Keywords: Butterfly Primary School Grade Four
This article applies to: the fourth grade of primary school.
Composition source:
This 400-word composition is about the fourth grade of primary school. The title is Hua Hudie-two imitations. Everyone is welcome to contribute.
Original text:
Flowers and butterflies
Flowers are flightless butterflies,
Butterflies are flying flowers.
Butterflies are flying flowers,
Flowers are flightless butterflies.
Flowers are butterflies,
Butterflies are also flowers.
Brief analysis
"Flowers are butterflies that can't fly, and butterflies are flying flowers. Flowers are butterflies, butterflies are flowers "simple words outline a wonderful picture of nature: a few dancing butterflies, a garden full of delicate flowers." "Sometimes, butterflies stand between stamens and become flightless flowers; Sometimes, flowers move with the wind and sway, and a group of flying butterflies in Wan Ru show their demon posture in the sun. ...
Appropriate and vivid metaphors and lively poems show readers a harmonious and wonderful drunken scene of "butterfly lovers".
Imitation one:
Street lamps and stars
Stars are dancing street lamps,
Street lamps are stars that can't dance.
Street lamps are stars that can't dance,
Stars are dancing street lamps.
Stars are street lamps,
Street lamps are also stars.
Make an appreciative comment
The stars blinked on the Tianhe River, glowing with soft light, making the earth look quiet and hazy. Street lamps are elves in the dark. It is aloof from the world, always spreading light silently and dedicating love to those who come home late.
Stars and street lamps, one in the sky and the other on the ground, are engaged in the lofty cause as angels.
Imitate "words"
Mother said, "I like flowers and butterflies very much." In a few words, the poet expressed them clearly, emotionally and vividly! "
The daughter said, "There are many irises downstairs, which look like butterflies. Sometimes butterflies lie motionless on flowers, really like butterflies. "
Mother said: "The poet grasped the similarities between the two, so he had this fresh and lovely poem. Think about it, can we also find two similar things in life? Maybe you can become a parody poet! "
My daughter is suddenly interested. But no particularly similar connection was found.
So, the mother and daughter put it down. And smile at each other.
In the evening, mother and daughter go out for a walk together. The lights on both sides of the road are flashing soft orange light. Suddenly looked up, but was hit by the stars in the Milky Way. So, my mother asked softly, "Why are there so many street lamps?"
The daughter said, "Street lamps are used to illuminate people who come back late after working overtime at night!" " "
"Very good, there are so many street lamps on both sides of the road!" Mother enjoyed it with joy. I can't help asking, "Why do the stars come out at night?"
"There are people who work overtime in the sky. Look, WU GANG is still cutting down trees! Hey, where's WU GANG? The moon at the moment is really like a boat, so curved! "
"Haha, is our little poet inspired now?" The daughter seems to think of the beautiful "Hua Hudie" under her mother's tickling. ...
Thus, there was "Streetlight Stars" and "Moon Boat". Although simple, it also hides the little girl's observation and imagination.
Imitation 2:
Crescent Moon and Boat
The curved moon is a small boat that can't swim.
A boat is a swimming meniscus.
A boat is a swimming meniscus.
The curved moon is a small boat that can't swim.
The curved moon is a boat,
The ship is also a meniscus.
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