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Teaching objectives
1, grasp the creation of artistic conception by mastering images.
2. Understand the symbolic meaning of "image".
Teaching difficulties and key points
Experience the hazy and blurred poetry creation and return to the touching artistic conception.
Teaching methods: perception, reading aloud and heuristic.
Teaching hours 2 class hours
teaching process
First, import
Play Tang Lei's music "Lilac".
A long and lonely alley, a beautiful and melancholy girl, a passing encounter, what kind of thoughts and sadness did the author leave? More than 80 years ago, Rain Lane became a classic, which was expressed in the form of music, painting and dance (Rain Lane in a Small Town). Today, let's walk into the written version (there is room for imagination) and into the poet's hazy and moist heart.
Second, the author
Dai Wangshu: Originally named Dai Chaoshi, also known as Daimen Dog, 1905 was born in Hangzhou, a modern poet in China. The creation of the work is divided into two parts: the early stage and the late stage. In his early works, he wrote more about his lonely and sentimental feelings, with hazy and implicit beauty, his masterpiece Rain Lane; In his later works, he wrote his feelings of loving the motherland and noble national integrity, which seemed clear and sincere, and his masterpiece "I use a damaged palm".
Rain Lane is a symbolic poem with both musical beauty and hazy beauty. This poem established his position in literature, and he was awarded the title of "Rain Lane Poet".
Third, read aloud.
1, read aloud
Wandering (pánghuáng), melancholy (chüchü), disappointment (chüouchàng), depression (tuípǐ).
2. Is it beautiful? What kind of beauty?
Beauty; Melancholy beauty and hazy beauty are different from the sublime beauty of Mao Zedong's poems and the sad beauty of Li Qingzhao's poems (this time, what a sad word! )
Please talk about your feelings from the content and form respectively? Put it in a few words.
Content: deep, sad, sad, hazy, lonely, disappointed, lost, sad and so on.
Form: deep and slow, soothing and melodious, with strong musical beauty. Reading has a kind of sighing, circuitous and thrilling feeling; It sounds sweet and harmonious, like a soft and thoughtful serenade.
Step 4 summarize the characteristics of syllables
Mr. Ye Shengtao once praised this poem: "It opens a new era for the syllables of new poetry."
Clear: ① The whole poem has 7 sections, each with 6 lines. The number of lines is basically three, and a single word is set at the beginning of the line, which stretches the rhyme of the word from the beginning and has a soothing and melodious effect.
(2) Rhyme law (the whole poem rhymes with "Ang" from beginning to end, with no rhyme change, each paragraph rhymes two or three times, and the poems not far apart, such as "Rain Lane", "Girl", "Fragrance" and "Eye", rhyme once), which has strong musicality and melody beauty.
In addition, the length of the poem is patchy, and words are juxtaposed repeatedly, such as "sadness, sadness, hesitation", "like me, like me" and "color like cloves/fragrance like cloves/sadness like cloves". Lonely and painful melodies are repeated in the whole song and linger in our hearts.
Fourth, cooperative exploration.
Lilac girl in my mind
V. Image analysis
What are the images in the whole poem? Please find out.
Clear: There are six.
Objective images: rain alley, oil-paper umbrella, lilac, fence; Character image: I, Lilac Girl.
1, lavender
Qing: Lilacs are shaped like knots before they bloom, and bloom in late spring (poets often see lilacs hurting spring and say lilacs are a kind of sadness). Flowers are lavender or white (colors are not frivolous and often win the favor of poets who lead an honest and clean life). Therefore, in China's classical poems, cloves symbolize beauty, nobility and sadness. Li Shangyin, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, said in a poem: "Bananas don't show lilac knots, but they miss each other in the spring breeze." Li Jing, a master of the Tang Dynasty, wrote: "The bluebird doesn't talk outside the clouds, and the lilacs are sad in the rain." (See Workshop Exercise 4)
Features: beautiful, noble and sad.
2. Lilac Girl
Find out the words: sadness, lilac-like color, lilac-like fragrance, lilac-like sadness, sadness, hesitation, silence, sadness, indifference, sadness, melancholy, approaching, sighing eyes, wandering, sadness, confusion, faraway, far away and dissipation. ...
Features: beautiful and noble, melancholy and confused, drifting and fleeting.
3. oil-paper umbrella
Because the oil-paper umbrella itself has the characteristics of retro, nostalgia, mystery and fog. And it is well combined with the rain lane. Time is in late spring, lonely rain, adding a cold and sad atmosphere.
4. Rain Lane
Find that sentence: long and lonely.
Features: dark, long and narrow, deep and hazy.
5. Hedge wall
The wall is crumbling, giving people a sad atmosphere.
Except for six images, they are all words that express emotions, actions and states. These images together constitute the transcendental artistic conception of the whole poem.
6. I
Find the words: loneliness, hesitation, hope, silence, melancholy, indifference, sadness and melancholy.
Characteristics: loneliness, confusion, sadness and pursuit.
The artistic beauty of multiple images (vague and hazy)
Sixth, explore the emotional tone of this poem.
1, sentimental, sad emotional tone.
2. Why does poetry have a sad emotional color?
Rain Lane was written in the summer of 1927, which was the darkest time in China. * bloody to revolutionaries *, leading to white terror hanging over the country. Young people who enthusiastically responded to the revolution suddenly fell from the sea of fire into the abyss of night. Some of them can't find the future of revolution. They are lost in pain, they long for new hope in disappointment, and they expect beautiful rainbows floating in the haze. After the "April 12th" coup, the author lived in seclusion in Songjiang, Jiangsu, chewing "the distress of China people in this era" in loneliness. Poems such as Rain Lane written by him at this time are naturally full of feelings of hesitation, disappointment, sadness and pain.
Know people: Pisces, sensitive and fragile.
Seventh, explore the symbolic meaning of this poem.
Symbol, an expression method of expressing some ideas, thoughts and emotions through concrete images by means of metaphor or suggestion. For example, torch symbolizes light, white symbolizes purity or mourning, red symbolizes jubilation or revolution, magpie symbolizes auspiciousness, crow symbolizes bad luck, dove symbolizes peace, mandarin duck symbolizes love, carnation symbolizes kindness, warmth and sincerity, rose symbolizes love, and selflessness symbolizes friendship and missing. Using the artistic technique of symbol can concretize and visualize abstract concepts, simplify complex and profound things, extend the connotation of description and create artistic conception, thus arousing people's association and enhancing the expressive force and artistic effect of works.
Diversity of understanding: "A thousand readers have a thousand Hamlets."
1, "Rain Lane"
(1) symbolizes the dark and depressing reality;
(2) symbolizes * after the failure, the revolutionary cause into a trough;
(3) symbolizes the low point of life.
2. "I"
My feelings are ups and downs: hope-disappointment-hope again.
What kind of person am I? A pursuer, a loser, a persistent pursuer.
① The image of an intellectual who is depressed and whose pursuit of life is difficult to achieve;
② It can be understood as the image of a lovelorn;
3 persistent pursuers.
3. Lilac Girl
(1) symbolizes the revolutionary prospect and hope pursued by the poet after his failure;
② It can be understood as the poet's ideal lover image;
③ It can be understood as all the beautiful things in life, such as a beautiful life ideal and so on;
④ It is a true portrayal of the author himself. The whole poem shows the poet's desire to meet friends who share his thoughts and feelings.
Summary: the whole poem can be understood as the poet's mental pain and confusion after the revolution suffered setbacks, but he is unwilling to sink; It can also be understood as the pursuit of love; It can also be understood as the poet's mental journey of pursuing the ideal of a better life.
Eight, grasp the characteristics of poetry
1, hazy and subtle
Rain Lane adopts symbolic lyrical techniques. The narrow and gloomy rain lane in the poem, the lonely traveler wandering in the rain lane, and the girl as sad as lilac are all symbolic images. These images constitute a symbolic artistic conception, which implicitly implies the author's confusion, sadness and expectation, giving people a hazy and profound aesthetic feeling.
2. Musicality is another outstanding artistic feature of Rain Lane. In the poem, repetition of sounds, repetition of sentences, repetition of singing and other techniques are used, resulting in the cycle of melody and pleasant sense of music.
Nine, summarize the full text
Each of us has our own "rain lane". We have all had hope, lost and looked for it. After falling, we also want to get up and move on. The poet said what each of us wanted to say and introduced our strong singing. Such a poem is a classic.
Ps: I used a broken palm.
Dai wangshu
I used my injured palm.
Explore this vast land:
This corner has been reduced to ashes,
That corner is just blood and mud;
This lake should be my hometown,
(In spring, the bank is full of flowers.
There is a strange smell when the tender willow branches are broken. )
I touched the coolness of seaweed and water;
The snow peaks in Changbai Mountain are freezing cold.
The water and sediment of the Yellow River slip through the fingers;
Rice fields in the south of the Yangtze River, your new grass.
It is so thin, so soft ... now there is only Artemisia capillaris;
Litchi flowers in Lingnan are lonely and withered,
There, I was immersed in the bitter water of the South China Sea without fishing boats?
Invisible palms sweep the infinite mountains and rivers,
Fingers stained with blood and ash, palms stained with darkness,
Only the far corner is still intact,
Warm, clear, firm and vigorous spring.
On it, I stroked it with my broken palm,
Like a lover's soft hair, a baby's milk.
I put all my strength in my palm.
Put it on, send love and all hope,
Because there is only the sun, no spring,
Will dispel the haze and bring Su Sheng,
Because it's the only place where we don't live like animals,
Die like an ant ... there, eternal China!
1July 3, 942
"I Break My Palm" is the work of Dai Wangshu, a poet in Yuxiang, which expresses his feelings for the suffering motherland under the Japanese invaders' bars. Broken Palm is not only realistic, but also a portrayal of the poet's unyielding will. On the one hand, poetry sets out from reality and describes the darkness in the occupied areas. Show deep concern for the fate of the motherland. On the other hand, the description of the beautiful scenery of the liberated areas is mainly freehand brushwork, and the land symbolizing "eternal China" is deeply praised.
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Teaching objectives
Knowledge and ability: 1, reading poetry with emotion.
2. Analyze and understand the image and symbolic meaning of this poem.
3. Enhance the analytical ability of poetry by reading aloud.
Process and method: 1. Use the methods of initial reading, intensive reading and study to achieve the purpose of appreciation and understanding.
2. Allow personalized interpretation.
Emotion, attitude and values: comprehend the author's thoughts and feelings, and feel the beauty of the scene in poetry.
Teaching focus 1, reading.
2. Image analysis.
3. Emotional control.
An analysis of the symbolic meaning of "girl" in teaching difficulties.
With the help of audio-visual materials, this teaching method guides students to read aloud, thus achieving the purpose of aesthetics and appreciation. For complex and hazy emotions, we can interpret them in connection with the background of the times, but the most important thing is to let students interpret them personally, and at the same time clarify the structure of the article and grasp the images.
Making of Audio Reading Courseware for Teaching Aids
Teaching arrangement 2 class hours
teaching process
First, import
The hutongs in the north are full of dust, and the yellow sand is floating in the wind. The alleys in Shanghai are crowded with rows of people, and the alleys in the south of the Yangtze River are long and lonely. They walked through the flowers in the snow, apricot flowers and spring rain, and girls as sad as cloves. I have dreams, tears and blooming red peony. Lane in the south of the Yangtze River is an elegant and quiet essay.
Let's walk into Dai Wangshu's rainy lane and appreciate the beauty of Jiangnan Lane and poetry.
Second, read "Rain Lane" and interpret the style (appreciate emotion):
1. Read the whole poem freely. Correct pronunciation: wandering (pánghuáng), disconsolate (chüchü), lazy (tuípǐ) and lonely (jü liá o).
depressed
Now, please recite this poem aloud again. Please pay attention to the grasp of mood and rhythm.
3. Question: What intonation should I read?
Resentment and depression.
Teacher's summary: Yes, there is no heroic journey to the east in the poem, nor is there a trickle of brightness, but there is a touch of sadness.
Ask another student to read a poem.
5. Reading instruction: Now please enjoy the reading of the whole poem and use it to see what the rainy lane in the south of the Yangtze River is like.
Attention: reading rhythm, stress and speaking speed.
(Courseware playing and music reading)
Third, read Rain Lane and interpret the text:
1, poetic imagery and artistic conception:
What is artistic conception? What is an image? Why do you choose these images? What are their expressive effects?
Artistic conception analysis of Rain Lane;
"Dreamlike sadness and confusion", hazy.
What images are used in Rain Lane?
Me, Rain Lane, Lilac, Lilac Girl, Hedge Wall, Oil Paper Umbrella.
2. Can you feel what the author is going to say in this hazy image? Ask the students to discuss:
(1) Rain Lane:
When I was young, the author lived at No.8, Tower 2 Lane, Hangzhou. His primary school and middle school all take that long bluestone road. This is a beautiful artistic conception. The alley is deep and quiet, and the drizzle makes the artistic conception full of hazy beauty. (Combined with my own experience in living in Hutong)
(2) Oil-paper umbrella:
This is a real rain gear, which the author didn't describe in detail. Give readers room for imagination. The advantage of this writing is that on the one hand, it will avoid usurping the role of the host and falling into the conventional mode. On the other hand, it left a dreamy artistic conception of rain umbrella. Because the oil-paper umbrella itself has the characteristics of retro, nostalgia, mystery and fog. And it is well combined with the rain lane. Time is in late spring, lonely rain, plus a cold, sad atmosphere, holding an umbrella to dissipate the soul independently. Strange images can be produced in a unique environment.
(3) Hedgehog: Decadence gives people a feeling of decline, sadness and desolation.
(4) Lilac:
The obscure artistic conception of the whole poem comes from the word "clove" Good things are always associated with girls. Lilac-like girl, lilac-like sadness, why choose lilac?
Qing: lilacs are knot-shaped, with lilac or white flowers in late spring. In China's classical poems, lilacs symbolize beauty, purity and sadness. The poem "A Girl with a Lilac Knot" in Rain Lane comes from the poem "A Rain Lane with a Lilac Knot" by Li Jing ("Exploring the Slope and Shahuan Xi Sha"). The whole word is:
"Hand-rolled jade hook on the real pearl, according to the previous spring, I hate to lock the building. The fallen flower in the wind is so haggard, who is its owner? Think long term! The messenger didn't bring news to the pedestrians far away. The lilacs in the rain reminded me of sadness. Looking back at the Bibo Three Gorges, I will meet the sky. "
-Jing Li's "Paving Broken Sand and Huanxi Sand"
"Bananas don't show lilac festival. They are lonely in the same spring breeze."
── Li Shangyin
Lilacs bloom in late spring, and poets often hurt spring in the face of lilacs, saying that lilacs are troubles. Lilacs are white or purple, and the color is not frivolous. Often win the favor of incorruptible poets. In a word, clove is a trinity symbol of beauty, nobility and sadness. Lilacs in the rain add a lot of sadness and sadness. Moreover, lilacs are beautiful, but they fade easily. Therefore, the girl symbolized by lilac is also easy to disappear and leave.
(5) "I": loneliness, indifference, sadness, melancholy and hope.
Summary: I hope that when I meet Lilac Girl, the girl is similar to me. Her behavior, appearance and manners, I will explore her inner world, but she will eventually disappear and leave.
Third, summary: In the first section, in the Long and Lonely Rain Lane, I hope to "meet" a girl who is as sad as lilac: because I am full of hope for the future, I am eager for such a girl to accompany me through the lonely journey; "Girl" means "silence, indifference, sadness and melancholy." It is that the ideal is difficult to achieve, and the mood is cold, sad and melancholy. The hope of the destination "floats" out, which is the pursuit and yearning for the ideal. Therefore, the poet described a beautiful life as a girl like lilac. When he saw her clearly, he couldn't get close to her, as beautiful as a dream and as far away as a dream.
Fourth, the blackboard design:
Rain Alley
Dai wangshu
Image perception
The rainy lane is deep and quiet,
Oil-paper umbrella is retro, nostalgic, mysterious and foggy.
Symbolic significance of sadness, desolation and decline of hedge wall
Lilac girl, beautiful, noble and sad.
I'm confused and lonely.
Verb (short for verb) Task:
Sixth, reflection after teaching:
Second lesson
First, import:
Second, read the text again, knowing people and discussing the world:
1, why am I so sad? Why is there such a low-key mood? There is a saying that "writing is like a person". What kind of person is the author Dai Wangshu? Only by knowing the poet can we better understand this poem.
The summer when Rain Lane produced 1927 is the darkest time in China. * bloody to revolutionaries *, leading to white terror hanging over the country. Young people who enthusiastically responded to the revolution suddenly fell from the sea of fire into the abyss of night. Some of them can't find the future of revolution. They are lost in pain, they long for new hope in disappointment, and they expect beautiful rainbows floating in the haze. Rain Lane reflects the mentality of some progressive young people. Dai Wangshu was only twenty-one or twenty-two years old when he wrote this poem. More than a year ago, he engaged in revolutionary literary activities with his classmates Du Heng, Shi Zhecun and Liu Naou, joined the * * * Youth League, and devoted himself to the party's propaganda work with his passionate pen. 1927 In March, he was arrested and detained by the reactionaries for propagating the revolution. After the "April 12th" coup, he lived in seclusion in Songjiang, Jiangsu Province, chewing "China people's distress in this era" in loneliness. ("Wang Shucao/Preface") His poems such as "Rain Lane" at this time are naturally full of feelings of hesitation, disappointment, sadness and pain.
2. When did Rain Lane come into being?
The summer when Rain Lane produced 1927 is the darkest time in China. * bloody to revolutionaries *, leading to white terror hanging over the country. Young people who enthusiastically responded to the revolution suddenly fell from the sea of fire into the abyss of night. Some of them can't find the future of revolution. They are lost in pain, they long for new hope in disappointment, and they expect beautiful rainbows floating in the haze. Rain Lane reflects the mentality of some progressive young people. Dai Wangshu was only twenty-one or twenty-two years old when he wrote this poem. More than a year ago, he engaged in revolutionary literary activities with his classmates Du Heng, Shi Zhecun and Liu Naou, joined the * * * Youth League, and devoted himself to the party's propaganda work with his passionate pen. 1927 In March, he was arrested and detained by the reactionaries for propagating the revolution. After the "April 12th" coup, he lived in seclusion in Songjiang, Jiangsu Province, chewing "China people's distress in this era" in loneliness. ("Wang Shucao/Xu")
Third, read the text for the fourth time, using symbolic techniques:
Symbolism is an artistic trend of thought popular in Europe (mainly France) in the late19th century. It is a response to the principles advocated by impressionist art and realism, trying to express mysterious and hidden feelings with visual images. Symbolism has created a new language and opened up a new way of expression. This symbolic language can be called (symbol of emotion), that is, to explore the most secret content in the depths of the soul through meticulous and complicated instantaneous feelings. In the eyes of symbolist artists, the visible world and the invisible world, the spiritual world and the material world, the infinite world and the limited world echo and communicate with each other. Therefore, this symbol, whether in abstract or figurative language, is very purulent and elusive, with a mysterious tendency.
This school of art was introduced into China at the ebb of the May 4th Movement. Li Jinfa was the first person to write poems with symbolism. Dai Wangshu's early works also obviously accepted the influence of French symbolism. An important feature of his creation is that he pays attention to the ability of excavating implied metaphors in poetry and expresses his feelings with symbolic images and artistic conception.
Some people say; The most outstanding feature of this poem in art is the successful use of symbolism, which makes the artistic conception of the poem profound, rich and implicit. So what is his symbolic meaning?
In poetry, the ancients used the lilac knot itself as a symbol of sadness. Imagine a girl as sad as a lilac in a rainy lane. She has lilac-like sadness and lilac-like beauty and fragrance. In this way, it changed from a simple metaphor of sadness to an embodiment of a beautiful ideal with sadness. This new image contains the author's pursuit of beauty. It contains the pain of disillusionment of the author's beautiful ideal.
In Rain Lane, the poet described a girl who died suddenly like a lilac in the rain with fresh modern language, which is different from the old classics in classical poetry and other works full of old poetry created by the poet in his early days, showing more new era flavor. The image of "the lilacs in the rain are empty and miserable" can arouse people's hope and disillusionment more than "the girl who is as sad as lilacs", which is a rare creation in the field of expressing the sorrow of the times.
In ancient poetry, the lilac knot in the rain pinned the poet's feelings about real life scenes. The lilac-like image of a girl floating in the rain in Rain Lane brings more adults as the poet imagined. It is not only a possible scene in life, but also the crystallization of the writer's artistic imagination, and an artistic real image produced by the combination of truth and imagination. Dai Wangshu said: "Poetry comes from reality through imagination, not only from reality, but also from imagination." ("Zero Zagreb Poems" XIII)
We say that the artistic conception image of Rain Lane is a reference and transcendence of classical poetry, mainly because it was created by the poet according to his own life experience and imagination. It is the product of artistic imagination, more beautiful than life.
(Summary) Mr. Zhu Ziqing said: "Dai Wangshu also adopted the symbolism of law. He translated the poems of this school. He also pays attention to the neatness of syllables, but it is not sonorous but light and clear; Also find a little hazy atmosphere, but people can understand. " "He wants to grasp the delicate place." (China New Literature Series/Poetry Collection/Introduction) Rain Lane is hazy but not obscure, low but not decadent, affectionate but not frivolous, which really captures the subtlety of symbolism poetry art.
Read the text and taste the language:
1, the syllable characteristics of the rain lane;
(Ye Shengtao praised this poem as "opening a new era for the syllables of new poetry")
Overall rhythm: soothing and melodious;
(1) The number of lines in a poem is basically three, which has a soothing and melodious effect with the sound quality of the poem language.
Words are set at the beginning of a poem. The pause duration of metrical poems should be basically the same, while the pause between lines is slightly longer and the pause between paragraphs is slightly longer. The word "Rain Lane" was put at the beginning, which lengthened the rhyme of the word from the beginning and played an important and soothing role.
⑶ Clever use of compound sentence patterns. Taking the third quarter as an example, the coherent sentence patterns in the fourth quarter such as "Like Me", "Like Me", "Like a Dream" and "Like a Dream" can be said to be ingenious extensions of poetry, forming the effect of cyclic singing of poetry and making reading have progressive effects of momentum, emphasis and jumping. The overlapping art adopts the representative work "Dream Seeker" in Dai Wangshu's second poetry collection "Wang Shucao", such as "Dream will bloom/dream will bloom beautiful flowers" and "Nine years to climb an iceberg/nine years to sail". The first and second paragraphs of Rain Lane also show this kind of re-stacking, which makes the rhythm of poetry appear neat and harmonious.
(4) Overlapping use of words:
Sometimes in the same line of poetry, such as "long, long", sometimes in the separation of two lines of poetry, such as "sorrow, sorrow, hesitation", sometimes in the separation of stanzas, such as "hesitation" between the second and third stanzas.
The overlapping of words makes the same time repeat, thus forming a soothing and melodious rhythm. Rain Lane is flexible and full of vitality in the use of syllables.
2, the rhyme of poetry:
Rain Lane has ***7 paragraphs, each with 6 lines, and each line has 2 to 3 times of "Ang". Such as rain lane, long, wandering, girl, fragrance and so on appear repeatedly between the lines of poetry, forming a long melody, and this sound quality is well integrated with the poet's pursuit of deep and ethereal artistic conception and sad wandering mood. This is why syllables should be soothing and melodious. The external form of poetry serves the artistic conception and content of poetry.
3. Not only use the rhyme ending of "Ang" and the soothing melody of syllables to add a profound and ethereal artistic conception, but also use rhetorical parallelism to add a profound and ethereal artistic conception:
The phrase "lilac-like color/lilac-like fragrance/lilac-like sadness" is parallelism. These words have the same number of words and similar structures. Lilac girl is portrayed by parallelism as very charming, but with a touch of sadness, which shows the poet's pursuit of a beautiful ideal, but the ideal is difficult to realize. At the same time, repeated recitation also enhances the musical beauty of poetry and creates a profound and ethereal artistic conception.
4. Words used in poetry:
Rain alley also has its own characteristics in the use of words. It uses a large number of disyllabic words with strong feelings, such as loneliness, sadness, cold, sigh, sadness, depression and sadness, to express the poet's hazy and sentimental poetry.
Wandering, fragrant and melancholy, these two-syllable rhyming words themselves represent rhyme and rhythm, and they are skillfully placed between the lines of poetry, forming a delicate, beautiful, soothing and ethereal artistic conception.
Read the text and then play the tape:
Six, homework layout:
Seven, blackboard design:
Eight, reflection after teaching: