As early as a few decades ago, Yu Dafu said: "Ms. Bing Xin is a unique writer in China with beautiful prose, elegant writing and pure thinking ..." (
The meaning of beauty
1. Beautiful scenery
Reality scene: After the rain, the moonlit night is fresh, quiet and dark, which constitutes a "beautiful picture scroll" full of wonderful poetry. "Pure beauty" is the overall aesthetic style of Bing Xin's works, and it is also the specific style of writing landscapes in this paper. This beautiful picture is the background of the angel image, which makes love and beauty blend together properly.
Memories: the scene five years ago-ancient roads, ditches, running water, green trees, wet smoke, new moon; The scene ten years ago-thatched eaves, wheat ridges, vines, bright moon on the sea. Two pictures, seemingly understated, casually smeared, savored, vivid, artistic and ingenious. They are also beautiful pictures; It is also the background of the author's heart-to-heart communication with ordinary people, so that love and beauty can be properly integrated.
2. Human feelings are beautiful.
After the lonely lamp in the bitter rain, the author opened the window and saw "a beautiful picture", and his heart was filled with emotion; Looking back at the wall in the room, the angel was holding flowers, as if he had just come to this world, and "smiled at me slightly". The author felt the angel's love. In the communication between man and God, the soul is brewing and subliming, which is a kind feeling and a beautiful feeling. Looking back on the two impressions five years ago and ten years ago, in the beautiful scenery after two rains, the little boy and the old woman both held flowers and "smiled at me slightly", which was the purest and friendliest smile in the world and the blend of beauty and goodness; Finally, the author realized that three smiles mean the same thing, and felt that his mind was clear, as if he were "floating like an independent person, feathering into an immortal" (Su Shi's Ode to the Red Wall), which was also a beautiful feeling. Here, the meaning of "smile" can be read carefully. Besides "love", the meaning of "beauty" and "beauty" can also be read.
The shaping of two beautiful women
1. "Expressive" and exquisite structure
This paper can be roughly divided into three parts. 1 ~ 3 is the first one, write the first scene; Paragraphs 4 ~ 7 are the second part, writing the second and third scenes; Write the theme of Bo Ai in the last paragraph. The clues are clear and orderly.
Lonely in the bitter rain, alone, with the meaning of loss, no feelings to send, at first glance, seems to be a casual record of a trace of feelings in leisure life. In fact, when you read it carefully, you can not only feel the lofty love and pure beauty, but also feel the exquisiteness in the "rate" of the writing structure.
The article begins with "a beautiful picture", paving the way for the appearance of angels. The appearance of angels paved the way for the following two impressions from human life. The phrase "smile at me slightly" appeared in all three scenes, which became the adhesion sign of the three scenes. Saying "thinking silently" twice has also become a sign of adhesion.
"Laughter" is the main clue to connect the full text. Write three smiles, the first one is God's smile, and the last two are people's smiles. God's smile and human's smile are naturally different in content and meaning, but the three kinds of smiles are unified in one article, with similarities, all for expressing love. The meaning of the last two smiles was not very clear. Because the meaning of angel smile came first, they obtained their own definite meaning through angel smile. Therefore, writing a smile three times is a logical and natural development process, and it is also a "straightforward" and meticulous embodiment of the author's conception.
Laughing three times represents three stages of the gradual sublimation of the author's feelings. In the first stage, the author was in a restless mood. After seeing Angel, he felt a little shaken after thinking. In the second stage, the author seems to understand something through the association of the last two smiles. In the third stage, the author has been laughing for three times, and his heart is suddenly enlightened, and he realizes the love theme that runs through three smiles, and his feelings reach a climax. The gradual sublimation of the three-tier structure is driven by ideological activities and emotional activities. It can be said that emotion is another dark line of the work.
2. Fresh and delicate words
In his early years, Bing Xin consciously pursued the language of new prose and advocated "vernacular" and "Chinese and Western culture". As soon as this article was published, it was selected into the school textbook, and grammarians made a whole sentence interpretation. The description and vivid expression of the scenery in the article shows a strong ability to control language and writing. The beauty and feelings mentioned above are all expressed through beautiful language, and the beauty of words and meanings is an important writing feature of this paper. When commenting on other people's paintings, Su Shi said: "Poetry and painting are one, ingenious and fresh." Natural, unintentional, fresh and elegant, has always been considered as the highest realm of poetry creation. It is no exaggeration to evaluate the language art of laughter with "Excellence, freshness and refinement".
First of all, the description of the scenery is delicate and has a strong meaning. The full text has written three scenes. The first scene is the room. "When I turned around, I was dazzled, and everything else in the room was hidden in the light cloud; An angel who has a faint glow and is only immersed in the painting on the wall. " In a few words, it is a sad and beautiful picture with a hazy background, prominent angels and a strong sense of image; The verbs "hide" and "bubble" are extremely charming. The second scene is on the ancient road, "the water in the ditch is gurgling." The green trees near the village are all caged in wet smoke. A bow-like crescent moon hangs from the treetops. " The pictures of this combination flashed one by one like a movie; Unintentional and neat sentence patterns are as catchy as poetry. The third scene is at the seaside, and the author is on the way to sunny after the rain. "I saw the moon rising from the sea head-on", what a stroke of genius! The old poem reminds people of "the moon is now full on the sea". Every word here is the most common word, but it depicts a delicate and beautiful picture, which can stimulate readers' imagination.
Secondly, words are used to make sentences in ancient and modern times, and both writing and writing are available. For example, the article begins with a scene: "Open the window and look, ah!" The clouds are gone, and the residual water droplets on the leaves reflect the moon, flashing like a thousand points of fluorescence. "There are authentic spoken English and used classical Chinese vocabulary, all of which are seamlessly combined. Another example is to write about inner feelings: "This equally subtle expression, like a hairspring, flutters together and shakes together. "Classical Chinese words are embedded in sentences, and there is no trace of patchwork, which makes the abstract feeling seem to be visible and tangible. Some classical Chinese words are used carelessly, but they play an important role in creating artistic conception, such as writing a scene outside the window: "I didn't expect that there would be such a beautiful picture after the bitter rain!" "The Lonely Lamp of Bitter Rain seems to have been eliminated from ancient poetry, not only in words, but also in deja vu, awakening readers' distant and hazy feelings.
Moreover, the article is not long, but it uses more than a dozen overlapping words. "Faint", "subtle", "slippery", "flash" and "gone with the wind" and so on, or express appropriate limits, or express a sense of image, or express subtle inner feelings, all show the language art of modern prose well.