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It turns out that happiness is still there
Many people place their happiness on the future: only when they grow up, get promoted and make a fortune, they will have happiness. In fact, this is a misunderstanding and misinterpretation of happiness. We face happiness every day, and happiness originally exists in life. ?
Scene 1, warm light.
It’s a little late when I get home from school every day. There is a long, dark and narrow road from the stairs to the door of my house. Every time, I can always see a light that my mother lights for me. , as if telling me that someone at home is waiting for me to come home. From then on, I was no longer afraid of what to do when it gets dark after school, and I was no longer afraid of the dark, narrow and long road. Because, there is a mother's light that is always on for me. Seeing the bright lights lit by my mother's own hands, my eyes were wet, and a sweet feeling of happiness emerged leisurely.
Scenario 2, warm smile.
She is just a physics teacher who has taught us for two months. She is neither beautiful nor tall. She just warms every child with the most sincere love. The teacher's physics class is very interesting, filling our empty hearts with her unique voice and unique teaching methods. The teacher always faces us with a smile and leaves the tiredness to himself. It was another small test, and I accidentally missed a word question. During class, the physics teacher came to my desk with a smile and corrected my mistakes with a smile. From then on, I no longer hated physics, and I no longer hated going to the physics office. Because, there is a sincere teacher who will always give me a warm smile.
Scene three, warm tears.
On the morning of early winter, I was walking alone on the dark road, and a soft little bag was placed under my feet. I picked it up, put it in my arms, and continued on my way. When I arrived at school, I opened the small bag and was surprised. It was 5,000 yuan. I had never received so much money! Before class, I came to the teacher's office and handed it to the teacher solemnly. That afternoon, an old man from the countryside came to our school office with a young man. The teacher called me to see them, and the old man held my hand, his eyes filled with warm tears. He said that it was his family's annual labor income. He came to the city to buy a large piece of furniture and accidentally lost it, and then said a lot of thanks. ?
The attentive care of my parents, the sincere concern of my teachers, and the sincere gratitude of strangers filled my heart with happiness, and made me understand a truth: happiness originally lies in life.
Test question analysis: This question is the composition part of the "2014 Zhejiang Province Taizhou City High School Entrance Examination Chinese Language Test Questions". Ideas for setting the question: Test students’ comprehensive expression ability. This question is a semi-propositional composition. Choose one of the two. Question review reference: Choose an idea from the two options and write. For example: "So ?
is still there" can be filled in with: Where are words such as integrity and happiness? is the key, how do you feel? Then from the numerous life materials, select the materials that are easiest to control and have the most true feelings to complete the writing. Pay attention to the reasonable use of rhetorical methods and expressions.