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19, May, 14: 28, the whole of China, after the sharp air defense alarm, stopped for three minutes.
Seven days ago, at the same time, a devastating earthquake shook most of China, which was a national disaster.
National mourning is a tragedy, but national mourning is an unprecedented happy reunion.
A long time ago, the poet Wang Changling wrote: "The green hills are the same as the wind and rain, and the bright moon has been in two townships." Castle peak is unstoppable.
We share weal and woe, and the region will not disappear in the bright moon above the unity of the Chinese nation.
A person, a glimmer of hope, a firm heart. When the rescue troops rescued Le Liuhui, a girl trapped under the ruins of Wenchuan earthquake for more than 60 hours, the people present cried excitedly, but she didn't cry. "I believe someone will come to save me, I will, I believe you!" Never shed a tear, this young woman, who looks totally embarassed, always smiles and holds the rescuer's hand tightly. One hand shook hands with a dozen hands, which was the simplest and most sincere reunion between a victim and her rescuer. How high is the altitude of 5 thousand meters? Ask the PLA soldiers involved in the rescue, and they will tell you: 5000 meters is the distance whether we can hold the hands of the affected people, and it is the distance between life and death. 5000 meters, an unfathomable performance on the international professional field, was left behind by the airborne troops of the People's Liberation Army. They can't get rid of the fog hanging over Wenchuan, but they must get rid of the dark clouds in the hearts of the people in the earthquake zone. In this way, the "people's army" descended from a place 5 thousand meters high, bringing life-saving gospel to those villages and towns in the disaster area that were cut off from the sun and isolated from the world. The villagers said excitedly, "The People's Liberation Army is coming!" This magnificent scene not only appeared in the revolutionary war years, but also was the most touching reunion between the villagers and the country.
The ocean once divided the world into opposing regions, but today the ocean can't stop the love of the world from coming together. This love comes from the donation box in front of every convenience store in the east, from American charities all over the States on the other side of the ocean, and from the friendship donations from Asian and African countries on the west coast of the mainland ... The ideological differences between China and some countries were lost in the sand before the disaster, and with the continuous arrival of planes and ships from the east in China, this is the biggest reunion of the hearts of all countries in the world.
Tragedy has existed since ancient times. However, since ancient times, who has seen such earth-shattering and cohesive unity? There is a cloud in historical records, and people's hearts want it, so home is safe; If you unite with the people, you will be happy. Today, people, people and countries, countries and the world hand in hand. Why worry about family unrest and national prosperity?
With Qingshan, we are reunited with the wind and rain; The bond that unites the hearts of people of all countries is such an expectation: stand for the world, live for the people, carry forward the past, apply what you have learned, and enjoy peace from generation to generation!
Comments by famous teachers
After revealing the viewpoint that "the national mourning is a tragedy, however, the national mourning is an unprecedented happy reunion", this paper selects typical cases, and through the three levels of "the simplest and most sincere happy reunion between a victim and her rescuer", it is proved step by step that "today is the joint efforts of people, people and countries, countries and the world". Why worry about family unrest and the country? " The full text has novel insights, concentrated content, clear thinking and rich materials. The language of the article is fluent, combining modern lyrics, ancient poems and realistic scenes in one furnace. "Castle Peak can't stop us from sharing weal and woe in the same boat, and the region can't stop the bright moon above the United Nations." "Five thousand meters is the distance between whether we can hold the hands of the affected people, and the distance between life and death." "We can't get rid of the fog hanging over Wenchuan, but they must get rid of the dark clouds in the hearts of the people in the earthquake zone."
The article "Castle Peak with Wind and Rain" does not simply list the phenomena, but focuses on the point of "reunion" and has achieved good expression effect. The enlightenment it gives us is that the angle of composition in the examination room should be clever, the excavation should be deep, and we should be good at seeing the big from the small. Tang) In 2009, the National College Entrance Examination for Volume I scored a perfect composition: An's helpless source: composition network finishing 201-05-1018: 55: 31.
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The majestic city wall is your eternal vicissitudes; The gurgling moat is your eye, which still shines after all kinds of hardships; The lush Mount Li is your hair as always. Gu Zhuo bronze tripod in Zhou Dynasty is your hard bone; The dazzling military forces of the Qin dynasty are your outstanding posture; The magnificent stone scriptures of the Tang Dynasty are your flashing thoughts.
Yes! These are your advantages, the cornerstone of your standing in the world, and the rolling wheel of your catching up with history.
However, you ignore the advantages in the eyes of the world. You desperately build tall buildings with cold cement and reflect white light that hurts people's eyes with glass fragments; The car flew by and people's hearts were noisy.
You want to be an international metropolis like new york, and you want to create a Mediterranean fantasy with nude sculptures like Athens. You also want to collect a romance with soft waves like Paris. ...
You decorate yourself with other people's things, but you are buried in the copy. ...
Look at it! In Xi 'an, my eyes are full of helplessness. In front of us are boxes of cement buildings, and occasionally there are two antique buildings, which look more like circus clowns pleasing the audience on the stage.
You are Xi 'an, the ancient capital of the 13th Dynasty! The glory of Qin and Han Dynasties and the prosperity of Tang Dynasty are your strengths, but you have lost the tradition and personality when you were a toddler.
Remember when you were? Gao Feng's national style makes you high-spirited; Fang's palace lantern shines brightly on you; Weiyang's songs and dances make you soft and gentle; The clear spring in Li Palace has washed away all your lead.
Your everlasting regret has blurred the eyes of the world; Your Taibai poems have washed away the chest of the world; Your sword is waving countless border concerns; Your wine makes me feel endless parting.
Strength and dignity belong to you, and beauty and charm belong to you.
Even if half a moon is by your side, it will have a thousand-year fragrance.
Xi' an, this is the real you, like the fragrance of a cup of tea, like the fragrance of an altar of wine, lasting forever.
Xi' an, I hope you can take off that ugly cement coat that doesn't belong to you and put on an antique but never out-of-date wide robe and sleeve that only you have!
This is the real you, Xi 'an!
20 10 Gansu college entrance examination full score composition: affectionate reading source: composition network 2010-08-0913: 50: 36
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This year's World Book Day launched a shallow reading campaign on the Internet.
A: What is shallow reading?
B: It is the pursuit of simple, relaxed, practical and interesting reading.
C: Now is the era of reading pictures. People like visual impact and enjoyment.
D: Light reading is like eating fast food. Delicious and nutritious, you can't accumulate any knowledge.
B: The social competition is fierce, the pace of life is so fast, and everyone is under such great pressure. I want to read deeply and enjoy it slowly, okay?
Everyone has his own reading hobby. With the popularity of shallow reading, reading is more personalized and diversified. It's good.
Ding: I miss the old days-leaning in the corner of the bookstore, reading silently, not knowing it's getting dark.
A: Did we lose something in shallow reading?
Feel deep reading
In the vast sea of books, if deep reading is the sea, then shallow reading can only be a stream; If deep reading is blue sky, then shallow reading can only be floating clouds; If deep reading is grassland, then shallow reading can only be Qingping.
The sea is always full, only the rumble of the river. Sometimes it seems obscure, but it is called calm and unmoved by the outside world. However, the stream, whimpering all day and shouting with all its strength, just ticks. Frogs in the stream sing proudly; Look at the dragons in the sea, climb the Tengxi River and have a panoramic view.
In deep reading, you can be a dragon flying in Wan Li, while in shallow reading, you can only be an ignorant frog.
The blue sky is deep and vast, eagles soar, and the beautiful scenery of strange mountains is under the blue sky. Floating clouds, only floating, have no fixed place to live, only pursue visual stimulation, and some are just fog around you, but after that? The mist became dirty and lost itself.
The blue sky is boundless, and the deep reading in the vast distance can make you feel the freedom and unrestrained of the eagle hitting the sky directly; Shallow reading, like floating clouds, can only make you dirty and lose yourself. The enjoyment of vision is just a passing sight.
The blue grassland is endless, with horses galloping and birds singing in Peng Yue. Lv Ping can only show off its only green plant among reinforced concrete and occasionally attract butterflies, worms and earthworms to play. It seems that tadpoles have fallen into the mire.
On the endless lawn, you can become a galloping horse and a leisurely singing bird, while the green duckweed has only a little green, and you can only become an earthworm like a tadpole in the mire.
Shallow reading can only seek visual enjoyment. Fast food is delicious, but it has no nutrition, and sometimes it even spoils the spleen and stomach. Too much visual stimulation in shallow reading is likely to make you lose yourself and find your way back.
In the deep reading, you can taste the sadness of Li Houzhu's "Like a river flowing eastward"; We can understand Du Fu's unfulfilled ambition of "dying without conquering, and the hero cries himself in rags". You can appreciate Li Bai's "Oh, how can I bow and scrape to those who are in high positions? They will never suffer from being shown an honest face" and don't want fame and fortune.
Deep reading is as steady as the sea, as deep as the blue sky and as wide as the grassland. Shallow reading can only be compared with gurgling streams, screaming frogs and drifting clouds.
Read deeply and feel the grandeur of the sea, the vastness of the blue sky and the vastness of the grassland!
20 10 Excellent Composition of National College Entrance Examination in Gansu Province: The Beauty of Deep Reading Source: Composition Network 2010-07-2017: 23:19.
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Life is fast-paced, and chaos should not be our inner rhythm. In this era of shallow reading, we should keep the depth of our hearts and minds.
I used to follow the trend of shallow reading, but in the face of beautifully bound atlases, I still can't help sighing in cicadas and frogs and miss the past. Shallow reading is simple, relaxed, practical and interesting, attracting people's busy hearts, making people complete their spiritual journey in shallow reading, and then integrating into fast-paced life. I prefer deep reading with fragrance, and I prefer to purify my mind in deep reading.
Deep reading is like a cup of tea, which needs to be savored. You need to remember the leisure of "leaving the residual lotus to listen to the rain" on a calm summer night. Think of the favor of "curtain rolling west wind, people are thinner than yellow flowers" in the golden wind dusk; If you want to think of the heroic "big rivers and waves", you should read deeply, which is a kind of reading closer to the soul. Holding a book in hand, warming a pot of wine in the moonlight in a faint lotus fragrance, listening to the lines, from the ancient voiceless sound, I have always believed that reading is a communication with the author's mind, and I can inadvertently see the author's eyebrows and smiles; In casual thinking, we can see our lonely voice, love deep reading, like to feel the thoughts between the lines of the author, and like to read the feelings flowing from the author's pen. Shallow reading may just be an encounter with the author, but unfortunately it has gone far before making intimate friends. The depth of reading allows us to gain more. Many people miss the days when they used to study in bookstores. It seems that there are only books in this world, only ourselves and the authors.
People who like to study deeply will like to go hiking in spring and feel the comfort of dancing; I would like to have a heart-to-heart talk and feel the happiness of frogs on a summer night. I will like to climb mountains in autumn and feel the splendor of fallen trees; I like to walk on a snowy night and feel the coolness of pear trees. Deep reading, let us have a leisure in the busy, pause in the fast pace, let the soul have pure water-like warmth and touch, deep reading and leisure, like water flowing with the feeling of life, like clouds sweeping across the earth.
The taste of life is pure joy, and deep reading is clear and elegant, which makes us purify and feel in life!
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This article is full of literary talent, which makes people applaud. Candidates discuss and analyze with highly personalized expression and unique language. Whether it is parallelism or metaphor, lyricism or example, it is always conceived around the theme, with frequent metaphors and relaxation. While appreciating the beauty of "deep reading", we don't simply deny "shallow reading", but analyze it dialectically, without being paranoid or arbitrary. The language is exquisite and charming, which is both emotional and philosophical, and has strong persuasiveness and appeal.
20 10 National Volume I Full Score Composition: Returning from Rain Source: Composition Network Finishing 201-05-1018: 42: 33.
[Label: Full Score Composition for College Entrance Examination] Subscribe to the essential materials of primary schools for free, and the cliff is shocking. A flower and a world, a leaf and a bodhi. In the colorful city, in the low echo of the lingering sound, under the cool wind and the little starlight, people are like curtains outside the window, wandering on the way home several times.
One of the representative groups that can witness that human beings are going further and further on the road of modernization is cats. Once upon a time, the cat has changed from a responsible guardian to a pampered darling. When we sang "Mice love rice", the cat couldn't be inspired at all-it had changed its habits and fell in love with fish. What made the cat lose its instinct to catch mice? What makes cats become prey from hunters? I want to say "no". A cat is by no means a spectator who enjoys success. It still has an instinct to struggle in its body.
With the leap of history and the changes of the times, human beings have created endless civilizations with their hands. The power of civilization is great. It not only exists in the spirit, but also permeates all fields of material life such as politics and economy, which not only greatly improves the living standard of human beings, but also improves the living environment of human beings to a great extent. We don't deny the sense of superiority that this change has brought to mankind, but the contradictions accompanying progress have become increasingly prominent. For the superior material environment, people have lost their instinct to struggle, and they are more and more unwilling to work, even ashamed of it. All kinds of high-end scientific and technological products and machines are aimed at replacing human labor. As we all know, freeing your hands has triggered the inertia of thinking. Struggle and labor are instincts endowed by nature, and the instinct of nature is gradually fading, which also indicates that human beings, as a natural creature, are getting away from nature and getting farther and farther away from it.
Flowers bloom in spring and leaves fall in autumn, which is the instinct left by nature. The same is true of emotions.
"Living in Potala Palace, I am the king of snowy areas.
Walking in Lhasa is the most beautiful lover in the world. "
This is a poem left by Cang Jia Jia CuO, and it is also an irresistible portrayal of his human instinct. His legendary life was all about this instinct. He is not greedy for power, nor is he tempted by wealth. His heart has been searching for the truest feelings in the world. He released the truest love and the best nature in the world to the fullest.
Ask Buddha: Why do you always regret it?
Buddha said: Without regrets, you can't experience happiness.
Q: Why does it always snow at night?
Buddha said: Good things always flow away inadvertently.
Cang Jia Jia has asked this question, and so have human beings, because we always leave regrets in beauty, just like our faded nature.
The cat was blinded by temptation and forgot her instinct. But I believe that people will not lose the nature of pursuing true temperament and the instinct of struggle under the doting of science and technology. Man is a curtain swallow, wandering in the window of nature, still fresh spring like a spring, still tea like tea, still returning with flowers and rain. ...