way
Locally speaking,
Start with conventional vocabulary.
Of course, China people's surnames cannot be separated from words. Say the words first. For example, some foreign verbs and adjectives in the text, if you chew these words, you will feel the profoundness of the motherland language.
Example: There is a mass of white flowers on the top of the tree, like a Japanese nurse. (Winter in Jinan by Lao She).
Appreciation: Can you change other synonyms? Such as "heap", no, because it is light snow, the word "heap" is not appropriate. "Top" describes the unique meaning of a small tree after a light snow, which is light and smart, just like the metaphor behind it, "like a Japanese nurse."
B. appreciate some special sentences, which are often related to the theme of the article and have hidden meanings.
Rhetoric sentence: Rhetoric can better describe the scenery and convey feelings.
For example, Qingshui field, sometimes two people stand fishing, and the whole field becomes a picture embedded in a glass frame. (Egret).
Appreciation: using anthropomorphic and metaphorical methods, vividly express and write that the cooperation between egrets and rice fields is appropriate and harmonious, giving people a sense of beauty;
Descriptive sentences: those sentences that describe the characters and express the environment often play the role of setting off and rendering the characters.
In summer, the wind rustles among the trees overlooking the unknown tomb and plays with the warm sunshine on the tomb; In winter, white snow gently covers this dark land. "(The most beautiful tomb in the world).
Appreciation: Accompanied by this beautiful and comfortable scenery is the great writer Tolstoy, buried here. It can be seen that Tolstoy, who is accompanied by nature, is as eternal as nature, thus embodying his great personality.
Contradictory sentence: seemingly contradictory, but it contains the author's profound meaning.
Example: "About Kong Yiji really died" (Lu Xun's Kong Yiji).
Appreciation: "Probably" and "Really" seem to be contradictory, but they are actually the author's ingenuity, which reveals the inevitability of Kong Yiji's tragic fate, and through this character image, it also reveals the cruelty of society and the indifference of all people.
The finishing touch: eyes are indispensable for painting dragons. These sentences are the eyes of the article.
Example: "In order to love her son, she drank poison to quench her thirst; Reluctantly crustily skin of head said that he played well, in order to hope that his son would make progress "(Zou Taofen's My Mother).
Appreciation: From this complex mentality, the image of a great mother who hopes her son to make progress but loves her son very much is vividly reproduced. It is also throughout the paper to express the theme of the article with such sentences.
Ending sentence: The above summary may arouse readers' association and stimulate readers' thinking with endless aftertaste.
Example: "I had a good dream. The rice we grow is as high as sorghum, the ears are as long as brooms and the grains are as big as peanuts. A few friends are sitting under the ear of rice to enjoy the cool. " (Qu Zhihong, Zhu Dongju, Yuan Longping Li Bin Garden of Dreams).
Appreciation: ending with Yuan Longping's beautiful dream can not only make the article stop; It also further highlights Yuan Longping's spirit of pursuing his "dream" (ideal), higher goals and lofty ideals all his life.
In addition, some aphorisms and lyric sentences in this paper are also worthy of attention.
Note: appreciation should be based on the overall perception of reading, rather than picking words and making sentences, taking them out of context, and being divorced from the text. It should be fully related to the central idea of the article, the characters, the author's thoughts and feelings and the context.
example
Listen to the singing of running water
The sky is crying, and the water drops on the ground gather happily, so there is me-running water. Close your eyes and listen quietly. Do you hear the sound of running water singing? ...
I sang all the way across the plain. I don't envy the towering mountains, nor the quiet lakes and mountains, because I have a flowing life. I don't look up at the powerful wings of the eagle, nor lament the speed of the cheetah, because I know I am small, but I am not small.
Look! Peach blossoms on the shore comb themselves with a smile in the clear water; Liu Yang, nourished by me, rolled up his sleeves and flew; The fish in my body are playing happily. Life is red because of me. On the endless plain, I sang loudly, watching the rolling clouds in the sky and watching the flowers bloom and fall in front of the court.
Faced with the obstacles of high mountains, I don't feel sad, nor do I complain about the injustice of fate. On the contrary, I smile and play a passionate movement, and there will always be ups and downs in life.
Listen! It was Qu Yuan who sang loudly and wrote Li Sao, which is immortal. "Since ancient times, no one has died in life, leaving a heart that shines on history." Wen Tianxiang sang his unyielding spirit beside the long river of history; Li Bai abandoned fame and fortune, and his ambition of "breaking the waves and making and set my cloudy sail straight and bridge the deep, deep sea" was engraved in the long river of history.
Those dangerous mountains can only block my way forward, but they can't stop my progress. I'm not discouraged or disappointed. I won towards the distant all the way. ...
"The fallen petal is intentional, but the flowing water is ruthless", and the fallen petal whispers in my ear. I said, "Please follow my path, and you will understand that running water is not heartless, but takes you to a wider world.
The meteor crossed the night sky for only a moment, but it passed through the fiery atmosphere, burning its own life and selflessly contributing to the earth, thus building eternity. "Do not believe, I smiled happily," Hua-"to continue to flow forward.
In the distance, I heard the choppy call of the sea. I sang loudly and said to the fallen flower, "Look! I took you to heaven. " I packed my bags and threw myself bravely into the arms of the sea. Falling flowers can't help but sigh: "A flowing water that sings because of life has merged into an ocean of life!"
Comments:
Listen to the running water: singing, we heard it; Life is bright red because of running water, small but not small; Despite the barrier of mountains, the running water still smiles and rises and falls, singing all the way; The water is flowing away, not heartless, just to find the paradise of life.
The little author heard philosophy and truth from the sound of running water, and his opinions were wise and original. What is more commendable is the atmosphere conceived in this paper. Based on the careful observation of the spirit of flowing water, the little author wrote it with a pen, quoting classics, and it was logical. Articles are always filled with high-spirited enthusiasm and have a strong appeal.