For their one-year-old children, blind parents set up ladders for those who are not afraid of mud and stones with thin shoulders;
A 70-year-old grandmother used her fragile back as the biggest shelter for her grandchildren who were sleeping in her arms. ...
We are indomitable about life; In order to live, we always do. Because life is precious, precious life needs our care and deserves our care.
Life comes from nature, which is difficult and dangerous. Any slight environmental change will lead to premature death. Look at the extinction of many species, and you will know how fragile life groups are. As far as the individual of life is concerned, it is weaker and more fragile. Needless to say, human beings are facing threats such as diseases and disasters. It is more difficult for small creatures to live in nature. But the power of life is shocking, even for weak animals and plants. Tiny seeds cherish the gift of heaven and keep working hard. Roots are desperately drilling down, and buds are desperately squeezing up. Even in the hard stone pile, they are not afraid, just to accept the love of the breeze and the bath of the sun. A little ant didn't waste his life for a rare life. He is diligent and busy. Gecko in the corner can give up his tail without hesitation in order to prolong his life. These humble animals and plants can't bear the loss of life in vain, try to enjoy the fun of life and fight tirelessly. How can we humans who call ourselves primates ignore the existence of life?
Life is great, life is lofty, and no one will give up life easily. Everyone's heart is full of longing for life, so are healthy people and people with physical inconvenience. Healthy people strive for good health from their parents, while disabled people strive for persistence in life. When we admire the starry sky and experience the magic of the universe, Hawking is exploring unknown substances in the universe with his two movable fingers. When we swam across the lake and rippled in the blue breeze, Hasenmayer was exploring the mystery of the bottom of the deep lake; When we open the books and enjoy one pleasing article after another, Zhang Haidi may be on the collapse of the bed, struggling to write her desire for life; When we stopped in the Woods and watched the dead leaves falling in the rustling autumn wind, Shi Tiesheng might be immersed in the reverie of life. These incomplete lives strive for life without regret, because they know that life is unyielding and precious.
Montaigne once said: "Our life is endowed by nature, and it is superior." Life is precious, without it, we will have nothing. However, many living people always don't cherish the right to live. They treat themselves at will, and even trample on other people's lives: Chechen explosion, Palestinian-Israeli conflict, "prisoner abuse" by the US military, coal mine flooding, house collapse, lovelorn suicide, network death ... These heavy events warn us that life is so expensive; How precious life is!
When you breathe, when your heart beats, please remember: life is precious, precious life; Caring for life, playing the strongest voice that touches people's hearts.
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This paper first outlines three shocking scenes of caring for life with concise pen and ink, thus pointing out the value of life, and then reveals the fragility, resistance and persistence of life by quoting, giving examples and comparing, and profoundly expounds the significance of cherishing and caring for life. The full text is rich in materials and accurate in examples. Many sentences are concise, chewy and thought-provoking. In particular, the exposition of "incomplete life strives for the persistence of life" is very wonderful and poetic, which can be called a masterpiece.
The slight deficiency is that the language in the fifth paragraph (that is, several examples of weak animals and plants) is not concise enough.
Let the fire of life burn
The vast wilderness is endless. When the ape-man walked out of the forest and embarked on a journey, was he at a loss? The road ahead is long, not to mention the tiger's teeth are ready to go, not to mention the greedy eyes of the serpent. Cold wind, ice and rain alone are enough to make him miserable. However, a flash of lightning tore through the sky, bringing hope for life. Yes, that's it, fire!
Fire is hope. With fire, human beings have the basic strength for survival and development. Use fire to drive away wild animals and use fire to resist the cold, so that human beings can survive; Fire is used to reclaim land, build homes, cook food with fire, and bid farewell to unpalatable raw meat. With fire, human beings can grow and develop. Otherwise, how could Shakespeare shout in Hamlet: "Man, the primate of the universe, the essence of all things!" How can there be such a civilized and prosperous earth? Fire is the hope of mankind.
Hope is a flame. A promising life is like the warmth, vitality and smell of a fire. A hopeless life is like a lifeless pool of ice water, cold and lifeless, unhappy all day long, because there is no fire.
What made Sima Qian bear the burden of humiliation, travel all over Qian Shan, search for historical sites, collect information, endure secular cynicism, and finally become Historical Records, which is "Li Sao, a masterpiece of historians without rhyme"? It is hope, and it is the hope of "learning from heaven and man, understanding the changes of ancient and modern times, and becoming a family statement."
What makes a miner go deep underground but try his best to survive? This is a hope, a hope of survival. Like fire, play the potential of life and tap human instinct. After dozens of days of torture, I still have a firm will, and I don't give up or back down.
What kept Zhong Nanshan calm in the face of the devastating attack of SARS? What makes angels in white go forward and face up to SARS? It is hope, it is the hope of victory, and it will continue to move forward in the rapids.
The charm of hope is that even in adversity, it can stimulate your inner potential.
The greatness of hope lies in sailing forward even in misfortune.
The power of hope lies in that even if failure frustrates the present, it can inspire you to keep moving forward.
Hope is like a fire, igniting your life, making it appear in the burning and showing its true value in the glow.
Then, please light the fire of your life, let the burning fire reflect your true self, light up your way forward, and make life eternal in creating truth, goodness and beauty!
[Comment] This paper is an exam-oriented composition based on the title composition "Fire" in the quality inspection of senior three in 2004. The author draws a central argument from the great effect of "fire" on human beings: fire is the hope of human beings. Then use three examples to demonstrate from different angles. Sima Qian used "fire" to ignite ideals, miners used "fire" to ignite their desire for survival, and Zhong Nanshan used "fire" to ignite their belief in winning. The example is true and credible. The discussion at the end deepens the central argument and gives people upward motivation.