In the confused light, a thin young moth was planted in the noisy light, making a crackling sound. Zhaojun unplugged the Hosta and picked the wick to save the moth.
Just then, the news of marriage came. Like the first thunder of spring, the harem exploded in death.
"Pa", Hosta fell to the ground and broke into two pieces, and Zhao's hand trembled violently. At the turn of life and death, the moth struggled wildly in the fluttering flame, and finally rushed out of the fire like an arrow.
The flame swallowed her pink coat, but it didn't crush her unyielding heart. On the edge of life and the corner of death, the young soul cries out for life, and generate gives infinite power to make her fly out of oppression and death.
Zhaojun shook, looked at the moth thoughtfully, watched her fly farther and farther, flew out of the fence, flew out of the heavy blockade, and flew to the distant world.
Second, we should correctly capture the details of things, and at the same time learn to try our best to outline and describe them with simple and vivid brushstrokes, leaving a clear and outstanding impression on readers. There are two kinds of descriptions: a simple description and a detailed description. Sketch is a simple description method without rendering, while fine description requires neat brushwork and delicate description. If line drawing is equivalent to freehand brushwork in Chinese painting, then meticulous painting is more like meticulous painting in Chinese painting. However, no matter what kind of composition is used in the 800-word college entrance examination, it should be as simple and clean as possible, and generally it will not be full of colors. The key is to grasp the spirit of detail. For example, on Father's Day, with the encouragement of my friends, I gave my impatient father a bottle of Erguotou and a beautifully packaged belt. The father and son drank a little, and the son said, "Dad, I ... I love you ..." He quickly concealed: "This wine ..." This wine is too strong ... ""This excellent detail made my father indescribable excited!
■ narrative and discussion are combined, interspersed with scenery.
Narration and description are the main forms of narrative prose, but compared with ordinary narrative prose, one of its most prominent features is that it skillfully runs through discussion and lyricism. Excellent narrative prose is often presented to everyone in a "chain structure" that organically combines narrative and discussion.
The north wind blows hard, and he keeps company with Leng Yue and goes north to the Central Plains, bearing in mind the nobleness of "being a big fellow and dying a big fellow". Hu che has a grudge. He thought of the lonely grave, looking forward to the snow in the desert, and forgot the promise of "splendor and wealth, one woman sealing the Hou". The cellar was cold, and he swallowed a mouthful of felt wool and turf, but his blood was boiling with an immortal belief-remembering the motherland and serving the country faithfully. Snow and ice are falling, and he loves food and wine, but his arrogance has sounded the swan song of the Millennium-poverty is immovable, power cannot be bent, and wealth cannot be lewd.
Narration, description, discussion and lyricism organically arouse the emotional ripples in readers' hearts, express the author's sincere praise for Su Wu, and show profound cultural heritage and shining personality.
In addition, the creation of narrative prose should also pay attention to the clever insertion of scenery. Admittedly, it doesn't mean that all excellent narrative prose must have scenery description, but we should also see that proper use of scenery description will play an irreplaceable role in promoting plot development, rendering the atmosphere of the story, expressing characters' personality and subliming the theme of the article. Therefore, those candidates with strong language control ability are often good at combining scenery description with story development, making it an indispensable "flavoring agent" in constructing stories. Here, two common expression techniques are put forward: one is to use the "pan-spirit" technique, that is, to personalize and animate the objective scenery according to the needs of the article, so as to make it full of emotion and human touch. Second, the description of the scenery runs through the whole article, and the characteristics of the scenery can be skillfully designed according to the development and changes of the story. Even the description of the scenery can play a role in suggesting the changes of the plot and revealing the meaning of the article, making the article deep and full of tension. For example, on Father's Day, with the encouragement of my friends, I gave my grumpy father "a bottle of Erguotou and a beautifully packaged belt". The father and son drank a little wine, and the son said, "Dad, I ... I ... I love you ...", which broke the barrier between the two generations, communicated the hearts and resolved the emotional barriers. At this time, the introverted father could hardly restrain his emotions: "He picked up the glass. He quickly covered up: "This wine ..." This wine is too strong ... ""This wonderful detail makes my father unspeakable!