Comment on the first article of "Ten Years Old" Fan Wen High School
I am ten years old. Ten years old should be happy, but I have studied for ten years and know the hardships of some people.
The author of Ten Years Old is Lai Qinghe, a Vietnamese-American. This is not so much a book as a collection of poems. Its wonderful format is curious: this is the format of modern poetry. When Lai Qinghe/Kloc-0 was 0/0 years old, he also experienced the same story as the hero in the book.
This is a growth and transformation: the protagonist Xiaohe is a ten-year-old girl. Her hometown has her familiar life and traditions, her warm friends and a class about papaya tree. But this year, a trip caused by war changed her life dramatically. He and his family were forced to leave their homes and move to the southern United States. However, adapting to the new environment has made the river encounter many difficulties. Finally, he integrated into the new world and became smart and confident again.
When he was still in his hometown of war, he experienced many hardships. At that time, eggs were as expensive as rice, rice was as expensive as gasoline, and gasoline was as expensive as gold. He was forced to drop out of school.
He and his family left their hometown by boat, when they were in the rough sea, although there was no light and no food. Take a sip of water when you really need it. But she didn't despair. After staying on the boat for a month, she finally reached a safe place.
Although she experienced many difficulties at the age of ten, she was laughed at by her new classmates and lost her father, but she didn't despair or despair. She began to learn to be brave, accept the facts, try to solve problems and deal with small disputes with her classmates instead of always relying on her mother. The river gradually grew into an independent and strong child.
This story tells us that no matter what setbacks you encounter, don't give up hope, because everything will be fine.
Comment on the model essay of "Ten Years Old" in senior high school (Volume II)
Gorky said that "books are the ladder of human progress", and Cang Kejia once said that "reading a good book is like making a good friend". Reading can preserve our sanity, preserve our sanity and be reasonable.
In the afternoon, I sat quietly in the window of my study and gently opened Ten Years Old. The lines of short poems and exquisite illustrations deeply attracted me and made me enter the book, as if my soul were out of my body.
The hero of The River? A little girl who is only ten years old and my average age. Escaping from the war and drifting to a strange America experienced numerous setbacks and hardships, but the little girl did not give up, but bravely faced everything. The author described his strength, courage, optimism, persistence and loveliness in simple words.
Putting down the book, I can't help but get lost in thought. I am very lucky and happy. At the age of ten, I am happy and carefree, with the care of my parents, happy friends and a spacious and clean classroom ... "River" could have lived a simple and happy life with my family and partners like me. However, who broke this simple beauty so cruelly, and who made this ten-year-old girl experience family destruction and drift from place to place at the age when she should be happy and carefree? This is war, yes, this is war, and war is the culprit! It was the war that tore the country apart and shattered families ... but I don't understand, why start a war? What did the people who started the war think? Can't we live in peace and harmony as the teacher taught us? Is world peace an unreachable dream? "Help the children, want peace not war! For the mother not to lose her child, the child not to lose her father, and the wife not to lose her husband, the whole world should act in unison to maintain peace and stop the war! " Raleigh, the hero of the article A China Child's Voice, which I studied this semester, also lost his father because of the war. His powerful appeal and shouts echoed in my ears again and again.
Even in the 2 1 century, the world is not peaceful, and there are still wars threatening this delicate "flower of peace". But I firmly believe that as long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become better. As long as everyone acts to maintain peace and stop the war, I believe that one day the god of peace will remain in the world forever.
I admire the brave, strong and optimistic persistence of "He" in "Ten Years", and at the same time, "Ten Years" also made me understand that war has brought great disasters to mankind. Ten Years Old washed my soul and purified it. I am willing to be friends with books for life.
Comment on the third article of "Ten Years Old" high school model essay
During the summer vacation, I read the book Ten Years Old and described a story in the form of narrative poems. It won the Silver Award for Children's Literature in newbury and the National Book Award in the United States, and was listed as an Ivy League novel series.
The heroine, the little girl Jin He, tells her happiness and sadness from her perspective. When these stories are presented to us one by one, the language of poetry makes us feel more beautiful and sad.
The little girl Jin He is the youngest child in the family. She has three brothers? Brother Guang, Brother Wu and Brother Kui. Brother Guang told her that he remembered that Jinhe was red and fat when he was born, like a little hippo. The name came to his mind when he first met her? Rivers. Quigo said that the brocade box is mother's tail, because she and her mother are always inseparable.
When Jinhe's father left home for a naval mission, it was when Jinhe was one year old. He was stationed in the first team, an hour away from the south of the city, and was taken away by a moped. This is all that the Jinhe family knows. But when everyone knew that Dad would never come back, they stopped praying for his peace, but prayed for his eternal peace.
What did the war bring to people? The smell of war will not be captured by us at the earliest, so when the war comes, children are still concerned about the New Year and the fruits and flowers they planted. The motherland without war is so beautiful. However, when the children gradually realized that the war was coming, it seemed that the war had destroyed everything. The child lost his father, the mother was on tenterhooks all day, the brothers had their own plans, and the youngest daughter was full of confusion. War is the loss of relatives, homes and hometown.
On the way to escape, although we can have fun in suffering, the fear of leaving home has begun to erode the children's hearts. Next, relying on others, the little girl learned to look at strangers' faces. The war filled people's hearts with panic and timidity about strangers. Girls are bullied at school, and their lively and cheerful personality gradually becomes autistic and inferior. War is an irreparable psychological trauma for growing children.
Fortunately, Xiao Jinhe met a group of kind people to help her cheer up, regain her confidence and courage in life, and let her step by step out of the shadow of war.
This book let me see Jin He facing the war from the ordinary life fragments, from the initial confusion and helplessness to the later fear and timidity, and saw the beauty she lost and owned in the process of growing up, which made me see the coldness and cruelty of the war. Mankind's pursuit of peace has not changed from the beginning. However, in the face of war, ordinary people have no choice but to escape and pray. But she also made us understand that human beings are different from animals because we have a kind, compassionate and grateful heart. Maybe we can't choose the living conditions and environment, but we can choose to be kind and friendly and be a better person. What a precious quality!
Comment on the fourth essay of "Ten Years Old" senior high school.
My childhood was colorful and beautiful, but the author of Ten Years Old? Lai Qinghe, however, experienced a beautiful and strong growth and transformation in his childhood.
First of all, the article tells that Lai Qinghe has never seen her father since she was a child, and her hometown has been occupied, and she has experienced all kinds of hardships, but she has always treated it with a strong and optimistic attitude.
After her hometown was occupied, the family went to live in America. Lai Qinghe is always laughed at in American schools, and teachers always underestimate her learning ability. Being laughed at, she once felt inferior. Later, the teacher's conversation made her find her optimism and strength. I have never experienced war, but I still feel from this book that the harm of war to children is immeasurable.
When I was ten years old, I not only read new stories, but also learned new writing methods.
This is a novel in the form of poetry. The author's writing technique is unpretentious and his feelings are true and pure. After reading it, it seems that people see the ten-year-old author, naive, strong and lovely.
I am ten years old this year, and my life is full of songs and laughter. I really can't feel the author's experience, but I should learn from her optimism and strength. In future writing, express your true feelings.
Comment on the fifth essay of "Ten Years Old" in senior high school
During the summer vacation, I read the book Ten Years Old and described a story in the form of narrative poems. It won the Silver Award for Children's Literature in newbury and the National Book Award in the United States, and was listed as an Ivy League novel series.
The heroine, the little girl Jin He, tells her happiness and sadness from her perspective. When these stories are presented to us one by one, the language of poetry makes us feel more beautiful and sad.
The little girl Jin He is the youngest child in the family. She has three brothers? Brother Guang, Brother Wu and Brother Kui. Brother Guang told her that he remembered that Jinhe was red and fat when he was born, like a little hippo. The name came to his mind when he first met her? Rivers. Quigo said that the brocade box is mother's tail, because she and her mother are always inseparable.
When Jinhe's father left home for a naval mission, it was when Jinhe was one year old. He was stationed in the first team, an hour away from the south of the city, and was taken away by a moped. This is all that the Jinhe family knows. But when everyone knew that Dad would never come back, they stopped praying for his peace, but prayed for his eternal peace.
What did the war bring to people? The smell of war will not be captured by us at the earliest, so when the war comes, children are still concerned about the New Year and the fruits and flowers they planted. The motherland without war is so beautiful. However, when the children gradually realized that the war was coming, it seemed that the war had destroyed everything.
The child lost his father, the mother was on tenterhooks all day, the brothers had their own plans, and the youngest daughter was full of confusion. War is the loss of relatives, homes and hometown.
On the way to escape, although we can have fun in suffering, the fear of leaving home has begun to erode the children's hearts. Next, relying on others, the little girl learned to look at strangers' faces. The war filled people's hearts with panic and timidity about strangers. Girls are bullied at school, and their lively and cheerful personality gradually becomes autistic and inferior. War is an irreparable psychological trauma for growing children.
Fortunately, Xiao Jinhe met a group of kind people to help her cheer up, regain her confidence and courage in life, and let her step by step out of the shadow of war.
This book let me see Jin He facing the war from the ordinary life fragments, from the initial confusion and helplessness to the later fear and timidity, and saw the beauty she lost and owned in the process of growing up, which made me see the coldness and cruelty of the war. Mankind's pursuit of peace has not changed from the beginning. However, in the face of war, ordinary people have no choice but to escape and pray.
But she also made us understand that human beings are different from animals because we have a kind, compassionate and grateful heart. Maybe we can't choose the living conditions and environment, but we can choose to be kind and friendly and be a better person. What a precious quality!