"Chu" is the key word in the title of this poem. In the second sentence, "Huo" is a lyric word, which contains the poet's joy. This is a poem about mountains, but it doesn't use the usual "straight to the point" writing method. Instead, it makes a series of arrangements for the appearance of mountains. The object the poet saw-Songshan didn't appear until the last sentence, adding to the mystery of Songshan. "A few peaks are thin and clouds come out" is the most wonderful sentence in this poem, but if this sentence is advanced and Songshan appears at the beginning, the meaning of the poem will become dull. The poet skillfully stimulated the readers' eagerness to meet each other, making Songshan appear in the long-awaited way, and once he appeared, the whole poem ended smoothly in the climax, leaving readers with a lot of imagination.
The first two sentences of the poet are not about Songshan Mountain, but about the author's disappointment in his official career. "Over the years, the pommel horse has been trapped in dust, and it is because of the castle peak that I am pregnant." The author runs around in the dust, and in the hardship and fatigue, it is because of the castle peak that his feelings can sometimes be temporarily cleared. In this way, Castle Peak gave people a sense of intimacy before it appeared, which aroused people's desire to see it. The word "sleepy" vividly shows the poet's mental state of fatigue and hardship, and the bleak scene of rushing around in the officialdom with empty ambitions, but not being able to display them.
In the second sentence, I turned to write a little comfort in the rush, and the smooth language suddenly narrowed the distance between the poet and the mountain. The appearance of Castle Peak not only satisfies the poet's spirit, but also is a natural and smooth emotional sustenance, attracting readers to look up like poets. The so-called "go high near the mountain", here, the poet's closeness to Qingshan is actually the closeness to the noble and proud personality, and also the closeness to the implicit and open-minded attitude towards life.
The third sentence, "The north wind blows away the rain at dusk", adds to the atmosphere for Songshan's appearance. "Sunset" says that it is evening, and the deep and majestic Songshan Mountain is more visible in the afterglow of the setting sun. "The north wind blows away the rain", and Songshan is more fresh and moist after the wind invades the rain, but this is only the poet's imagination. I have not seen Songshan, and I have already described the scene of Songshan in my heart. The poet used the technique of rendering to begin the appearance of Songshan Mountain.
The previous series of preparations made the finishing touch of the fourth sentence, "A few peaks are thin and clouds come out", which is the only sentence in the whole poem to write about Songshan Mountain, but the poetic context is particularly spacious. Songshan finally emerged from the clouds. As soon as it appeared, it played down all the backgrounds. Its lofty and slim image was so clear and clear, and its noble and detached posture was so outstanding that it won the author's love and praise. The word "coming out of the clouds" captures the moment when Songshan emerges from the clouds, showing the poet's satisfaction and joy, and closely follows the word "seeing first". The vivid and clear images in poetry are often the externalization of the poet's emotions, which places certain aesthetic ideals and artistic pursuits on the poet. Here, the poet carefully chose the word "thin" to describe Songshan, which is full of flesh and blood and full of spirituality. It not only endows Songshan with human character and style, but also embodies the author's personality and spiritual pursuit, which makes people imagine the unique charm of Songshan after the rain and the poet's feelings after seeing Songshan. At this point, the feelings of the whole poem reached its climax, and the whole poem ended smoothly, but it was endless.
The object of this poem is Songshan Mountain, but to a great extent, it expresses the poet himself. What people take as spiritual comfort can often reveal their interests and character. Suffering from his official career, it is Songshan who comforts his feelings, and the poet's feelings are also expressed. At the same time, the appearance of mountains in works of art is often dominated by the author's subjective feelings. "I see how charming Castle Peak is, and I expect Castle Peak to see me. Love and appearance are slightly similar. " (Xin Qiji's He Xinlang) There is a problem of objectifying subjective feelings. This poem describes Songshan as "thin", which is not only a novelty in coinage, but also reflects the poet's spiritual temperament and pursuit in his aesthetic consciousness activities. Some outstanding scholars in China often leave the impression of being thin and clean for future generations. For example, Wang Wei's portrait of Meng Haoran, "tall and long, steep and thin, dressed in a white robe", is a typical thinness. Therefore, "the number of peaks is thin and the clouds come out", although it is about Songshan Mountain, it is also the integration of people and scenery, which reflects the externalization of the poet's feelings. This poem shows the face of Songshan and the poet's spiritual outlook to the readers at the same time, reaching a realm of integration of things and me.
In terms of artistic skills, this poem is permeated with a lucid and transparent attitude towards life, with a clear and fluent language feature, and it is a comprehensive portrayal of Zhang Lei's poetic style.