The sense of space in poetry

The sense of space is the most common creative technique in poetry works, and its function is to strengthen the sense of space in visual pictures.

Examples are as follows:

There are thousands of waters in Qian Shan, but the last bird flies over.

Countless trails without human traces.

Lonely boat and an old man in a Juncus cloak and hat.

Fishing in a lonely boat

This is a spherical three-dimensional space map. Under the cover of heavy snow, Qian Shan's scenic spots are vast and chaotic, shrinking from the middle of Qian Shan's scenic spots and concentrating on one visual spot, leaving only one boat, one Weng and one fishing rod.

The final finale of this spatial layout is only one word-snow!

If there is no snow, the vast chaos above and the broad visual effect cannot be established.

Therefore, the master asked for literature, and this broad composition has long been formed in his heart. The next step is how to weave with words.

Look at the next example:

Two orioles and green willows

Egrets line up into the sky.

My window framed the snow-covered western hills.

My door often says "goodbye" to ships sailing eastward.

This is another way of spatial layout. A poem can be divided into four groups: green willows, orioles, egrets in the sky, snowy mountains and boating.

The spatial layout is stable and balanced, with bright colors and clear lines. Feel pleasing to the eye, spacious and bright.

Looking at it separately, it is four groups of four independent landscapes, which are combined and merged in one go.

Look at the third situation:

The fence is built very thin, and the path leads far away.

The new leaves at the head of the tree have no shadow.

A chased yellow butterfly seeks refuge in rape blossoms.

Flying in and out is nowhere to be found.

This is an excellent spring landscape map! On the surface, it seems that you can't see the spatial layout, and the winding path leads to the depths. Trees with immature leaves and a flower field are all static plane presentations. The pen of dispelling lies in the fact that God lies in flying Huang Die and naughty and lovely children, and the still scenery is stirred up at once. Winding paths, trees in spring, and cauliflower fields where butterflies are flying, especially that one, are chased by butterflies.

This is the living space! There is not only space, but also fun and plot.

The poet's greatest ability is to what extent he can arouse readers' association and make a second creation in his words.

There is no second way, just leave this space in advance in your own words.

! The most typical example is the wordless tablet in Ganling, Shaanxi!