Paradise in the market
Discussion on the text
Grasp the poem as a whole and draw a conclusion.
The Legend of Cowherd and Weaver Girl in Ancient China. Borrowing novel and rich associations and imagination, it depicts beautiful daytime and street scenes, and expresses the poet's thoughts and feelings of getting rid of feudal shackles, pursuing ideals and yearning for freedom and happiness.
Early poems are often recreated by using myths and legends to express their feelings and ideals. Boldly imagining the whimsy in his works embodies the creative function of the poet's romanticism. "Paradise Market" also has the above characteristics, as follows:
(A) choose myths and legends as the theme.
The myth and legend of the ancient cowherd in China and this poem are based on specific application procedures. According to his own wishes and ideals, the poet boldly transformed his life, discarding the tragedy of life's difficulty in reunion and the new content of freedom and happiness. In the poet's imagination, the cowherd galloped freely between the liberated shallow Tianhe River. Their life is so happy: "I think they will definitely go to the streets at this moment/don't believe it, look at the meteor/lantern." The autocratic queen mother no longer exists, and what is presented to them is a free life. A loving couple, ploughing and weaving, I strolled leisurely in the beautiful and prosperous lanterns. What a free change, expressing the poet's yearning and pursuit for a better life.
(2) Use association and imagination.
At the beginning of this poem, the poet saw street lamps scattered not far away, and now time is hidden, like stars in the sky, natural "street lamps" and "stars" with metaphors and rhetorical devices. The concrete performance of the association not only depicts a beautiful night, but also implies the pursuit of a better future and dissatisfaction with the dark reality. This is associated with a "Lenovo" with a strong fantasy color, which attracts readers' attention from human beings to heaven and depicts the paradise market, as follows.
3. The use of imagination paves the way, depicting the furniture of Tianjie, the life of the cowherd and the weaver girl, and their activities. The "fairyland" imagined by the poet, coupled with the objective existence of the "Galaxy" meteor, seems to be concrete and truly beautiful exotic projects, such as fairs, markets, cowherd and cattle riding, cowherd and lanterns. In the poet's pen, the perfect combination of the actual scenes in myths and legends is specious, which arouses readers' infinite reverie and pursuit of traveling in fairyland and the author's imagination, thus feeling the poet's beautiful feelings of pursuing ideals.
study
(1) How does this poem gradually expand its imagination? What is the purpose of the poet's imagination?
Tip: step by step, lack of imagination:
street lamp
star
→ Sky Market → Display the items in the Sky Market.
→ Cowherd and Weaver Maid Freedom
(2) What do you mean by "Jiang" that appears every four times in the three poems?
Tip: "It will definitely be", indicating that they have set the tone. The content of the description obviously comes from imagination, but the emphasis is positive and full of confidence in the bright future of this ideal world, so it is infectious and encouraging to read. Stars who think the market is in the sky, there are many other beautiful things.
(3) The world market, street lamps, is the imagination too exaggerated? Why do poets write?
Tip: the poet's world market, street lamps naturally think of the sky market. The sky is high and the clouds are light. The Milky Way is really like a shallow bay. Do the obstacles on both sides of the savage look the same? So the author's whim-Cowherd and Weaver Girl walking in the street on this day-seems reasonable. It should be said that the poet's series of associations and imaginations, real scenes and real life reflect the emotions and thoughts at a specific time.
In addition, you need to pay attention to the fact that the stars in the sky are definitely within the reach of poets and the author of "Human Street Lamps". From the visual point of view, there is no obvious boundary between street lamps and stars, which also provides the basis of association from here.
tranquil night
Discussion on the text
, overall grasp
The wording and style of a poem "Silent at Night" are very similar to "Market in the Sky", so focusing on "Market in the Sky" at the end of the year can guide students to learn the same poem.
The title of the poem is "The Shu Road is Difficult to Pass", the most inky poem, which depicts the tranquility of the night. The poem in section 1 depicts a very unusual picture: pine trees bathed in moonlight outside the village, white clouds in the sky and starlight. These opinions are that it is easy to see people in daily life. Through poetry, readers seem to see the poet alone in the dead of night and draw nearby houses, so that they can watch the faint moonlight, the forest with dim shadows in the moonlight and look up at the clouds to avoid Liu Shuxing for free. "This simple question is the realm of poetry, in order to expand and improve the reader's vision and mind to the vast universe. The author seems to want to lead the reader's thoughts to "extreme greed" and "wandering Wan Ren", and seems to want the reader's eyes to see the infinity in the depths of the stars through the boundless night, but then a distant sea fog is blurred, and the reader just pulls our hearts back. The fuzzy sea fog in this book can block people's sight, but the unstoppable heart can't stop flying and escape the imagination of wild horses. At this point, I think far-"I'm afraid there will be sharks coming ashore/floating beads on the moon?" This is a good proof that the poet's imagination really crossed the vast sea fog. People standing on the shore imagine sharks, silently crying, pearl necklaces, the moon ... crying with joy, or crying? Or unlimited ideas? It left readers with endless aftertaste. This is a poem, this is Guo Moruo's poem! Imagination, Guo's imagination! After one's imagination, the former king was a dull, lifeless and energetic king, but after one's imagination, the common scene became ethereal and beautiful. It is particularly worth mentioning that although the two poems are realistic and imaginative, the difference between * * * and writing a word "static" is that the atmosphere of this poem is harmonious and unified.
Second, research
poetry
The poetic structure is "difficult to bypass" and "the structure of Tianshi" is very similar: on the basis of the previous scenery, it has become an imaginary world and ended unexpectedly, which makes people have endless aftertaste and disappointment! Therefore, in the teaching process, students are required to find out the similarities and differences between the two poems in this respect.
(b) Based on the scenery-imagine.
After reading two poems, we will find that the poet's imagination is based on the scenery in front, because it can be assumed that if only the scenery can't be imagined, there will be a wonderful finishing touch, and if the scenery is not written directly, it will appear awkward and unnatural, like water without a source and wood without a root. Only the two are integrated into an artistic whole, giving people artistic beauty. And this is also a process of understanding. Only when they are moved, what they see is emotion, and further extensive and in-depth association and imagination writing are always linked with their own life experiences, activating their imagination and writing extraordinary and wonderful articles.
(3) What should I do if I am afraid of falling beads on the shark shore/moon? "
Guide the students to understand the full text and viewpoints, and if necessary, explain the record in Nature: "China Nanhai water shark people are like fish forever, and they don't waste non-woven fabrics, and their eyes are crying."
practice
Read and recite two poems. In my own words, in the imaginary world of poetry.
The simplicity and catchy rhythm of American poetry should return to the future. "Two poems describing the world imagination in one's own words" is actually a kind of rewriting, another kind of copying or recycling of poetry scenes and activities, so as to deepen feelings, cultural associations and imagination, which should allow students to make reasonable supplements and play.
The answer is not uniform, describe the best understanding and personality characteristics. On a quiet night, the poem Shark can also give students a reasonable reason.
Model, use your imagination and imagination to write the following sentences. (Optional two questions)
Example: The stars in the sky seem to point to countless street lamps.
1。 Morning glory opens ......
2。 Parrot cage, ......
3。 The moonlight shines on the ground, ......
4。 When I left her parents. ......
Play association and imagination and write a sentence, the purpose of which is to guide students to associate imagination training. What Lenovo should pay attention to from here is that there must be similarities. Imagine the analogy between Lenovo's things and vehicles, so it is best not to ask Lenovo to do the same thing, but it is also necessary for Lenovo to do the United States.
The answer does not seek to encourage students to associate with various similar societies.
cowboy
Three people observe the night sky, cowherd and weaver girl, find their astronomical knowledge and information, and write an article.
In order to stimulate students' interest and enthusiasm, the materials are all found voluntarily. Write articles and communicate in class.
Teaching suggestion
It is necessary to introduce the poet and historical background, but the content should be accurate, highlight the key points, introduce the poet's emotional experience and thoughts in the two poems written by 192 1, and tell us the general characteristics of "stars" by the way to help students understand the thoughts and feelings of the two poems. Students can also be organized to recite the "stars" in poems after class.
Introduce two different concepts: association and imagination. The so-called association is other things that need to be considered in the psychological process. Recalling things, other things, or things that come to mind, they think other things are associations. All kinds of related things reflected by objective things in the mind are always linked together, forming all kinds of associations: things closely related in space or time, similar characteristics, forming similar associations, and the reasons for the causal relationship between opposing associations and things that affect associations. The so-called imagination is the psychological process of creating a new image on the basis of the original perceptual image. The consciousness accumulated after these new image processing transformations. People can imagine an unconscious image or something that hardly exists, but the content of imagination always comes from objective reality. Of course, in the actual teaching process, students should explain the specific images of this poem abstractly, but only by combining them can students understand what the association and imagination of this poem are and understand the importance of association and imagination of this poem.
Familiar with the basics of aesthetic reading, guide students to retell poems, expand writing, rewrite and re-create, cultivate students' association and imagination, and accumulate creative thinking through experience.
4. The beautiful artistic conception and soothing rhythm of the two poems have the charm and charm of classical poetry and are suitable for reading aloud. Strengthen reading guidance, distinguish rhythm, read accurate stress and read feelings. Play the tape as a model, read it repeatedly, and it is best to recite it in class. The general principle of reading is to grasp the beautiful, quiet, comfortable, fresh and slightly melancholy emotional tone of the two poems. The rhythm of speech should not be strong, the voice should not be loud, the speed of speech should not be fast, and it should be relaxed, soft and soothing. Can be used to read and refer to the rhythm and intonation of the following two poems:
The market in the sky is far/near/clear.
As if/flashing/countless/stars.
Days/stars/
It seems/lights/countless/street lamps.
I think/ethereal/air
/beautiful/market affirmation.
Market/monitoring/some/projects,
Absolutely/the world//rare.
You see,/Shallow/Galaxy,
Definitely//width.
Across the river//Cowherd/Weaver Girl
Dingneng/Riding a Bull/Harmony.
I think//At that moment,
I will definitely//travel.
Don't believe it,//That meteor,
/carrying/carrying lanterns/walking.
tranquil night
Moonlight/touch
/village/pine trees are shrouded.
White clouds/clouds
Leak/point/comfort.
Tianhe/where is it?
Far away/foggy/hazy.
Fear of sharks/beaches,
Moon/beads?