it is deliberately expressed in the poem? A hoarse throat? It is also very different from the oriole, weeping cuckoo and soaring egret in classical poetry. It is purely caused by the tragic atmosphere of the times in the early days of the Anti-Japanese War. Sad poet? The special temperament and affectionate expression of personality (the author claims).
The first sentence of this poem shows the author's sincere love for the land. In order to express his sincere and deep love for the land, the author imagines himself as? A bird? Fly tirelessly around the motherland forever. The whole poem shows a kind of? Melancholy emotional characteristics, this kind? Melancholy is a natural expression of deep love for the troubled motherland, which stems from the suffering of the nation and is therefore particularly touching. There is a profound sense of hardship, a broad historical mind and a strong patriotic feeling here. This kind of melancholy is manifested in two points: First, it is strongly lyrical. This poem can be said to be a confession of the author. Adopted by the author? Direct? Lyrical way to express their feelings for the land. Like? Oath? How serious is it? Blood? As solemn, very strong and shocking. The poet summed it up in four symbolic lines? Me? The mission of. These four poems have no specific reference, but they have expanded and deepened the connotation of this mission with more vivid and broader general reference. The land that the author loves deeply is experiencing a great historical struggle and great changes. The people are rising and the nation is awakening. An incomparably gentle dawn? Is it in sight? As a bird, the author should sing for this great era. Second, realism and symbolism are intertwined. The author describes a set of vivid poetic images with realism and symbolism, and endows them with? Earth? 、? River? 、? Wind? 、? Dawn? Different symbols and meanings of the image of equality. But what is the author's view of the motherland? Dawn? I also have optimistic beliefs and made a wonderful description.
This poem constantly strengthens its feelings in a lyrical way, so as to strike a chord for a long time. This poem is biased? Hypothetically? At first, this is the first layer of reinforcement. Who doesn't know that the birds are beautiful and crisp, and this poem is biased? Hoarse? In short, this is the second layer of reinforcement. It is not enough to have these two layers of reinforcement, so the objects of singing have appeared in the poem one after another: land, river, wind and dawn. It is particularly noteworthy that when describing these images, the author has reached the point where he is poor and full of enthusiasm, which fully embodies the artistic characteristics of this liberal poet. Is writing poetry mostly taboo or seldom used? what's up Word, because? what's up Talk too much, slow down, dilute the poetry. The author Ai Qing is not. He dares to use a series of books. what's up Expressing touching words, he likes to add a lot of adjectives and modifiers in front of the described object to express the appearance of the object, forming a special three-dimensional sense and sculptural feeling, which is an important feature that distinguishes the author Ai Qing's free poetry creation from other free poetry writers (such as the field). The poem "I love this land" is no exception, and what about the poet? Land? River? Wind? Dawn? This central word was specially added in front? Sad? Intense? Tender? Wait a lot of modifiers, and you will see the mystery. These long sentences describing landscapes such as land and rivers mentioned above can be said to be the third layer of reinforcement. Just singing for the author? Attracted by tenacious vitality, this poem suddenly took a big turn and stood out after a sprint? Am I dead? , let the body fertile land. Thus, there is a strong contrast between life and death, and in this strong contrast and contrast, what is consistent? Bird? The persistent love for the land was born in Sri Lanka, sung in Sri Lanka, buried in Sri Lanka, read here, and do us part until death.
Artistic feature
Short in length and ingenious in conception.
Land is a vast image, and the poet chooses it as the object of lyricism and pour out, and its realm is extremely broad. However, these feelings are concentrated in 10 lines of poems, which have achieved excellent artistic effects. First of all, this is because the author writes not from the real place, but from the imaginary place, not directly writing about his relationship with the land, but imagining himself as? A bird? Using the relationship between birds and land to expand the artistic realm of the whole poem makes the whole structure of the whole poem appear ingenious and natural. From the poem? Bird? , just a general term, symbolic, unlike those in ancient poems (such as cuckoo, partridge, etc. ).？ Singing in a hoarse voice? , is an eye-catching, gripping and thought-provoking poem, and it is also a strange bright spot in the whole poem to deepen the author's feelings about the land. Originally, the sound of birds was nice and crisp, but it didn't exist? Hoarse? Voice, but the author is particularly bright? Singing in a hoarse voice? . This is the tragic atmosphere at that time (in the early days of the Anti-Japanese War), the author's special personality and temperament, and the author's special expression needs. The aesthetic image produced by * * greatly enhances and strengthens the aesthetic expression of the image, from which we can feel that the author's love for the land is so persistent, loyal and tenacious: even in the face of such a land saturated with suffering, the author should love unconditionally and always do his best. Next, the author uses a montage-like close-up to introduce the objects he wants to sing in turn: land, river, wind and dawn. These are vast natural or cosmic images, which are dynamic and static, near and far, open and magnificent. Where is the author? Land, river, wind, dawn? Specially add adjectives or modifiers with emotional color in front of them, so that they can be transformed into symbolic and suggestive pictures one by one. From a conceptual point of view, the author is still stuck here? Bird? This virtual image (? Even the feathers rot in the ground? ), the author symbolically expressed his strong feelings of being born in the land, singing in the land, being buried in the land and living and dying with the land. At this point, the feelings of poetry reached a climax.
Ingenious transformation, another poetic realm
Generally speaking, after poetry reaches its climax, it is difficult to express it. If you don't write well, it will be difficult to continue, or to gild the lily, or to be out of touch, or to bring up the rear area. However, the author skillfully broke a stroke, separated a line, made the necessary interlude and pause, began to change skillfully, created a new poetic scene, and wrote the ending of two lines with outstanding images and further sublimation of feelings. There is a thrilling, unforgettable and chanting feeling.
First, the lyric perspective has changed. The first paragraph of the poem is imagined from a virtual point of view, that is, from the perspective of birds, showing the loyalty and love of birds to the land, which seems implicit; However, the second section has been changed to a real writing perspective, that is, to write about yourself from the author's own perspective? Often tearful eyes? Pour out your feelings about this land? Deep? Love is speaking your mind. In this way, the combination and correspondence of the virtual and the real creates an internal and complete artistic space of the whole poem; The correlation and contrast between the result and the reason constitute the internal logical structure that supports the whole poem.
Second, the writing techniques have changed. The first section uses comparison, which is the realm of imagination; The second section uses fu, which is a realistic expression of the soul. The whole poem changes from the montage-like picture hint in front to the direct guidance of the author behind, and ends with strong emotional expression, thus attracting people's attention to a rich emotional atmosphere and feeling the author's loyalty and love for the land again.
Theme image
theme
By describing that he lives in this land of the motherland, the author feels more pain than joy, and his heart is too depressed? Sad? 、? Blowing the angry wind endlessly? ; However, this is, after all, the motherland where he was born and brought up. Even if he suffered to death for her, he would not leave this land to die? Even later? Feathers? Want it, too? Rotting in the land? . It expresses the author's greatest and deepest unforgettable and indelible patriotic feelings.
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The land complex and land in Ai Qing's poems have multiple symbolic meanings in the author's poems. Author ai Qing called? The singer of the land? ,? Land? It constitutes the central image of the author's poems. ? Land? This image is a symbol of national spirit, Chinese civilization and the fate of the motherland, which embodies the author's deep affection for the motherland and mother earth, which is fully reflected in this poem: the poet expresses that he wants to sing the motherland like a bird; Even if you die, you should be integrated into the motherland. ? Land? This image also reflects the author's deepest love for the workers who were born, nurtured and died in Sri Lanka, as well as his concern and exploration of their fate. Here? Land? Is it no longer a simple objective scene, but the author's subjective emotion? Elephant? . The author feels extremely sad for the old, weak and sick motherland. With this feeling, when he looks around with melancholy eyes, it is the carrier of loneliness and poverty in the wilderness. This land entered the author's mind. By singing this land? Elephant? Curse those who destroy the land and fantasize that it can rejuvenate. In the poem, the author's voice is hoarse but generous, sad but broad, showing a strong sense of life; Although primitive, it is vigorous and powerful, because land is the foundation of all things. It is precisely because of this love and attachment to the land that the other three images in the author's works flow downstream. ? River? Add before? Forever surging? And then what? Sad? Two adjectives, wind? Add in front? Blowing around endlessly? And then what? Angry? Two modifiers, just put it? River? Wind? These two external pure landscapes have become the author's subjective feelings? Elephant? Grief and anger, people in order to save this land and the kind of indomitable, courageously, struggling revolutionary struggle vividly. ? Dawn? This image shows that the author firmly believes that there will be dawn and victory in the turbulent struggle of the people. But the author didn't finish it, and then I died, and even my feathers rotted in the ground? Expressed the author's persistent love for the land. The last two sentences? Why do I often cry? Because I love this land deeply and then return to the image of the land, which deepens the theme of the article.
About the author:
Ai Qing (19 10 ~ 1996) is a modern poet. The real name is Jiang Haicheng, the word is Yangyuan, and the pen names are Ega, Kea and Linbi. Jinhua, Zhejiang After the founding of New China, he served as deputy editor-in-chief of People's Literature and member of the All-China Federation of Literary and Art Circles, and won the highest medal of French literature and art with 1985. The masterpiece Dayan River? My nanny. He is the author of Dayan River, North China, Towards the Sun, Dawn Notice, Zhanjiang, Oleander and other poems.