Human feelings include: smell-nose, sight-eyes, taste-mouth and tongue, hearing-ears, touch-many parts of the body. In this way, in addition to the horizon, there are many insights, and you can also write wonderful articles. For example, Liu Zongyuan's Ode to Autumn Sound basically relies on hearing to describe the scenery. Li Zhao's "Li Mou plays the flute at night" "Li Mou plays the flute in Guazhou at autumn night, and the boat is very narrow. At the beginning of the tune, the masses are resting. A few minutes later, the breeze came quietly. After a while, the boatman Jia Ke complained about the sound of crying. " The scenery here is in the sense of hearing.
Zhou Jiadi, a blind poet, lost his bright eyes, but saw the world more thoroughly.
In literary creation, the thinking of writers and poets is extremely active. The feelings between people are borrowed and communicated with each other. Poets' sensory organs should communicate openly with each other in their poems. Just as Liu Xie said, "Poets have a sense of things and endless associations". When the poet's feelings surge, his hearing, smell, vision, taste and touch become very close and sensitive. Thus, in the poet's wandering world, the sound has a shape, the flowers have a song, and the fragrance has a color. ...
Rhetorically, it is called "telepathy" or "synaesthesia". For example, the spring breeze is green in Jiang Nanan (Wang Anshi: boating in Guazhou). The author turns the tactile spring breeze into a visual "green" image, which makes people feel the charm of the spring breeze strongly.
"It sounds like a cicada sitting on a tree in the forest/watering lilies." (Homer's epic) The sound is transformed into a flowing liquid with the fragrance of lilies, and the poet uses visual images to describe the beauty of the sound. If the image of poetry is not deformed by other senses, the sound is indescribable.
Pupils' compositions often give people a feeling of boredom and emptiness. So the teacher asked them to read more books and practice more, but these two points are not easy to do. Pupils have the nature that children should have, and their minds are difficult for adults to understand. In addition to reading and writing training, teachers should also teach children to use some writing skills to increase the observability of compositions on the basis of existing knowledge. This can increase children's interest in writing and reduce the pain in the writing process.
Ordinary people have five ways of feeling: seeing, hearing, smelling, touching and smelling. It is effective for students to use these five senses to write. Most primary school compositions are propositional compositions, which are nothing more than three types: taking notes, writing people and writing landscapes.
Take the composition Autumn Tour as an example. Pupils like to play, like new things, and like natural landscapes that are rarely seen. They like to make a hullabaloo about, run wildly, see with their eyes, hear with their ears, smell with their noses and dig with their hands, and their hearts will be filled with joy. The teacher only needs to teach them to arrange the composition structure.
The composition begins with vision: look at the sky, the autumn is crisp, the sun is warm and bright, the sky is blue as washing, a few clouds are fluttering, and some are like …
Then use hearing: listen to the wind in the wild, listen to the sound of the wind blowing through the Woods, listen to the sound of the wind rolling leaves, listen to the singing of birds, listen to the sound of little feet stepping on hay and fallen leaves, and listen to everyone's laughter. ...
Touch again: the autumn wind blows on your body, and your hair and clothes are fluttering and refreshing. Pick up a fallen leaf, touch the veins on it, brush the rough trunk, find a meadow to sit down and have a picnic, and feel the warmth and sureness brought by the sun and the earth. ...
There is not much sense of smell and taste in the text, and the opportunity to appear is also very free. Look at the weather, you can smell the sun, you can smell the fragrance of wild flowers on the grass, you can vaguely smell the smell of soil when fallen leaves walk in the forest, and you can eat on the grass. That delicious food will definitely tempt your nose deeply and satisfy your taste greatly.
Senses are also very useful in recording and writing articles. "Listening to people, watching people walk, saying their own words and thinking about their own affairs" all need to mobilize the five senses of the little author.
You should remember the article by sight and hearing. Eyes witness the development of things, ears record other people's words, and psychological activities are described, so the composition will not be too stiff.
When writing, people should pay attention to details. Details come from observing, seeing with eyes, listening with ears, feeling with heart, and thinking with head about what kind of person this is.
To sum up, not every article uses the five senses, and the order in which the five senses appear is not fixed. Feelings can be real or illusory (psychological works produced by brain processing, such as smelling the fragrance of sunshine with your nose).
Teaching pupils to write with their senses will reduce their resistance.
One more technology, one more wonderful!
The 600-word composition "Autumn" should have a multi-sensory description of autumn-the fiery temper of the dusty sun has made a fire all summer, and under the encouragement of autumn wind, it is no longer stubborn and willful. Cicada, who likes to watch the excitement, still hides in the shade, but loses the strength to fan the flames. Yes, after a restless summer, the sun is tired. It's time to think about how to get away with it. Romantic, passionate about life. On the Yuan Ye, thick green paved a huge carpet, dotted with cologne and golden chrysanthemums on the roadside, competing in the wind. Mature posture attracted beautiful and passionate butterflies to dance. -Flower pickers on the dance floor, romantic and affectionate species, stop graceful dance steps from time to time, kiss a flower he loves deeply and whisper softly. It seems to be a promise to meet in the afterlife. All kinds of crops in the field seem to want to win a good reputation for themselves in front of their owners, so they relax their branches and leaves, bathe in the scorching sun, gain a foothold in the wind and rain, eagerly absorb the nutrition of the earth and consolidate their seeds; Actively make final preparations for the upcoming production competition. The breeze brought coolness and the sun became docile. It's always noisy and cunning, and it loses its trace before it knows it. Mid-Autumn Festival should be a busy season for harvesting and sowing. In the field, I lost the tranquility of the past, and there were busy figures everywhere. The joy of harvesting fruits is full of people's laughter, accompanied by the roar of agricultural machinery and tools, full of the whole mystery. On the roof of the bungalow, under the eaves and by the roadside, there is a piece of golden corn here and a piece of earthy peanuts there. Three or five sesame seeds were crowded at the top of the tower. Occasionally, a few naughty children pulled a sesame seed from the top of the tower under the bluff of adults, grinning and running away. Then a few little guys left a sesame seed slightly and split it in two with their small hands. It seems like a bang, a dozen white sesame seeds are blown into the mouth, and occasionally one or two sesame seeds stick to the corners of the mouth, which will definitely make friends laugh ... It is cloudy-thick cumulonimbus clouds, accompanied by a slight cold wind, strolling all the way, the sky seems to be much shorter, making people nervous at once; Shovel, broom and dustpan are all used. After a busy time, this piece of seeds piled up into hills and covered with colorful ponchos or milky plastic films to form beautiful mushrooms. Raindrops drop down and hit the colorful mushrooms, making a crackling sound like playing a song. Rivers converge on the ground, bypassing mushrooms and rushing into ditches along low-lying areas. With the end of autumn harvest, farmers who haven't had time to rest are busy again. The long-lost rotary tiller began to shout black and sing excitedly in the vast farmland. In a few days, the whole farmland was yellow, bleak and full. This is a deep footprint. "Cold dew to the first frost, planting wheat does not panic." Farmers who are still intoxicated with the joy of autumn harvest sow the seeds of hope with the seasons and pin their dreams on this fertile coat land. Late autumn is the poet's season, and his beauty lies in his artistic conception and desolation. The sky is high and the clouds are light, and the water is getting clearer. The once lush leaves are now sparse and dry, and the earth was once covered with green. Except for the fading green in the wheat field, the prosperous world is bleak and cold. All this has brought a sentimental mood, a lonely meditation and a feeling of "wanting to talk" to the sentimental poet.
Help me find a composition about the senses. Ordinary people have five senses: sight, hearing, smell, touch and taste. It is better for students to write with these five senses. Most primary school compositions are propositional compositions, which are nothing more than three types: taking notes, writing people and writing landscapes.
Take the composition Autumn Tour as an example. Pupils like to play, like new things, and like natural landscapes that are rarely seen. They like to shout, like to run, see with their eyes, listen with their ears, smell with their noses and dig with their hands, and their hearts will be flattered. The teacher only needs to teach them to arrange the composition structure.
The composition begins with vision: look at the sky, the autumn is crisp, the sun is warm and bright, the sky is blue as washing, a few clouds are fluttering, and some are like …
Then use hearing: listen to the wind in the wild, listen to the sound of the wind blowing through the Woods, listen to the sound of the wind rolling leaves, listen to the singing of birds, listen to the sound of little feet stepping on hay and fallen leaves, and listen to everyone's laughter. ...
Multi-sensory composition describing scenery 600 Blows a willow flute and puts spring in your mouth. A cheerful and refreshing song, from the mouth of a shepherd boy riding a yellow cattle, renders a vivid and melodious sound. With the wind, it lightly crosses the bamboo forest and begins to spread to every corner of the world, just like an old friend reuniting. Everything becomes colorful and bright, and spring will come soon.
You see, clusters of bright yellow winter jasmine are smiling on the wall, and their horn-like charming faces are like naughty children, cold, lively and lovely, but they are beautiful movements throughout the spring?
Look at the pink azaleas rolled halfway up the mountain. They stand upright and quietly wear countless red makeup. Like a bride who is ready to get married, she is shy and smiles, silently adding a lot of vivid beauty to spring.
The spring breeze doesn't understand the amorous feelings, attracting colorful butterflies full of makeup. You chase me, I catch up with you, dance around the flowers like a galloping horse, and show off your beauty to the spring without stint, oh! They are the legendary beautiful elves, dancers of spring?
Spring is a beautiful blow!
Spring is a kind of beauty that has never been preserved!
Hold a brush, embed spring in the book, dye it bit by bit, and decorate the color of spring. You see, the mountains in the distance are lush; Clear water, full of beautiful blue; Painting a spring doesn't need much painter's pen and ink. Because spring is so simple. Always comes quietly when we least expect it!
A breeze can freeze and cut out the twisted wicker, which is gentle and graceful and endless; The clean sky reflects a pool of lake water, soft and clear.
At this time, holding a wisp of breeze, picking a bunch of spring scenery, walking in the field, wearing a spring corolla on your head, I believe your mood must be beautiful; Sprinkle a bunch of laughter, step on incense all the way, recite a line of spring, and bind a page of flowers and birds. What could be more pleasant than this?
Cheer loudly: "Spring is coming! Spring is coming! " Turn our excitement into songs and spread them all over the spring!
Not to mention the whispering swallows, the bustling flowers, the rustling spring rain, the whispering spring breeze, and the laughing children, just the whispering of lovers looking for spring when they smile and lower their eyebrows, and their faces are covered with spring scenery, they can open a machine without restraint.
Oh! Spring is a colorful picture that plays up interest!
In spring, we didn't have an appointment, because she was always by our side and in our hearts!
My favorite flower is chrysanthemum. Its color is white and it has yellow stamens. It blooms in late autumn and grows in suburbs. No one fertilizes her, no one catches insects and waters her. She can grow up by herself. In autumn, she blooms buds, showing her tenacious vitality.
Her flowers can be used to soak in water, which can clear away heat and relieve summer heat. Although her petals are small, I still like her very much, because she exudes a faint fragrance and is refreshing, so I like the white chrysanthemum with yellow stamens.
She gave her fragrance, sweetness and unreserved dedication to people, and I like her spirit better.
A composition describing the use of various senses in autumn is 400-500 words.
Someone said, "Autumn is beautiful!" Especially looking for autumn.
Autumn is coming, the rice in the field is ripe, and the rice in Huang Chengcheng is like a big piece of gold. In the east, people come here with harvesters. They let every grain of rice into the warehouse.
In autumn in the Woods, the leaves of all kinds of trees are yellow and fall on the pond and the ground one by one. However, the pine tree still stands tall and motionless in the wind, and its leaves are still so green.
Autumn is in the garden. Chrysanthemums in the garden are in full bloom, including red, yellow, green, white and orange ... The petals of these chrysanthemums are like thin shredded radish. Some chrysanthemums have all their petals spread out, revealing bright yellow flower cores; Some chrysanthemums only spread two or three petals; There are chrysanthemums in bud, as if the petals are about to open.
In autumn, apples, oranges, bananas and other fruits in the orchard are all ripe. Uncles and aunts are holding baskets and picking fruits one by one. Those fruits that haven't been picked seem to say, "Pick us quickly! Those who want to buy fruit are waiting for us! "
Autumn is on people. People wear sweaters, vests, sweaters and so on.
Where is autumn? Autumn is in children's eyes. As long as we keep exploring and discovering, we will gain a lot of knowledge that is not available in books.
In winter, like a girl in white. But everyone blames her for making the world cold and plants wither. The topic of "hate winter" spread all over the city with the wind as the carrier, and also reached my ears in winter, but winter is not sad, she is still so calm and natural. Winter is unknown and has been making contributions to mankind. ...
Although it is cold in winter, it has made a lot of contributions to us, and its contribution cannot be buried. Think about it: Without the heavy snow in winter to keep the land warm, will spring sowing be smooth? It doesn't freeze in winter and it's muddy in spring.
Will the soil get wet? Without the tempering of severe winter, will the footsteps of Miss Chun be so healthy and firm? It is true that winter is the mother of spring. Without the arrival of winter, there will be no beautiful arrival of spring.
Winter comes to us in obscurity, bringing people cold and happiness! The scenery in winter has certain ornamental value!
Snowflakes in winter are beautiful, and it will snow all day. Snowflakes of various shapes are dazzling. You look into the distance, wow! This mountain, this water, this tree, and this house all seem to have put on a set of silvery white suits, each of which is shining with colorful light. With this snow decoration, people feel very comfortable. Going outdoors to see the beautiful scenery of snow makes people feel that winter is not so cold!
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