How to evaluate a modern poem written by a junior high school student?

In contemporary poetry, Yu Guangzhong should be regarded as a poetic figure. The poem "Homesickness" bears a deep imprint of the times and personal style, and everyone is familiar with it.

This poem takes the change of time as the main line, expressing the pain of separation from childhood to adulthood and then to the present. The whole poem is very cleverly conceived.

Today, let's take a look at a modern poem "Homesickness" written by junior two students, in which the language organization and emotional expression are also very distinctive, especially the last sentence is very poetic.

homesickness

Author: Li Tianhao

When I was a child,

Homesickness is a long telephone line.

I'm at this end,

Mom is over there.

When I grow up,

Homesickness is a thin piece of writing paper.

I'm at this end,

Parents are over there.

We'll talk later!

Homesickness is a high mountain,

I'm outside,

Home is inside.

now

Homesickness is a yellowed photo.

I'm outside,

Mom's inside.

Comments: The last paragraph seems to be a picture of a child and his mother "looking at each other". Children look at photos and miss their mothers. Mothers miss children studying at home. ......

There is a lyric that sings well, "grateful heart, thank you for accompanying me all my life and giving me the courage to be myself;" Grateful heart, thank fate, I will cherish the flowers. "

This lyric expresses a virtue that children generally lack nowadays: knowing how to be grateful.

It is the psychological characteristic of many children to take everything they get for granted.

In fact, under such psychological influence, it is easy to lose courage, cooperation, perseverance and attitude of cherishing life, which are essential on their growth path.

Teacher Wang Guozhen's modern poem "Thank you" reminds people to learn to say "thank you" with positive tone and connotation.

Today, we will watch a junior high school student imitate Wang Guozhen's modern poem "Thank you".

thank

Author: Zhou Ziyang

How can I thank you,

When I walked into you,

I want to pick a small flower,

You gave me the whole ocean of flowers.

How can I thank you,

When I walked up to you,

I want to look up at a planet,

You gave me the whole starry sky.

How can I thank you,

When I walked up to you,

I want to enjoy a little warmth,

You gave me the whole stove.

How can I thank you,

When I walked up to you,

I want to feel a little shadow,

You gave me a dense forest.

Comments: "Only gratitude can harvest the whole spring" is a truth that children should understand. If they can do what the poem says, this generation of children will be the golden generation of hope!