Close? Keys? Words: Rewrite 300 words in the third grade of primary school
Words: 300 words composition
This article is suitable for: the third grade of primary school.
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This composition is a 300-word composition about the third grade of primary school. The title is "Send Yuan Twenty-one Xi Rewriting". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Hua, Hua. It immediately began to rain in Mao Mao on the morning of the Acropolis. The rain that has not been seen for many days comes at this moment, and the raindrops make the soil that has been dry for a long time fly everywhere. After the light rain, the hotel where Yuaner and Wang Wei lived was cleaner, and the willows around the hotel were greener. Wang Wei took Yuaner from Weicheng to this hotel and said, "Yuaner, you won't have such good friends when you arrive in Anxi! Yuanji, you are going to Anxi tomorrow morning. Let's get drunk tonight!
Teacher's comment: The little author adapted this article from an ancient poem. Judging from the content of the article, the little author basically understood the general idea of the poem and also played his own imagination. However, a detailed description is still lacking. It would be better if the little author could set off the parting atmosphere through detailed description. Change the suggestion that "raindrops on the soil make the soil fly everywhere in the long-term drought soil" to "raindrops on the ground moisten the long-term drought land" and "you won't have such a good friend when you arrive in Anxi" to "you won't see old friends when you arrive in Anxi". (China famous teacher: Teacher Wang) 2009-12-12 20: 57: 00