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That gust of wind passed, only to hear a noise behind the messy tree, and a big white-fronted bug jumped out. When Song Wu saw it, he shouted, "Ah!" Turning down from the bluestone, he took the whistle stick in his hand and flashed on the edge of the bluestone. Hungry and thirsty, the blade pressed its paw slightly to the ground, jumped up and jumped down from the air. Song Wu was very surprised and broke out in a cold sweat. Too late to say, it would be too soon; Song Wu saw the blade coming, only a flash, flash behind the blade. It's the hardest thing for a big bug to look at people behind his back, so he put his front paws on the ground, raised his waist and hips and helped him up. Song Wu flashed again and flashed aside. When the blade saw that he couldn't lift it, he roared, but it seemed like a thunderbolt for a long time, shaking the mountain. This iron bar stood up like a tiger's tail and cut it. Song Wu flashed aside. It turns out that the blade just jumps, lifts and cuts; Without the three, the gas is half gone first. The big bug can't cut again. Call again and come back.
Song Wu saw the blade turned over and came back. He turned the whistle stick with both hands and cut it from the air with only one stick. There was only one sound, and the tree was knocked down by branches and leaves. Looking at it, a stick can't split the blade; It turned out that I was in a hurry and was hitting a dead tree; Fold the whistle stick in half and hold only half in your hand. Blade growled, became sexually aroused, and rolled over and threw himself in the future. Song Wu only jumped once, but he took ten steps back. Blade just put two front paws in front of Song Wu. Song Wu threw the half stick aside, grabbed the flower skin at the top of the blade with both hands and pressed it down. The blade struggled in a hurry, and Song Wu tried his best to hold it down. How can you relax? Song Wu put one foot on the blade of the other, his eyes wide open, and he kicked like that. The blade growled and climbed two piles of yellow mud below to make a pit. Song Wu put the blade straight into the yellow mud pit. The blade swallowed Song Wu and lost some strength. Song Wu clutched the top flower skin tightly with his left hand; Steal your right hand, raise your fist as big as a hammer, and be as realistic as possible. He just wanted to hit it, and he hit fifty or sixty punches. In the blade's eyes, mouth, nose and ears, blood gushed, and he couldn't move, only panting. Song Wu Song opened his hand and came to the pine tree to find a discounted whistle stick and held it in his hand; I was afraid that the blade wouldn't die, so I hit the stick again.
Appreciate:
Song Wu Da Hu is taken from Water Margin. The reason why the short article can make the story of Song Wu's killing a tiger so concrete and wonderful is mainly because the author is good at capturing the movements of characters. Song Wu appropriately used a series of movements such as "flash, wheel, chop, throw and pull", described the critical situation at that time, and strongly highlighted Song Wu's martial arts. Among them, we also find that we choose the actions of people at key moments to write. This kind of action can best highlight the thoughts and qualities of the characters. Don't scratch your beard and eyebrows. In addition, the author wrote the tiger's movements "jump, lift and chop" vividly, which made people feel as if they were there, making them sweat for Song Wu. The author's observation of characters' movements is meticulous and keen, and the words in the text are neat and vivid, full of twists and turns.
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The Water Margin, as the pioneering work of a long heroic legend, has unprecedented artistic achievements and exerted great influence on the creation of modern novels in Ming and Qing Dynasties. The Snow Mountain Temple is excerpted from the tenth time, which is remarkable in plot composition, characters' words and deeds, and environmental description.
First, the plot is relaxed, revealing the major theme of the government forcing the people to rebel.
Zhang Hui's novel is born out of "talking", and it consciously pursues the twists and turns of the plot. In the Temple of Snow Mountain, the plot is set and advanced in a relaxed and exciting way, sometimes tense and sometimes cool, which gives people rich aesthetic pleasure. It shows the history of Lin Chong's character from forbearance to rebellion, shows the social constraints of personality changes, and highlights the important theme of officials forcing the people to rebel.
This paper consists of six parts, forming a complete narrative unit. Cangzhou is the prelude to meeting old friends, the hotel is the beginning of life, and it develops to buy knives to seek revenge and defend the forage field to stay in the mountain temple. The climax is burning the forage field, and the end is offering sacrifices to the mountain temple, and the end is going to Liangshan on a snowy night.
In the preface, although the author is "idle", he is not idle. It skillfully brings out Li Xiaoer, the figure who wears the needle by accident; It shows Lin Chong's character of helping the poor and helping the needy, generosity and benevolence. The word "Gao Taiwei" laid the groundwork for later eavesdropping, which can be described as meticulous and ingenious. Lin Chong met an old friend in a foreign country, met a friend in a difficult situation, and had unexpected joy in the difficult situation. The plot setting is displayed as "Relaxation".
At first, Tokyo uninvited guests "flashed" into the hotel, made an appointment with the business management, exempted from hospitality, personally gave the opportunity, bought it at a high price, and made the plot dull. Although readers can't tell who is coming, the word Gao Taiwei is closely related to Lin Chong. The plot suddenly changed from pool to Zhang, and the strong murderous look pervaded Cangzhou prison city.
In the process of development, Lin Chong got wind of buying a knife and carrying a sharp blade to seek revenge everywhere, and the plot continued to heat up. The author writes in three layers, from the front street and back alley that day, to the inside and outside of the city the next day, and then to the slow fever after three or five days. The plot changes from tension to relaxation, which constitutes the first wave. Lin chong took over the forage field, but his death did not fall. On the contrary, the plum assignment came to an end and the plot was relaxed to zero. When I went to sell wine on a snowy night in Linchong, I stayed in the temple because the thatched cottage collapsed. The plot is getting easier, but there is no danger. There is a sinister murder in the contradiction between Lin Chong and the natural environment. During the fire in the forage field, the enemy who didn't wear clothes also came to the temple to avoid the snow, only one door away from Lin Chong, and the tension of the plot reached a thrilling climax.
In the end, Lin attacked the enemy, and the evil side was bloody in the wilderness, and the plot changed from Zhang to Chi. Lin Chong strode eastward to escape from the scene, and the plot of the full text naturally merged.
It is in such a plot that the author Zhang Chi depicts Lin Chong's personality change from forbearance to resistance. In front of Dongyue Temple, Lin Chong was afraid of power and taught Gao Yanei to collapse his fist. Mistaken into the White Tiger Hall, stabbed Cangzhou Road, and almost died in the wild pig forest, but Lin Chong urged mercy. Come to Cangzhou, please the management of the battalion with silver, and drag out an ignoble existence. I still enjoy it, thinking of inviting craftsmen from the city to repair the thatched cottage. After the collapse of the thatched cottage, it can be described as conscientious and conscientious to personally feel whether the charcoal fire is extinguished. All this shows that Lin Chong has no intention of opposing it. Tokyo's gentle dreams always look forward to Lin Chong's fantasy world and become the spiritual pillar of his humiliating survival. However, in order to satisfy his stepson's lust, Gao Taiwei, as the big boss, framed him step by step, pushed his luck, pursued Cangzhou camp, set fire to the forage field, blocked all the survival opportunities of Lin Chong, leaving only a passage to hell. Lin Chong's character has undergone a qualitative leap, from an anti-China person to a ghost under the sword, revealing his true colors. All the plots are refined around the profound theme of the official forcing the people to rebel.
Second, the characters have distinct personalities and explore the internal logic of typical personalities.
Lin Chong's character is first of all a multidimensional system, which is good at resisting fantasy and forbearing it. Secondly, it is a circular system. For example, kindness helps him help the poor, helps Xiao Er, and makes him used to balancing people's hearts with his kindness. However, the grievances are like a mountain, but he enjoys it. He was tricked into the valley of death, thinking that good luck was shining. Thirdly, it is still a mobile system. When it has not reached the end of the road, it is relatively stable. When the pressure of evil exceeds its maximum bearing capacity, it will show the thunderous power of glaring at King Kong. And all this is mainly Lin Chong's own words and deeds.
For example, the "three bells" when Lin Chong attacked the enemy is a typical personalized language. When the three enemies were complacent, they talked under the eaves and made an unintentional confession of their plots and crimes, which is a rare confession to Lin Chong in the temple. Let Lin Chong suddenly realize the inside story of the incident and wake up from a dream about the situation that he is not a knife but a fish. So he moved the boulder lightly and shouted at lightning speed, "Where are you going?" This drink is the shortest declaration of resistance in the world, showing an angry sense of revenge, and the edge is almost equal to land, rich and poor. Then I took a look at Fuan. Fuan took a shot and pulled it out first, then ran for more than a dozen steps, and got a shot in the back of his heart. The reason why the two thieves were caught first was that they sold their souls for money. Fuan was helping Lu Qian, and they were both coerced, so there was no need to be deeply responsible. Lu Qian, on the other hand, was one of the great villains who betrayed his friends, made suggestions, recognized the thief as his father, and threw people when they were down. Lin Chong first shouted: "Traitor! Where are you going! " After catching him, he shouted, "Thief! I have come here, and I have no enmity with you. How could you do this to me? It is' murder can be forgiven and difficult to understand'! " These two glasses of wine contain infinite bitterness and indignation since the humiliation of Lin Chong's Dongyue Temple, and are also criminal and moral trials for traitors who deserve it. Language is the destination of the novel, words and deeds are the self-shaping of the characters, and it is an external form to express the personality characteristics of the characters and convey the praise and criticism of the authors. These three acts of drinking and killing the enemy really have the effect of killing three birds with one stone.
Third, the scene is rendered layer by layer to create a typical role activity environment.
Landscape is an organic part of the novel, and it is also a concrete scene of the characters' activities. The scenery in this paper is not a purely objective natural reproduction, but a "positive background" that promotes stories, sets off the emotions of characters, symbolizes the essence of society and constitutes personality delay, which is intriguing.
The description of scenery in this paper mainly includes three aspects: snow, fire and mountain temples.
On the road leading to the forage field, "the clouds are gathering, and the north wind is rising, but a heavy snow has been rolled up." This implies that the plot of Lu Qian and his followers has been realized, symbolizing the extremely bad social environment formed by Gao Qiu and his followers. It is precisely because of the snowstorm that the thatched cottage is crumbling, which also leads to the plot of selling wine in Linchong market. "Lin chong stepped on broken jade all the way, walking with his back to the north wind. It snows heavily. "This is to further contrast the sinister and difficult social environment and highlight the word" forced ". Although "there are two more words than heavy snow,' verve' is far better." (Luxun's Lace Literature "It's Snowing") It is precisely because of such fierce snow in the north that the thatched cottage was "submerged by snow", forcing Lin Chong to stay in the mountain temple, which obviously promoted the development of the plot. "The night is getting tighter and tighter", and evil forces are set off step by step, which is extremely vicious.
The description of the mountain temple appeared twice in the article. One is the telephoto lens, and the other is the scenery. When Lin Chong was selling wine, he "saw an ancient temple" on the roadside, so he bowed down and said, "Blessed by the gods, come and burn paper money another day." This laid the groundwork for Lin Chonglai Temple to stay behind after the collapse of the thatched cottage, and played a role in promoting the development of the plot. At the same time, it shows Lin Chong's lonely mentality. Being framed and imprisoned thousands of miles away, alone, an open hero with superb martial arts struggles in the wind and rain, seeking refuge from the mountain gods outside the real world, which is a criticism of the ugliness of the world. The second time is a close-up, and the scenery inside is what Lin Chong saw in the temple: "There is a statue of Jinshan God in the temple, with a judge and a child on both sides and a piece of paper piled up next to it." This kind of atmosphere is gloomy, solemn and creepy, which shows Lin Chong's poverty, loneliness and lack of friends. Gan Kun is boundless, but there is no room for Lin Chong alone. Just because his wife is beautiful, she will end up in a national disaster and her family will be hard to vote for. Lin Chong is only equipped with a ruined temple and three clay sculptures, which are ferocious and tall, implying that she has her own god who is observant, upholds justice and gets rid of violence. Although she has a certain superstitious color, it is also the mentality of Lin Chong who is in trouble at this time. Lin Chong killed a man. The fire and snow were fierce, and the moon was dark and windy. No one could see or smell it. But mountain gods can testify, people and ghosts can see, and judges can smell. Lu, Fu and Cha have been plotting for a long time, which is unreasonable. The conversation under the eaves just now has confessed their criminal facts, and the weapons of killing are power, conspiracy, fire and prison. Lin Chong only defended himself with a knife and gun when he couldn't bear it.
The description of fire is realized through the feelings and direct description of characters. Lin Chong "heard the explosion that was bound to peel the skin outside" and saw the grass fields in the cracks in the wall "scraping the ground and burning miscellaneous". It is only when it is hot that it is possible to hear the prospect of half a mile away, which is also the externalization of Lin Chong's inner anger. The absurd dream of Gao Qiu and his son was burned, so was Lin Chong's belly, Lu Qian's ambition of promoting to a higher position and making a fortune, and Lin Chong's servility and fantasy. Finally nirvana in the raging fire, embarked on the road of armed resistance, became a member of the front line, invincible Athens.
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In Water Margin, "Song Wu Beats Jiang Menshen" is a great drama. Song Wu Tiequan was everywhere, and a representative of the evil forces fell down, which explained the theme of "The road is long and Xiu Yuan is Xi, so we should do it when it is time to do it", which was very popular.
However, who is Wu Erlang complaining about? Compassionate father and son also. It is clear in the book that his father is a labor camp administrator in mengzhou city Prison. What is the character of this camp manager? When Song Wu was first released,
Because there was no "filial piety", Guan Ying gave Song Wu a "killing stick" almost as usual, but somehow the kindness around him had other plans, avoiding the pain of the flesh. From this point of view, the benevolent Lao Tzu, like most ink collectors at that time, had money to handle affairs easily, and had no money to find someone to be unlucky. As for Mercy himself, he made it very clear that the Happy Forest Hotel he opened in a prime location in mengzhou city was unusual. According to his introduction to Song Wu, "But if there is a prostitute passing by, he should come to see his brother first, and then ask him to make use of the food. Many places have spare money every day, and at the end of the month, there are three or two hundred taels of silver to find, which makes money. " Isn't this the so-called protection fee? What is good capital? It is nothing more than the strength of his father. He himself once "learned some small guns and sticks in his hand". The book also wrote that the reason why his hotel dominated Mengzhou depended on the eighty or ninety fugitives managed by his father. This boy can really use all the resources. But the business of "making so much money" was taken away by Jiang Menshen alive. How much capital does Jiang Menshen have? Why should it overwhelm the cover? Without him, the fist was bigger and the backstage was harder, so a fire broke out, the Happy Forest changed its owner, and people turned to Jiang Menshen to pay protection money.
After all, isn't this kindness and Jiang Menshen the two "underworld" in Mengzhou? Legal experts say that "underworld organizations" have several characteristics: criminal organizations are relatively stable, with a large number of people, clear organizers and leaders, and basically fixed backbone members; Obtaining economic benefits through illegal and criminal activities or other means in an organized way, and having certain economic strength; The dominant party has formed illegal control or significant influence in a certain region or industry. Let's see, which "underworld" basic elements Jiang Menshen and diners don't have? In fact, it's just "black eating black" begging for mercy and Jiang Menshen competing for a happy forest. Wu Erlang obviously couldn't see this, so the father and son gave him some preferential treatment, drank good wine and meat every day, and gave him several high hats such as "gentleman", "righteous man" and "god man", so he was grateful and willing to drive for the father and son. Of course, as different individuals in the underworld, kindness and Jiang Menshen may have some differences, that is, kindness is more loyal to buddies, which is not surprising, just like the contemporary "underworld boss" has strong loyalty, but this loyalty obviously cannot change the nature of the "Song Wu drunk Jiang Menshen" incident: while punishing evil, he is an accomplice. For all kinds of people who do business around Happy Forest, there is no essential difference whether the protection fee is paid to mercy or Jiang Menshen. Ironically, Song Wu was attracted by the kindness of others, but didn't know it. On the day when he promised to help Shien recapture the happy forest, he even plausibly said, "With the skills in my chest, I have only been a tough guy in the world all my life, and I don't know morality!"
It's not the saddest thing for a person to stand in a daze and be used as a gun. The saddest thing is that he doesn't know his role at all, thinking that he is fighting an injustice and doing justice for heaven. I weep for Tang Wu Jiro.