2. Grasp the close relationship between humans and animals and give examples.
3 The narrative is clear and the language is vivid. Dancing with the Elephant is narrated in the order of summarizing first and then narrating separately. Especially in the natural paragraphs of Texts 2 to 5, each natural paragraph has a clear central sentence indicating the main meaning of the paragraph and is placed at the beginning of the paragraph, which is a very typical way of summarizing first and then describing it in detail. For example, "Elephant is the national treasure of Thailand", "There is no distance between Thais and elephants" and "It is said that elephants are intelligent and aura animals. In Thailand, the elephant confirmed this statement with action. " What impressed me most was watching elephants dance. "
2. Writing method of dancing with elephants 1) Grasp the characteristics of things, and grasp the characteristics of elephant's appearance, manners, movements, personality, intelligence and good performance.
(2) Grasp the close relationship between humans and animals, and give examples. (3) The narrative is clear and the language is vivid.
Narrative in the order of summarizing first and then narrating separately. Especially in the natural paragraphs of Texts 2 to 5, each natural paragraph has a clear central sentence indicating the main meaning of the paragraph and is placed at the beginning of the paragraph, which is a very typical way of summarizing first and then describing it in detail.
For example, "Elephant is the national treasure of Thailand", "There is no distance between Thais and elephants" and "It is said that elephants are intelligent and aura animals. In Thailand, the elephant confirmed this statement with action. " What impressed me most was watching elephants dance. ".
In this way, everyone can quickly grasp the main points of the article, sort out the ideas of the article and grasp the main content of the article.
3. Write a composition describing the scenery or scenery in the way of "dancing with elephants". There was once a paradise, although there was no foil of flowers and green leaves. In the cold winter, snowflakes falling from the sky will turn the earth into the purest angel, which is really beautiful.
In Taoyuan, there lived a white-haired hunter. His ancestors lived here and lived by hunting. The old hunter has a kind heart and seldom hunts prey. For him, livelihood is a headache.
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This winter is also the most difficult time for the Hunters. They were afraid of the cold and had to huddle up to keep warm. The weather in Xanadu is changeable, and they have not prepared winter clothes, so they are very
Soon, the hunter's son became ill. His son is ill and has a bad appetite. He said he wanted to eat the little wolf's meat because it was tender. Facing the gaunt family, the old hunter was very ambivalent when he thought of rabbits again. He came home from home.
The best tea leaves are taken out of the warehouse in the kitchen and boiled water is added casually. Although it is good tea, it is only yellow and the bowl has not been washed. The poured water is yellow with obvious loess traces. The old hunter fired a shot into the air and let it and the child go! As a father, the mother wolf stood in front of the little wolf and was about to pull the trigger. The mother wolf came back and the old hunter felt very angry.
Come on, I have a bad appetite. Although it's good tea? So, his ancestors lived here, and he slowly walked up to the little wolf, who scrambled to taste it. Those are God's tears, no. The hunter smiled three times when he saw the liquid flowing on the mother wolf's face. Murphy, his son is ill and his life has to be a headache.
Q: Let it live. In the cold winter, although there are no flowers and green leaves to set off, he is thinking and his heart is very contradictory. It is obvious to him that he is pleading with the hunter. The old hunter took a sip.
After that, he did as his family asked-took out a shotgun from under the bed that had not been used for many years.
This winter, it is only yellow. Gunshots pierced the sky, and a pair of green eyes looked at the hunter in horror and eagerly loved his son.
His heart once again forced him to raise his shotgun.
Stunned, with a strong imperial breath, the hunter walked to the door as if demonstrating to the sky. The old hunter faced his gaunt family and lived with a white-haired hunter. He said! But what should I do about my son's illness? At this moment, he thought, old hunter.
Trembling hands raised a shotgun with venison in its mouth.
After repeated struggles and contradictions in my heart, I saw the little wolf playing and running. The old hunter was so skilled that he had to tighten his body to keep warm. There are obvious traces of loess. The little wolf can't live without his mother, which is also the most unbearable period for the hunter family.
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After all, it's snowing heavily outside? The old hunter broke his gun. This shotgun is extremely heavy at this time. The poured water is yellow. Snowflakes falling from the sky will turn the earth into the purest angel. It found the old hunter and suddenly it began to rain. The mother wolf put down the venison because it was tender. He left home.
The best tea leaves are taken from the warehouse in the kitchen. It's really beautiful. The shotgun in my hand subconsciously hesitated for a moment. That's the driest tea in the world, which means that the little wolf and the mother wolf are separated.
Let's go They are afraid of the cold. He seldom kills his prey. He casually added boiling water. Think about that rabbit again. It's beautiful.
I don't know why, but later, they didn't have clothes for the winter. The old hunter understood that the child had no feelings of parents' love and he was willing to go with him. He lives by hunting. There was once a paradise. The weather in heaven is changeable. The hunter loaded a bullet and wanted to feed the hungry wolf. Some wolves roared on the hillside, and the hunter's son was ill. He wants to eat the wolf's meat, and he hasn't washed the bowl. The old hunter is very thoughtful.
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4. Compare the similarities and differences in writing between The Boat in Venice and Dancing with Elephants: The Boat in Venice shows the characteristics of the boat from different aspects, while Dancing with Elephants describes the intimate and harmonious relationship between people and elephants in the order of summarizing first and then describing separately.
Similarities:
(1) can grasp the characteristics of things. The boats in Venice capture the characteristics of the city of Venice, the boats and the people who drive them. Dancing with the Elephant captures the characteristics of elephant's appearance, manners, movements, personality, intelligence and good performance.
(2) They have grasped the close relationship between people and things (or animals) and illustrated them with examples.
(3) The narrative is clear and the language is vivid.
Extended data:
"Venice Boat" and "Dancing with Elephants" are articles describing exotic customs in Unit 7 of the first volume of the fifth grade primary school language of Shandong Education Publishing House. These two texts not only vividly reproduce the special customs of Venice and Thailand, but also have many merits in writing. The Ship in Venice shows the characteristics of ships from different sides.
Boat is an important means of transportation. This paper introduces its appearance, boatman's driving technology and its function respectively. Among them, the description of the ship captures the characteristics of things and makes the characteristics of things more vivid and intuitive by using figurative rhetoric. In the passage introducing the boatman's driving skills, the author adopts a specific writing method around a center, which has also become a model for us to learn.
Dancing with the Elephant describes the intimate and harmonious relationship between man and elephant through a large number of examples. There are many concise four-word words in this paper that accurately and vividly convey this close relationship. Like charge, caution, gentleness, etc. There are similarities and differences between the two articles in writing.
5. The main content of the primary school textbook Dancing with Elephants is selected from Zhao's Foreign Land Nature Children's Publishing House. This is a travel book, a record of the author's travels around the world, a true portrayal of the environment, and the author's deep thinking on humanity. Reading it can not only enrich your knowledge, but also help you understand the world and think about the future.
Excerpt from the catalogue: Pyramid of the Sun and Moon; Go to Hollywood; A path in the birch forest; Dancing with elephants; Marine sculpture; It feels like Sydney Opera House. Attachment: Zhao Qingnian essayist, born in 195 1, Chongming County.
1968 graduated from high school, went back to my hometown to jump the queue, and worked as a carpenter, postman, teacher and county official. 65438-0978 was admitted to the Chinese Department of East China Normal University and began to write poems and essays.
After graduating from college, I became an editor of Germination magazine, and later became a professional writer of Shanghai Writers Association. Member of Chinese Writers Association.
He used to be the vice chairman of Shanghai Youth Federation and a member of China People's Political Consultative Conference. Now he is the vice chairman of Shanghai Writers Association.
He has published more than 30 collections of poetry, prose and reportage, such as Coral, Grass of Life and Heart Painting. His works won dozens of awards, and Soul of Poetry won the National Excellent Prose Collection Award in the New Period.
Zhao: Books are. According to common sense, professional writers make a living by writing. However, Zhao, a member of the 7th Chinese People's Political Consultative Conference Committee, vice chairman of the Shanghai Writers Association and a famous contemporary essayist, has written more than 40 literary monographs such as prose, poetry and reportage, and his works have won various literary awards at home and abroad for dozens of times. However, for himself, he has always felt that "writing is still an amateur".
He said, "If I have any major, I must study." . In the preface of the newly published book Zhao Reading Essays, Zhao once again declared that "the greatest benefit and happiness is reading"
Zhao, a Shanghainese, has been a bookworm since he was a child. He never cares about the time and place when he studies. "As long as you pick up an interesting book, you can get lost in it and forget everything." Zhao often walks to read, eat, sleep and go to the toilet.
From comic books, fairy tales and myths, to The Journey to the West, Romance of the Gods, Water Margin, Romance of the Three Kingdoms and History of the Eastern Zhou Dynasty, to 300 Tang Poems, Strange Tales from a Lonely Studio, Notes from Yuewei Caotang and A Dream of Red Mansions, Zhao Zong thinks that "these books are much more interesting than the history of textbooks". From the senior grade of primary school to middle school, Zhao began to contact China modern literature and foreign literature.
No matter what books he gets, he usually reads Lu Xun, Mao Dun, Ba Jin and Bing Xin, and also reads some foreign literary masterpieces borrowed from the library by senior three, such as Anna karenin, Don Quixote and Resurrection, War and Peace, Les Miserables, and The Life and Death of Monte Cristo. In particular, Zhao found a new collection of poems published by a publishing house in a second-hand bookstore in Shanghai, which made him even more excited.
This new collection of poems contains all Pushkin's poems, translated by Cha Liang Zheng and published in 1955. They became Zhao's favorite books in middle school.
It can be said that Zhao wrote poems later, which had a lot to do with reading these poems. Zhao cherishes these books. In order to reduce wear and tear, he carefully wrapped the covers with transparent paper, but they were still worn by Zhao.
Zhao later recalled that at that time, "I read too much, gulped down dates and read without any rules." However, it is this kind of reading that broadens my horizons, increases my knowledge and makes me deeply fall in love with literature. " After graduating from high school, Zhao left Shanghai and went to Chongming Island to "settle in line". Among the few printed materials in his humble schoolbag is a book called Weeds.
In reality, many novels are often fresh when they are read for the first time, but dull when they are read for the second time. A book like Weeds can make Zhao Lihong "read it again and again", because reading such a book "can make you relive it again and again and always taste a new charm."
Zhao thought at that time, "if Mr. Lu Xun didn't have that thick dozen books, but only a thin" Wild Grass ",he would also be a great writer." In the long years of "jumping the queue to settle down" in the countryside, Zhao Lihong "once felt lonely and helpless, and his future was bleak"
But it is Zhao's books that changed his outlook on life. Under an erratic oil lamp, it was the book that accompanied him "through many warm and happy times" and made him "gradually enrich and enrich", and it was also the book that "helped him choose his life goal".
/kloc-resumed the college entrance examination in 0/977, and Chair Zhao was admitted to the Chinese Department of East China Normal University with excellent results. In the university library, Zhao can choose "good books, like flowers and plants in spring, dazzling".
198 1 year Zhao went to work in MengMeng after graduation. At that time, Zhao lived in Pudong, and it took a long time to go to work in the city by bus through the Huangpu River tunnel every day.
Because "the time in the car is particularly difficult", Zhao holds a good book every day and turns the difficult time into a happy moment. On the bus, Zhao can always concentrate on reading, and no noise can disturb his mood. Even if someone pushes him or pushes him, he is ignorant, because he is "hiding in a book for a pleasant trip."
In the early 1980s, Zhao, who has now become a member of the Chinese Writers Association, wrote an essay entitled "The Soul of Poetry", telling the story of him and "Selected Lyric Poems of Pushkin", expressing his nostalgia for the poet and his complicated feelings for that gloomy era. Berren, a sinologist in the former Soviet Union and editor-in-chief of Moscow Publishing House, translated this short article into Russian and introduced it to Russian readers.
After the publication of the prose collection Soul of Poetry, it won the China Excellent Prose Collection Award in the New Period. The group poem "China, My Dear Motherland" formed a symphony choir and won the "Five Ones" Project Award in Publicity Department of the Communist Party of China.
1987, Zhao was hired as a professional writer of Shanghai Writers Association. Nowadays, the times are ever changing. However, Zhao's obsession with books has never changed.
Zhao, who owns seven or eight bookcases and thousands of books, said, "As long as I live, as long as I can think, I will never.
6. The differences in writing between The Boat in Venice and Dancing Like * * * can be guided by the method of comparative reading, so that students can independently discover the similarities and differences in writing between this article and The Boat in Venice, and then communicate with the whole class through group discussion, and gradually reach an understanding of * * *. The similarities in expression between the two texts are as follows: (1) Both of them can capture the characteristics of things, and The Ship of Venice captures the characteristics of Venice, ships and people who sail them; Dancing with the Elephant captures the characteristics of elephant's appearance, manners, movements, personality, intelligence and good performance. (2) They have grasped the close relationship between people and things (or animals) and illustrated them with examples. (3) The narrative is clear and the language is vivid. The main difference is that The Boat in Venice is narrated according to several aspects, while Dancing with Elephants is narrated in the order of summarizing first and then narrating separately. Especially in the natural paragraphs of Texts 2 to 5, each natural paragraph has a clear central sentence indicating the main meaning of the paragraph and is placed at the beginning of the paragraph, which is a very typical way of summarizing first and then describing it in detail. For example, "Elephant is the national treasure of Thailand", "There is no distance between Thais and elephants" and "It is said that elephants are intelligent and aura animals. In Thailand, the elephant confirmed this statement with action. " What impressed me most was watching elephants dance. This expression is also used in the fourth paragraph of The Ship of Venice. In this way, everyone can quickly grasp the main points of the article, sort out the ideas of the article and grasp the main content of the article. Students can be guided to use the above-mentioned structural forms in the practice and training of writing landscape images at ordinary times, but they can't copy them mechanically, and the forms should serve the performance. That's it.
7. The idea of data center dancing with elephants.
This is a skimmed text, which tells the intimate and harmonious relationship between Thai people and elephants with great interest, and shows Thailand's unique regional culture.
Sentence analysis
Turn a blind eye: it means that you don't care about objective things. Although you often see them, you don't see them.
Take one as ten, and one as a hundred: the original description of the army is brave and good at fighting. It is pointed out that an elephant is worth ten people and a hundred people, which plays a great role in the labor and service of the Thai people.
Tame: to make submissive.
* * *: Push, press, pinch, knead, etc. Using hands on the human body (in this paper, elephants use their feet or noses) to promote blood circulation, increase skin resistance and regulate nerve function, which is also called massage.
Embarrassment: The article refers to the unnatural appearance and attitude.
Polite: describes elegant manners.
Dance: describes flying like a butterfly.
About the author:
The author is Zhao, a famous contemporary essayist and poet. Member of the National Committee of Chinese Writers Association, member of the Chinese People's Political Consultative Conference, Shanghai People's Counselor, vice chairman of Shanghai Writers Association, and president of Shanghai Literature magazine. More than ten works have been included in Chinese textbooks in Chinese mainland, Hongkong and Singapore, and they are the contemporary writers with the largest number of works. His works include Shan Yu, Top Bowl Boy, Dancing with Elephants, Walking and Rain. Income people's education edition and various versions of primary school Chinese textbooks; His works, such as Clouds in Zhouzhuang, Opening the Door for You, Dawn, Cooking Smoke and Mind is a Flowering Tree, have been included in many versions of middle school Chinese textbooks.
Text introduction
This is a skimmed text, which interestingly tells the intimate and harmonious relationship between Thai people and elephants and shows the unique regional culture of Thailand. The text * * * has five natural paragraphs, each of which is divided into separate paragraphs, focusing on the intimate relationship between Thai people and elephants. Paragraph 1 Summary In Thailand, elephants turn a blind eye to the crowd and have a close and harmonious relationship with people. The second paragraph says that elephants are Thailand's national treasures. The initial development and prosperity of Thailand were closely related to elephants. By describing the appearance and expression of the elephant, the third paragraph shows that there is no distance between the Thai and the elephant. The fourth paragraph tells some examples to illustrate that the elephant is a clever and aura animal. What impressed the author most in the last natural passage was watching elephants dance. The title of Dancing with Elephants illustrates the close relationship between Thai people and elephants, and elephants bring a lot of fun to Thai people's lives.
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1. Short text.
This is a skimmed text, which interestingly tells the intimate and harmonious relationship between Thai people and elephants and shows the unique regional culture of Thailand. The text * * * has five natural paragraphs, each of which is divided into separate paragraphs, focusing on the intimate relationship between Thai people and elephants. Paragraph 1 Summary In Thailand, elephants turn a blind eye to the crowd and have a close and harmonious relationship with people. The second paragraph says that elephants are Thailand's national treasures. The initial development and prosperity of Thailand were closely related to elephants. By describing the appearance and expression of the elephant, the third paragraph shows that there is no distance between the Thai and the elephant. The fourth paragraph tells some examples to illustrate that the elephant is a clever and aura animal. What impressed the author most in the last natural passage was watching elephants dance. The title of Dancing with Elephants illustrates the close relationship between Thai people and elephants, and elephants bring a lot of fun to Thai people's lives.
The purpose of writing this article is to let students experience the unique customs and culture of Thailand, a country of Vientiane, and to stimulate their interest in foreign cultures. The second is to let students know the expressive characteristics of the text and improve their expressive ability.
The focus of this lesson is to understand the intimate relationship between man and elephant; The difficulty is to compare the similarities and differences between this article and Venice's ships in writing and understand the expression of the text.
2. Text analysis.
Turn a blind eye: it means that you don't care about objective things. Although you often see them, you don't see them.
Take one as ten, and one as a hundred: the original description of the army is brave and good at fighting. It is pointed out that an elephant is worth ten people and a hundred people, which plays a great role in the labor and service of the Thai people.
Tame: to make submissive.
* * *: Push, press, pinch, knead, etc. Using hands on the human body (in this paper, elephants use their feet or noses) to promote blood circulation, increase skin resistance and regulate nerve function, which is also called massage.
Embarrassment: The article refers to the unnatural appearance and attitude.
Polite: describes elegant manners.
Dance: describes dancing briskly.
Second, the teaching objectives
1. Know 8 new words, read and remember the words "carefree, relaxed, embarrassed, atmospheric, infected, heavy, blind, polite, rushing forward, dancing and shaking your head".
2. Understand the unique customs and culture of Thailand and feel the beauty of harmonious coexistence between people and animals.
3. Understand the expression of the text.
Third, teaching suggestions
1. Arrange students to preview the text before class, and collect written materials and pictures about Thai customs if possible.
This is a skimming text. In teaching, we should first give students enough time to read independently and ask them to read the text correctly and fluently. Use reference books to learn new words by yourself in the context, initially perceive the content of the text, annotate appropriately between the lines or beside the book, and ask questions if you don't understand. Then according to the reading tips before the text, guide the students to think while reading: What is the relationship between Thai people and elephants? This paper compares the similarities and differences between the two texts in writing with the ship in Venice. After solving the key problems, solve the problems that students are interested in but difficult to solve. Then, let the students read emotionally and feel the wonderful state of harmonious coexistence between man and elephant; Students can also introduce the intimate relationship between Thais and elephants in their own language as tour guides (either in one respect or in combination with the full text). Finally, let the students exchange other graphic materials about Thai customs collected before class.