Teaching plan: how to lay out the composition

learning target

1, through learning, to some extent, clarify the writing ideas.

2, combined with the text, can understand the relevant writing methods from the perceptual.

3. Be able to master several writing methods.

First of all, introduce.

What is the first step in building a tall building? What are the workers built on? Drawings, that is, design drawings. The composition is the same, so you need to pay attention to the layout of the article.

Second, the layout of the article and its role

Planning the layout of the article is to think about the overall structure of the article, which refers to the structural layout of the article. The advantage of planning the layout of the article is that the structure of the article is orderly, the context is clear and there are rules to follow.

Third, the method of planning the article layout

(a), string point?

The so-called "linking points" is to select several representative "points" and then play them on that "point", and form a complete article through the films connected by several "points". There are many ways to use the "string point" method, such as the most common "diary style" and some short and pithy scenes in the form of "small scripts", which are all good ways. When adopting this method, we should pay attention to two problems:?

1. Number of selected points. Generally speaking, three are appropriate, less monotonous and more complicated. The three "points" not only conform to people's reading, appreciation and aesthetic habits, but also make it easier to express the content clearly. ?

2. The connection and representativeness between points. Although choosing "point" is easier to write, it should be noted that the point is not irrelevant and should be an organic whole. At the same time, the selected "point" should be able to represent a "face".

example

1. Dude's "The Last Lesson" mainly adopts three points in class and after class, which shows the emergence of French young people from ignorance to strong patriotism. These examples are all about the theme of expressing their patriotic thoughts.

2. Zou Taofen's My Mother chose four points: reading after midnight, telling stories, reciting and making shoes, which showed the personality characteristics of the author's mother from different angles.

(2) Rise.

The so-called "rising" is to learn from the expression of "rising" in classical poetry and "say something else first to cause what is said". Specifically, it is to say one thing before expounding things, and then trigger on this basis, so as to explain the relevant truth thoroughly.

Layout is the organization and arrangement of article content. The ultimate goal of layout is to make the article structure orderly. The basic principle of the arrangement structure is four words: no disorder. There are four specific requirements: first, the outline is clear and the ideas are well-connected; Second, the level is clear and the paragraphs are complete; Third, close contact and strong logic; Fourth, the beginning is bright and the end is strong.

Reflections on "Three Ways of Entering Water"

Comments: This paper starts with the "three methods" of water inflow, and then analyzes their advantages and disadvantages. On this basis, contact with social real life, and finally lead to suggestions. The whole article is coherent and interlocking. This structure is easy to operate and the reason is easy to accept. ?

What needs to be emphasized is that the story mentioned above must play a stimulating role, and the content behind it must be internally related to the previous content and cannot be separated from oil and water. In addition, we must be able to do "this and that" and make a big fuss about "that" as the focus of writing. ?

(3) ask questions?

The so-called questioning means asking more why. This is particularly useful in reasoning. Every phenomenon has a reason. What is the reason? Can be analyzed; The cause will inevitably lead to the result. What will happen? Can be analyzed; What is the phenomenon? Can be analyzed; How to grasp? You can also analyze it. That is to say, discuss the ideas around the problems of "why", "what" and "how". In addition, positive questions can be asked and negative questions can be asked. Ask a few more why, and your mind will be broadened. For example, on the topic of "speaking of opportunities", we can ask questions like this.

What are the opportunities? ?

2. Are there people and things who have seized the opportunity to succeed at all times and in all countries? ?

3. Is opportunity the only factor of success? ?

4. Why seize the opportunity? ?

5. What happens if you can't seize the opportunity? ?

6. How can we seize the opportunity? (that is, what qualities should you have? )?

It is easier to explain the problem thoroughly by asking questions at different levels and analyzing them step by step. We can see that by setting questions to analyze, not only the thinking is clear, but also the structure of the article is not thin. However, it should be noted that it is not appropriate to appear in the form of "rhetorical questions". Ask a question before each paragraph and then answer it. As mentioned above, "question" is in the dark, "answer" is in the light, and the writing is natural and smooth.

(4) Material arrangement

Put the minor ones in front and the major ones in the back; The secondary materials are slightly written, with less pen and ink, and the main materials are detailed and more pen and ink.

Arrange the materials in chronological order, shift the location, and change the mood.

The plot is ups and downs.

Method 5: Transition and nursing

There should be transitional words, sentences or paragraphs between paragraphs, especially when the material content is changed, so as to maintain the coherence of the article language. Attention should be paid to the mutual care from beginning to end to show the integrity of the article structure.

Verb (abbreviation of verb) abstract

Five layout methods:

1, string point

Step 2 cheer up

Step 3 ask questions

4, material arrangement

5. Transitional care

Suggestion: before writing, establish the center, select the material, and then make the draft and outline.

Sixth, practice

Training composition topic: my classmates

Form: cooperative discussion, arranging the structure of the article to be written, and preparing the outline.

Presentation form of achievements: the essay typesetting method used by our group is-,and the outline is: first ... then ... then. ...

Seven, after-school composition

Title: My Father (Mother)

Requirements:

1. Use several layout methods learned in this lesson to arrange the structure of the article.

2, materials (plots) not less than 3.

3. Make an outline and write it on the topic of the composition.

4. Narrative, no less than 600 words.