Richie
There was once a man who was sent on a military mission.
A wanderer, since he was a teenager, has been on the edge of Youyan.
Under the horseshoe, he will meet his enemy,
Despite his seven-foot body.
Will kill anyone who dares to fight,
Those beards that stand up like porcupines.
Bai Yunfei, Tommy Tam, Huang Yun,
No gratitude, no return.
In Dongliao, there is a fifteen-year-old girl waiting.
Used to play pipa, can sing and dance well.
Even now, she seems to be playing the flute and singing the first reed song.
Let every soldier's eyes be filled with tears of homesickness.
Appreciation of Li qi's poems
This poem is an ancient poem. The first six sentences describe a frontier fortress who joined the army with five laws, which are vivid and realistic and emerge in front of readers. The word "person" in the first sentence first gives the reader the impression that he is a gentleman. The second sentence, "A wanderer, since he was a teenager, was on the frontier of Youyan", which shows that the man engaged in the Long March is a recluse of many generous and sad people since ancient times, paving the way for the following description of his bravery and cruelty. These two sentences command the following four sentences. He made a bet with his friends under the horseshoe. He never cared too much about the body of seven feet, so he bravely killed the enemy as soon as he went to the battlefield, making the enemy afraid to move forward.
"Under the horseshoe, he will meet his enemies, risk his seven-foot body desperately and kill anyone who dares to face it." These three sentences fully show the masculinity of men. Next, grasp the details of the beard to describe the appearance of the protagonist. The word "those moustaches that stand up like porcupines" means that they must be short, thick and hard. It shows his heroism and anger when killing the enemy, and depicts the image of the man who joined the army succinctly, vividly and forcefully. Here, the poet adopts short five-word sentences and short and solid intonation, which strengthens the artistic effect of poetry.
Next, "Bai Yunfei is in Tommy Tam, Huang Yun", which is the scene where the hero of this poem is located.
The vast Yuan Ye and dark sky set off the hero more bravely. On the one hand, the words "repay kindness without returning" show that my hero is determined to serve the country, and he is determined not to return to his hometown because he has not repaid kindness. On the other hand, it also shows that the men who expedition to the frontier fortress are actually homesick. These two words "de" come from a man's heart, and they are used together in one sentence, indicating his firm determination, and at the same time, they reflect each other with the two words "cloud" used together in the previous sentence. The rhythm of the first six sentences is short, but when writing these two sentences, the scenery contains emotion, so the poet changed it to a seven-character quatrain here, and changed it to a five-micro rhyme with a low tone and a floating ending in the flat rhyme.
But because the meaning in the eighth sentence is still firm, the word "de" with two tones is inserted to make it melodious and firm.
Then, unexpectedly, there appeared a "Little Liaodong Woman" who was only fifteen years old. People can associate her charm with her youth and "habit of playing pipa and singing and dancing". With the appearance of Little Women in Liaodong, it brought people a touching Voice of the Qiangdi. In the first ten sentences, there are figures, scenery and colors, but there is no sound: in the sentence "She seems to be playing the flute, even now, the first Lusheng song", "Qiangdi" is a frontier instrument, and "Out of the frontier" is a frontier tune. Young women in Liaodong played frontier fortress music with frontier fortress instruments. The sound of the flute was sad and sad, which aroused people's infinite homesickness, so that "every soldier's eyes were filled with tears of homesickness". Here, the poet originally wanted to write the tears of this young man, but instead of writing the tears of this man from the front, he wrote that the tears of the soldiers of the three armed forces not only fell, but also rained down. In this case, everyone is moved, and this man is no exception, so there is no need to make it clear. This technique is exquisite and refined.
In addition, these four sentences adopt the seven rhymes of the upper voice, and the words "five", "dance" and "rain" are swallowed, which has received the artistic effect of emotional charm.
The whole poem is full of helplessness and elegance. From the first six sentences, I stopped at the sentence "those moustaches that stand up like porcupines", but the sentence "Bai Yunfei is in Tommy Tam, Huang Yun" suddenly drifted away, and the sentence "ungrateful and unrequited" was another setback. At this moment, a young woman from Liaodong suddenly appeared. The sentence "She seems to be playing the flute, even now, it is the first Lusheng song" was awakened by the word "today", and "Qiangdi" and "Chusai" echoed the above words "Youyan" and "Liaodong" from a distance. Finally, use "Let every soldier's eyes be filled with tears of homesickness"
Including the young man in the first sentence, the whole poem was connected at once.