Do these two sentences conform to the rhythm of ancient poetry? Tanjiang fishing boat brigade, obsessed with thinking about falling jade. Whoever wants to splash ink on the sleeve, I will start writin

Do these two sentences conform to the rhythm of ancient poetry? Tanjiang fishing boat brigade, obsessed with thinking about falling jade. Whoever wants to splash ink on the sleeve, I will start writing Preface to Lanting. Just plain, just plain.

Tanjiang fishing fire leaf boat brigade,

Ping, ping, ping, ping.

Perseverance brings missing a piece of jade.

Flat and flat, flat and flat.

Who wants to splash ink on their sleeves,

Flat and light, flat and light.

I'm about to start writing the Preface to Lanting.

Dear, the rhyme of poetry is flat, and your flat almost doesn't meet the requirements of poetry rhythm. You must be a seven-character poem. Generally speaking, there are four basic sentence patterns in writing poetry, which are divided into A, B, C and D. Let me introduce you to the silent sentence first, and the seven-character rhyme will naturally be understood. A: Pingping B: Pingping Ping Bing: Pingping D: Pingping Ping.

Poetry should start with these four sentence patterns. A and C are the first sentences that don't rhyme, and B and D are the first sentences that rhyme. Then write the parallelism behind the poem according to the methods of "paste" and "right". Take sentence pattern a as an example:

Very flat, very flat.

be plain and simple

Flat and light.

It is flat.

Very flat, very flat.

be plain and simple

Flat and light.

It is flat.

Here, the first sentence and the second sentence are opposite and correct; The first two layers of the third sentence are the same as the second sentence, and the last three words are the reverse order of the last three words of the second sentence, which is sticky. This is for my own convenience to understand and remember.

I forgot to say that the second sentence of B-D is different. ) The latter method is the same.

There is also the problem of hard work. Let's not talk about this for the time being, in case you are confused. Here is a sentence: 135 doesn't matter, 246 is clear. These are seven words. It means that the first, third and fifth words in a poem may not be leveled according to the rules, but the second, fourth and sixth words must be leveled according to the rules and cannot be changed, that is, leveled or leveled.

So your poems are silent in the end, which does not conform to the norms of poetry. Basically, the level also needs to change. You can think about it yourself first.

I hope it will help you, please adopt it if you are satisfied!