Poet Mingyue Huanghua’s high school composition

One, the bright moon on the east slope

Langtaosha

Living in the Yellow City, holding a lamp in the wind, holding the yellow sky and sighing at the hero. In the past, Bianhe River was a beautiful place, but it was difficult to walk on it.

Success or failure is left to the West and the East, this hatred is endless, who will be with me for the sake of pride? I have been in charge of misty rain all my life, and I have been flying in the snow.

I specially wrote this poem to Su Shi after he was demoted. Dongpo's life was extremely ups and downs: the twists and turns of love, the frustration of official career, the struggle of the political whirlpool, and the unhappiness of being full of grievances.

His family, who are full of hope for him, his friends who have gone through disasters, and the people who are loved by him all hope that he will be able to show his talents, prosper in officialdom, and help the world and the people. However, Dongpo knew that if fate was not favorable, the dark door of official career would never tolerate such a liberal-minded Su Dongpo.

So, he exchanged his fame and wealth for "bamboo sticks and mango shoes". On the night when the moon was missing and the trees were hanging, he sang "The Great River Goes East" and felt that "life is so similar everywhere, just like a flying giant stepping on a tree" "Snow mud" is indifferent, he is not touched by "meager profits and vain fame", and only wants to "spend the rest of his life in the sea".

Su Dongpo, who knew himself, walked out calmly from the narrow gate of politics. Although he was contrary to everyone’s expectations, he allowed us to see through a bold, indifferent, open-minded and enlightened scholar of Su University—— A generation of literary giants.

Knowing oneself is the bright moon of Dongpo, shining on him as he enters the long river of history heading east.

2. Yi'an's Yellow Flowers

Nanlou Ling

Suyue sent a lonely boat, only the shadow followed the water, the home was broken, and there was only one residual wine. How can weak wine resist the strong evening wind, rain in the parasol trees, and a little bit of sadness?

Climbing the stairs alone at night, my brows furrowed with hatred, my yellow flowers are thin, the sound of wild geese cuts off the autumn, a stream of falling flowers fills Tingzhou, I am suffering from wandering, when will I rest?

This poem is written by me for Li Qingzhao, who has been wandering through many hardships.

A strange woman full of sentimentality, suffering from the desolation of her country, the pain of losing her husband, and the pain of changing her fortune.

The moment she married the Zhao family at the age of sixteen, everyone hoped that she would be a good wife who would live a prosperous life, be happy, and take care of her husband and children. However, with the changes in the world and the suffering caused by war, Yi An was always looking for his own happiness, but he was always suppressed by the atmosphere of darkness and miserable. He struggled to survive in the troubled times, and in the end he lost his way back. The boat on the stream carried the youth, but it could not carry the sorrow.

So, Yi An let go of her melancholy and gave up the fleeting yellow flowers in her hands. She had seen through the vicissitudes of life. When the wild goose returned, she diligently revised the "Inscriptions on the Stone". On the cold rainy night of the phoenix tree, After researching and writing "Ci of Shuyu" and re-recognizing himself, Yi An lit a lone lamp in the darkness and staggered across.

Knowing oneself is like the easy yellow flower, which passes away with the wind. It is sad but not sad. There is hard work and beauty in the sorrow. Although its color is different from the color in the hearts of the world, it can always show Strange brilliance.

Comments from the marking teacher

The most prominent feature of this article is its profound language skills. The whole text is fluent and full of poetry and painting. In particular, he was able to compose two poems as the beginning of each part in a very short examination time. His literary talent was outstanding and extraordinary. Although the words filled in do not fully meet the metrical requirements, they are still outstanding, which shows that the candidate has read a lot, has high literary accomplishment and excellent Chinese quality.