Cui (Member of Chinese Writers Association, Deputy Director of Poetry Creation Committee of Beijing Writers Association):
Jianjun is beautiful. His romance is almost childish, which is rare in the current poetry world. Stars, the moon, clouds, flowers and plants are common images in army-building poems. He used these common images to describe his ideals, love and pursuit of life.
Shi Daxin (member of Chinese Writers Association and vice chairman of Guangzhou Writers Association):
Language is like a star, shining. Language, like fireflies, flashes. Language is like a mirror, which can reflect light. Because of this, the partner that language needs most is darkness, and darkness will make things that shine more powerful. Jianjun's poems are rich in imagination and beautiful in images, which increase the emotional dimension, widen the psychological distance and make the emotion of the poems more lasting, sincere and touching. In addition, between the lines, there is a writing mentality that is not utilitarian. Cai Qifa (deputy editor-in-chief of Overseas Poetry magazine):
Although "The First Step" does not intuitively write the first step for children to leave their parents' arms. However, it is more about describing the surrounding scenery and writing about the vividness of plants. And a scene of "warmth flowing at home" can still be regarded as a freeze of love between "mother and father", and the poems are realistic and wise, which is commendable.
Wasteland changes people (editorial board of Poetry magazine): The first step is not many lines, but the meaning is complete. Have their own unique vision, the ability to master the text is familiar, so simple, concise and appropriate. You have everything you need, so this is a good poem.
Yang Xiaoming (Senior Editor of a Beijing Culture Publishing Company):
Like poetry, Jianjun's poems are rich and profound in poetry, which can be read, thought and realized, making people cherish life and life, thinking and embracing nature and the world.
Xiao Hai (Executive Editor of Hengyang Daily and Huxiang Weekly):
If prose is the coat of building the army, poetry is his privacy, and it is his "little honey" hidden in the secret room. ..... Jianjun's poem is "Apricot Flowers and Spring Rain in the South of the Yangtze River", which is naturally lyrical, concise and lively, full of flavor and touching.