Dear teachers and students:
Hello! The theme of my speech today is my motherland.
Although I am not a poet, I hope to praise my motherland with beautiful poems; Although I am not a scholar, I hope to gain insight into my motherland with profound thoughts; Although I am not a singer, I hope to sing my motherland with the most beautiful voice. Although I am only a middle school student, I want to collect gorgeous words in my mind, capture spring-like inspiration and construct the most beautiful poems in my heart. I want to sing the most dazzling carol in my heart with rich feelings-I love my motherland.
My dear motherland! You are like a cock standing in the east of the world with its head held high. In silence, you broke through the night with your first strong song and ushered in the morning. Magnificent songs are like the March of the Chinese nation, which combines the voice of1300 million people in China and the fervent feelings of every Chinese people, turning into thousands of criss-crossing rivers, with the blood of the nation flowing, and infiltrating into every corner of 9.6 million square kilometers with the rolling waves, on the land of China.
My great motherland, the Yangtze River is surging and the Yellow River is rolling. You have taught us to persevere and forge ahead with 5,000 years of running. Mount Qomolangma and Kunlun Mountain in Tianshan Mountain, you pointed your sword at the heroic spirit of nine days, which endowed us with indomitable personality. Motherland! It is your unyielding persistence that has created the soul of China. In my mind, you are an endless beautiful sea, an endless plain, a thousand miles of Gobi in Ordos, the yellow sand in Wan Li of Taklimakan, and the Great Wall of Wan Li, which stretches on the top of the mountain and winds in the north and south of the great river. Your broadness, your vicissitudes, your greatness and your kindness are gathered in my heart bit by bit and engraved in my heart.
Our lovely motherland! You have1300 million children. They are all like brothers. When one party is in trouble, all parties support, care for others and help each other in the same boat. In the face of the catastrophic flood, the lovely soldiers died, the cadres and the masses helped each other, and the army and the people were United. The raging flood finally subsided peacefully. The summit of Mount Everest and the soaring of China show your children's perseverance and self-improvement. In the face of "SARS", the people of China are United as one, and Qi Xin has made concerted efforts to shut it out. Antarctica is a world of ice and snow, but brave expedition members, regardless of the snow, built a medium-sized scientific research station in just 45 days, and the bright five-star red flag rose to that sky. ...
The yellow land in the past is now brightly lit and once fascinated by the universe. Now, the Shenzhou manned spacecraft has the dream of flying. Over the years, countless people with lofty ideals have sacrificed their young lives for you, and young hearts are chasing you and flying. How brave you are! I will struggle a thousand times and ten thousand times to add another light to you, because I am your daughter and my motherland. Please allow me to tell you my oath: count romantic numbers and look at the present.
My speech is over, thank you.
Brief comments:
Organizing the whole article in the form of a speech is a highlight of this paper. The three parallel paragraphs in the main part are promoted layer by layer, which makes the patriotic feelings of the little author surging and reckless.
Language like prose poetry is the cornerstone of the success of this paper. Whether it is the metaphor of "rooster" or the use of these majestic images of the Yangtze River, the Yellow River, the Tianshan Mountains and the Kunlun Mountains, it has become the perfect embodiment and true portrayal of the magnificent soul of China.
Coupled with the loud oath at the end of "counting romantic figures, but also looking at the present", the passionate patriotic enthusiasm of young authors naturally sublimated.
In short, the full text is novel in structure and fluent in writing, and the author's solid language skills are also evident.
Writing instruction:
The motherland is our mother. She not only gave birth to 5,000 years of culture, but also raised hundreds of millions of Chinese children. We in China respect and praise her, and are more willing to give all our youth and life for her. All this stems from our deep love for our motherland.
Patriotism is a noble emotion and the most precious spiritual wealth of a nation. It not only has great centripetal force and cohesion, but also is a bond that closely connects hundreds of millions of people. This kind of emotion transcends time and space and is deeply imprinted in the hearts of every China person.
"Patriotism" is a very broad topic. Generally speaking, it will not achieve the expected effect, but will affect the quality of the article. Therefore, you can write a better composition by using appropriate methods to plan the whole article.
1, turn the concept into an image.
"Patriotism" is an abstract concept. If we start from the concept, we will write the article empty, write a slogan and write a sermon. It is difficult to make the article rich in content and convincing in arguments. If students can turn this abstract concept into a tangible image, they will write articles with flesh and blood.
Think like this: Who is patriotic? We can name many, such as Qu Yuan, Li Bai, Du Fu and Lu You. Who is unpatriotic? There are many others, such as Qin Gui and Wang Jingwei.
What are the aspects of patriotism? Love the mountains and rivers of the motherland, every grass and tree, do you love the country? With such association, we can turn the abstract concept of "patriotism" into many concrete and sensible images, and then lay out, polish and sublimate the article on this basis, and we will write a good article.
2, learn to see the big from the small.
When it comes to "patriotism", most students will think of those typical and concrete scenes, events and things that can represent the spirit of the Chinese nation, as mentioned above. If everyone writes like this, there will be a thousand people and a thousand voices. Typical examples are of course important, but we should also turn the small into the big, see the big from the small, find another way, and write distinctive articles, such as the love of many national flags, not doodling on the RMB and so on. See the world in a grain of sand, start with small things and show patriotism. This is also a good method.
3. Try to have your own new ideas.
Innovation is the life of an article. Writing a "patriotic" composition is easy to be similar and similar. To avoid generalization and popularization, we must find a new angle to construct the content of the article with our own opinions.
For example, when writing "Meditation before Moonpowder", most students will write praises for Yue Fei's bravery and loyalty to the country; If we can discuss the difficulties and costs of patriotism from another angle and rely on Yue Fei's tragedy, we may be able to write a better article.
For example, when writing about Qu Yuan, can you create a scene where Qu Yuan is distributed by the river, analyze the natural environment and Qu Yuan's psychology at that time, and then use Qu Yuan's mouth to express his love for the motherland and the anguish and hesitation caused by patriotism? In short, different.
Excellent example:
Excellent works 1,
my motherland
A handful of loess, shaped into a million of you and me in Qian Qian. The vein is the Great Wall and the artery is the Yellow River.
Five thousand years of culture is your endless pulse; Wuyue and Huangshan are your old and beautiful faces; All over the country; That's your surging blood. This is you, my motherland.
The day of the motherland, "bleak autumn wind is today again, which has changed the world", and the land of the motherland "red rain turns into waves at will, and Qingshan intentionally turns into a bridge".
Motherland, my dear motherland, we remember your pride; How can we forget your shame?
China culture, which was far ahead of the world, has declined in modern times. The feudal rulers were arrogant and closed to the outside world. We left the world, and the world left you. Treaty of nanking, Beijing Treaty and treaty of shimonoseki burned Yuanmingyuan! Nanjing Massacre! I see your scar in my eyes and keep it in my heart!
Motherland, your children love you in their hearts! The war of liberation, 30 years of reform and opening up, we are trying to revitalize you! Rich and strong!
5. 12 earthquake destroyed the integrity of the motherland, but twisted the hearts of the people of the motherland together!
"Shenzhou VII" soared to the sky, once again interpreting the dream of the Chinese nation flying.
The successful hosting of the Beijing Olympic Games has realized the century-old dream of the Chinese nation. China won the first place in the total number of gold medals with indomitable spirit and strength, and started a new era in history.
"The motherland is in my heart", a simple six words, has conveyed the aspirations of many Chinese sons and daughters. It is precisely because of a China heart that the revolutionary martyrs shed their blood, and the Olympic athletes fought bravely and made great achievements. It is precisely because of patriotism that every Chinese descendant will have a boiling passion when he sees the five-star red flag flying in the wind.
Heroes are long gone. Throughout the ages, earth-shattering and weeping stories all tell a simple and simple belief-the motherland is in my heart.
As the pride of the motherland and the darling of the new era, how should we step into the world when we are in the prime of life? Study hard! Students!
Facing the magnificent rivers and mountains of the motherland, Mao Zedong, a great man, wrote an immortal poem: There are so many beautiful rivers and mountains, and the hero bends over! Today, we have more reason to believe that counting romantic figures depends on the present!
Brief comments:
A series of metaphors at the beginning of the exercise activated a "dragon" for the reader. Then, using intertextuality, he skillfully quoted Mao Zedong's poems, praised the ever-changing development and changes of New China, and his patriotism was vividly portrayed. This is empty writing.
Don't forget the shame, remember the achievements. This is real writing. The examples chosen by the author aroused the patriotic enthusiasm of China people everywhere. The end is flexible and powerful with great quotes.
The full-text language is concise, virtual and real, and the theme is prominent. But the fly in the ointment is that the ending is a bit far-fetched.
Masterpiece 2
my motherland
In my heart, there is a name that is more important than life, and that is China.
I can't tell you how beautiful the motherland is, but I know that Guilin's landscape is the best in the world, Yunnan in China is colorful, and the Great Wall in China is the most magnificent ... I can't tell you how long the history of the motherland is. But I know that there was printing in the Song Dynasty and the most advanced shipbuilding technology in the Ming Dynasty. Japanese tea ceremony was handed down from the Tang Dynasty. Our ancestor Genghis Khan once led an army to Europe, and the whole world surrendered to us ... I don't know how big the motherland is, but I know that the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau is the best in the world and Mount Everest is the best in the world. Everything makes me tremble deeply!
10.6, Mao Zedong solemnly announced to the world from Tiananmen Gate that the people of China and the Central People's Government of China had been established! The passionate and loud voice spread all over the country and all over the world by radio waves. Since then, the people of China, who account for a quarter of the world's population, have stood up, and the Chinese nation is no longer a nation subject to oppression and trampling.
After the founding of New China, in the face of the country's difficult situation, the whole party and the people of the whole country worked hard with one heart and one mind to tide over the difficulties together. Wang Jinxi, the "Iron Man" who "would rather live less than 20 years than desperately win the big oil field"; Jiao Youlu, a good cadre of the party who cares about the people, is willing to be a public servant and gives his life for the interests of the people; Qian Xuesen, the "father of Chinese missiles" who gave up the generous treatment of the United States and resolutely returned to China; Yuan Longping, the "father of hybrid rice" who contributed to the increase of grain production in China; Lei Feng, a selfless soldier who serves the people ... They are the representatives of the fundamental interests of the broad masses of the people, the backbone of the nation, and the foundation and pillar of supporting the country!
Our motherland is ancient and great, magnificent and eternal. 1970 in April, China successfully launched the first artificial earth satellite-"Dongfanghong-1", and China's space industry began. June 5438+1October 65438+May 2003, China astronaut Yang Liwei went into space in the "Shenzhou 5" spacecraft, realizing the Chinese nation's dream of flying. On September 28th, 2008, China astronauts returned safely after successfully completing the extravehicular task. The manned space flight of Shenzhou VII was a complete success, which laid the foundation for China's "Chang 'e Plan" to further explore space.
During the Olympic Games last year, when the five-star red flag was raised again and again, when the Olympic record and the world record were broken again and again, it was the most exciting moment for our people. This is an Olympic Games that creates miracles and transcends dreams. During the grand event, 38 world records were born, and the China delegation jumped to the top of the gold medal list for the first time ... one outstanding achievement after another, one brilliant moment after another, which made mankind proud and attracted the world's attention.
These landmark achievements have washed away the century-old humiliation of the Chinese nation, revived national dignity, and proved to the world that the Chinese nation is a tenacious nation, an unyielding nation and an enterprising nation.
Our happiness comes from China. Only when the country is rich and strong can there be happiness and well-being of the people of the whole country. The history of China tells us: "Three points are doomed by heaven, and seven points depend on hard work". The unchanging theme of our middle school life is to study hard and get a good job, which may sometimes be frustrated, but "plum blossoms will come naturally without some cold." Work hard! Fight! Young people in China, today we are the hope of the motherland, and tomorrow we will be the pillars of the motherland. Let's open up a new blue sky for the soaring of the Chinese nation!
Brief comments:
The beginning of the article comes straight to the point, which sets the patriotic emotional tone for the full text. Then, with a series of fluent compound sentence, he deeply praised the magnificent rivers and mountains, long history and vast territory of the motherland.
Then, the article reviews the motherland's yesterday and today in chronological order and looks forward to the future of the nation. The clever use of this "montage" technique makes readers unconsciously wander in the "thousand-mile gallery" of the motherland's history, witness the vicissitudes of the motherland with empathy and experience the author's patriotic feelings.
It is not surprising if it is only a list of the landmark achievements of the motherland. What is commendable is that at the end of the article, the little author made some speculations on the relationship between the state and the individual, and sent out the feeling that "plum blossoms are not cold", which added a magnificent atmosphere to the full text and shocked people.
The article comes to an abrupt end, and readers can't help thinking deeply: how should we spend our lives?