"Soon under her body, it was woven into a big piece. She seems to be sitting on a piece of white snow, as well as a piece of white clouds. ""This lake is also a silvery white world. There is a thin transparent fog on the water, and when the wind blows, it carries fresh lotus leaves and lotus fragrance. "
Appreciation: The scenery description at the beginning creates a poetic atmosphere for the whole article, sets a beautiful background for characterization, and plays a good role in revealing the theme and promoting the rational development of the plot.
2. "It's almost noon now, there are no clouds in Wan Li, and there is still some cool wind on the water. This wind blows from the south, from the reed tips on the rice seedlings. There is not a boat on the water. Water is like endless diving silver. " It's almost noon, there is no boat on the water, and the endless water is surprisingly quiet. I can't see anyone, and of course I can't see my husband. This is a manifestation of women's frustration, melancholy and complaining about their husbands.
Water is like boundless jumping mercury. "It's almost noon, there is no boat on the water, the endless water is surprisingly quiet, there is no figure, and of course there is no husband. This is a manifestation of a woman's loss, melancholy and blaming her husband.
Appreciation: No Boat on the Water was written from disappointment to despair. The phrase "water is like endless diving silver" describes the frustration and confusion after despair. The "jump" of water is a true portrayal of this restless heart. The period between the two sentences describes this complicated psychological change process. If you use commas, this subtle change process will not be shown.
The scenery description in this paragraph also plays an important role, which is to lay the groundwork for the ambush in Baiyangdian below, because the lake is so strangely quiet and inaccessible, which is abnormal and a precursor to the ambush.
3. "They rushed to several acres of Lotus Lake with unknown size, and layers of big lotus leaves spread out against the sun, just like an iron wall. The pink lotus arrow stands tall and is a sentry to monitor Baiyangdian! "
Appreciation: The author writes that the lotus leaf "spreads out in layers" in the sun, showing the infinite vitality of the lotus leaf, and also writes that the lotus arrow "stands tall", showing the strong and upright temperament of the lotus leaf; The lotus leaf is like an iron wall, and the lotus arrow is like a sentry to monitor the invading enemy, which expresses the strong will and determination of heroic sons and daughters in Baiyangdian area to defend their hometown.
This kind of scene description combines the charming female beauty of flowers with the spiritual masculine beauty of flowers, giving people the infection of lofty revolutionary optimism. In the next plot, the team members in the water area lie in ambush in this beautiful lotus lake, and they hide under the lotus leaf. The dense layers of lotus leaves and lotus flowers have become the best bunker to protect soldiers and the battlefield to annihilate the invading enemy.
After the victory of the Anti-Japanese War, the soldiers "picked a large lotus on their heads to resist the midday sun", which is the embodiment of this strong revolutionary will and positive revolutionary optimism.
Literary appreciation:
The language of the novel is unpretentious, beautiful and smooth, and full of strong local flavor. His works are a collection of novels, essays and poems, and have a unique prose novel style. Just like a lotus with dew and water, it has a colorful style and is filled with refreshing and intoxicating fragrance. If the work begins to describe the scene of aquatic sister-in-law setting a banquet on a moonlit night, the author uses "snow" and "cloud".
For example, the big reed mat woven by women on the water also captures the fog, breeze, lotus fragrance and other things rich in water flavor, and a few lines show the amorous feelings of Lotus Lake.
Such beautiful scenery is intertwined with the lingering thoughts of the protagonist, forming a unique atmosphere. Then write the farewell of husband and wife, and the farewell language is plain, sincere and deep. These all set off each other naturally and harmoniously, and properly described the characteristics of the environment and the ideological life of the characters at that time.