The Second Prize of the 9th Ye Shengtao Cup National Composition Competition for Middle School Students "A Butterfly Flying Outside the Window"

This is a composition topic endowed with image and full of symbolic significance. There are three elements in the exam: "cabin", "butterfly outside the window" and "going out". What does "hut" stand for? Can be closed, can be imprisoned, less color.

Life. "Beautiful butterfly" is a kind of beauty in the world, a kind of beauty that attracts people to chase. The trend of the proposition is that under the guidance of beautiful things, people go out of their own world and then have a beautiful pursuit.

We can't just focus on one end, or just talk about following the good, or just talking about breaking the imprisonment. So the exam will deviate from the meaning of the question. We should look at the influence of Butterfly on people as a whole, let us leave the closed and narrow world, move towards a broader nature and society, and conduct in-depth discussions on related society and life.

The meaning of the text is simple, and it is written around the angles of "openness", "imprisonment", "flying", "agreement" and "condom", which all conform to the meaning of the question. You can write people from a small angle: "open your mind and communicate with the outside world" and "the cabin is sealed"

Recently, the butterfly is beautiful, so go out of the hut to find beauty and freedom ","break the cage and pursue freedom "; You can also write about the country from the big picture: "We should abandon the closed door and implement reform and opening up" and "Go out, please come in". not bad

Taking the theory of evolution as the topic of "reading", I wrote "Going out of the iron house and reading social books without words" and "opening a square pond and draining water". In short, we should guide students out of isolation, join the society, pursue beauty, and don't forbid themselves.

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Reverse conception, understanding "beautiful butterfly" as "beautiful temptation", gives birth to the feeling of "sticking to oneself and refusing temptation", which of course has the effect of being unconventional and does not violate the composition requirements (but not the best)

However, from the perspective of exam-oriented training, unless you have good thinking and language skills, it is more appropriate to conceive according to the theme and tendency of the material. In the absence of novel and unique content and meaningful vividness.

Paragraph, it is difficult to write a high score. To be unique and superior to others, we can work hard in terms of angle, theme, structure and language.