Author: Jia Dao
original text
When I asked your students under a pine tree, "my teacher," he replied, "went to pick herbs."
However, through these clouds, how can I know which corner of the mountain it is facing? .
To annotate ...
1, search: search. Hermit: a hermit, a person who lives in seclusion in the mountains. In ancient times, there was a man who refused to be an official and lived in seclusion between Shan Ye. Generally refers to smart people. Nothing: nothing, nothing.
2. Boy: No adults, children. This refers to the disciples and students of the hermit.
3. say: answer.
4. Cloud depth: refers to the clouds on the mountain. Location: whereabouts, where.
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Under the pine tree, I asked the young schoolchildren; He said that the master had gone to the mountains to collect medicine.
He also told me: it's in this mountain, but the forest is deep and dense, and I don't know his whereabouts.
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This is a question-and-answer poem, but the poet uses the method of combining question and answer to describe the anxiety that can't be found. His writing is complicated, his pen is simple, his feelings are profound, and his description is plain. White clouds are nobler than hermits, and pine trees are used to describe hermits' character. The more I admire you when I didn't meet you when I was writing. Some people think that this poem was written by Sun Ge, entitled "When Visiting Xia Zun".
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Jia Dao is a poet who is famous for his "thoughtful". It is generally believed that he only works hard on the use of words. In fact, his "scrutiny" is not only focused on hammering words and sentences, but also painstaking in article design. This poem is an example.
Academician Zhao ()' s rubbings of the stone inscription "suicide note" have only twenty crosses. As a lyric poem, it has environment, characters, plots and rich contents. Its mystery lies in its unique use of question and answer. Not a question and answer, but a question and answer.
The first sentence omits the subject "I". I came to Matsushita, asked the boy, and found that Matsushita was the hermit's residence, and the hermit went out. The topic of "leaving a note for the absent ecluse" has been made clear. Hermit
When you go out and ask the "young man", you must ask something. The question is omitted here, and the answer of the "young man" is written: "The teacher will collect medicine." As you can imagine from these four words, Panasonic asked at that time, "Where did the teacher go?" "I"
I came to the hermit, the hermit and the herbalist, so I naturally want to get him back. So he asked the boy, "Where are the herbs?" The poet didn't write this question clearly, but answered it with a teenager who was "but towards which corner of the mountain" and implicitly included the question. The last sentence, "How can I tell through such a cloudy day?" It is the boy who answers the other's questions about whether herbs are collected in front of the mountain, behind the mountain, at the top of the mountain and at the foot of the mountain. Obviously, it takes at least six sentences to express the repeated questions and answers. Jia Dao adopted the method of answering comprehensive questions, simplifying the complex. This kind of "scrutiny" is not between the lines.
The poet skillfully answered the question and received the artistic effect of reading between the lines. Of course, the problem of "I" is beyond words, as is the action, modality and inner activities of "I" and "young man". In the four poems, I, the young man and the hermit are all written in the form of questions and answers, and their relationship is highlighted by the environment.
This poem is not only concise in pronunciation and vivid in image, but also pays great attention to color tone. On the surface, this poem seems colorless and unpretentious, and it is light makeup rather than heavy makeup. In fact, its shape is natural, its color is bright and its shade is suitable. The image and color of pine trees, long white clouds, blue and white, pine and cypress and clouds, are in line with the identity of a hermit in the depths of Yunshan. Moreover, the hermit did not see his paintings first, and there was infinite vitality in the green stand; Then I saw large tracts of white clouds, which were deep, hazy and unpredictable, making people think that Qiushui Iraqis were nowhere to be found. From the gradual change of modeling and the order of tone, it also reflects the author's emotional and material transmission.
The hermit in the poem collects medicine for a living and helps the living. He is a real hermit. So Jia Dao has admiration for him. In the poem, the white clouds show their nobleness, the pine trees praise their character, and the landscape writing also contains the meaning of comparison. Only in this way, admiration and the satisfaction of failure highlight their disappointed feelings. In addition, as an intellectual in feudal society, the author left the bustling city and went to "seclusion" among the dusty pines, cypresses and white clouds. The reason is also intriguing and reverie.