Composition title: Where is the wind
Keywords: 300 words for the third grade of primary school
Word count: 300 words composition
This article is suitable for: The third grade of primary school
Source of the composition:
This composition is a 300-word composition about the third grade of primary school. The title is: "Where is the Wind". Everyone is welcome to contribute. No one has seen the wind, not to mention you and me. But when the wind is blowing in the air, we know that the wind is there. No one has seen the wind, not to mention you and me. But when the sea dances, we know the wind is there. No one has seen the wind, not to mention you and me. But when the fallen leaves float to the ground, we know the wind is there. Famous teacher's comment: The wind is invisible, but the young author uses external objects to let readers "see" the wind. The poetry concept is relatively novel, the format is neat and uniform, and the rhythm is also very distinct. "But when the sea is dancing, we know that the wind is there." The personification of rhetoric is also used very well, which enhances the vividness of the article. The sentence "No need to talk about you and me" in the poem seems a bit superfluous. "No one saw the wind" includes "you and me". It is recommended that this sentence in the poem be deleted. In "But when the wind was blowing in the air", the word "got" was changed to "of". What does the wind look like when it is blowing in the air? It is recommended to change it to "But when the wind blows the red flag in the air."
(Xuele China Distinguished Teacher: Teacher Wang Yunlian) 2009-11-7 18:44:00