Imitate the text to write a composition

1. Write a 600-word composition by imitating the format of the text Deng Jiaxian. The feelings expressed by the author in his own way are deeply infected. This true emotional expression made the composition convey a strong appeal, and I also cried. I gave this composition an excellent score-according to the general composition requirements, although it is not excellent at all. The reason why I gave this composition full marks is because it has the quality of "speaking from the heart". Some students write other people's "bitterness", "sadness", "strength" and "misfortune" in their compositions, but they stay out of it and make themselves spectators. The author of this essay defines himself as an "emotional center" and expresses his true feelings in simple words. It is the sad and unyielding spirit on the ruins. Writing ability is a kind of ability to express emotions, and the ability to express emotions is innate, so your writing ability is innate-just, you sometimes ignore the grasp and excavation of this innate ability. Please write a composition centered on "your own feelings", so that you will have it when you write.

2. Imitate the sixth grade 17 lesson text to write the composition "My Good Friend", perhaps because I always affectionately call him "Yang Cong"! I have been inseparable friends with him since last semester.

Yang Yuchen is thinner and shorter than me, but he is the most interesting in the class. A few small freckles on his face added a little cuteness to him, and there was only one line left when he smiled. He also likes to keep a flat head, which is the nickname of "onion"! Speaking of Yang Yuchen's seriousness and carefulness, it is well known in our class.

I remember once, after the English exam, the papers were about to be collected, and other students were a little impatient. They can't wait to finish class quickly. Only Yang Yuchen was still slowly checking one question after another for fear of making mistakes until the teacher said to close the paper. Ruan Tianyu and I both praised him as a serious and careful classmate! But Yang Yuchen just scratched his head and said, "Actually, it's nothing, it should be!" Let's talk about Yang Yuchen's hobbies. I can't count them all morning. He likes reading, playing basketball, playing football, running, skipping rope, playing clapping games and so on.

Among them, his favorite is reading. I remember one time, Song He went to borrow books. When we came back, Yang Yuchen had taken a composition book and looked at it with relish. I called him, but he didn't seem to hear me. I walked up to him and shouted "Hey". He was so scared that he quickly put down the book and said in a panic, "What's the matter? What's wrong! What's the matter? " Song and I both laughed and said, "You bookworm!" Do you know him through my introduction? I hope you can be good friends with him, too.

3. Imitate the words of fingers and write the composition of candles. I'll help you. What is a candle? Candle is a small sand in people's life. However, I love candles, their light and their ordinary and great power. Candles lit in the dark and extinguished in the light seem insignificant. However, I want to praise the candle and its selfless dedication.

"Rare things are precious" is a common saying, but what about candles? This is not unusual. It's cheap in the market and everyone has it. Most people don't take it seriously. It is put under the table in the cupboard so that others can't see it. It is sometimes thrown to the ground, cut off by some children and kicked around as a ball; Suffering from people's neglect and contempt everywhere, good things will certainly not be its turn, but it did not complain. Candle's life is very dull, white and red, colorful, and her head is still tied with croissants. Life begins with the weaving of croissants. Gradually, the flame swallowed the croissant and began to melt the main body of the candle. Dropped wax beads solidified like a string of tears. But if you look carefully, the candles are very beautiful. When it burns, the small flame on its head seems to be the princess's head, the red body seems to be the princess's beautiful clothes, and the wax beads flowing down the river are the princess's hands.

When there is a power failure, people will think of lighting it with a lighter. Then, it will fight for people with its own body until the last moment of its life. It endured the high temperature of several hundred degrees, created joyful laughter for people in pain, gained eternal life in the fire, and felt its permanent satisfaction in dedication. It came to this world silently, but left this world silently. It exchanged its short life for bright light and heat! Although this light is not permanent, it is temporary, but have you thought about it? What can bring us a bright night without this candle?

From this, it occurred to me that many people have made such contributions in our lives, and that is our teacher-hardworking gardener. They love their ordinary jobs, get up early and get greedy every day, and water our "little trees" with hard sweat until their temples are in a mortar. They still stick to their posts, warm the hearts of each of our children with their own heat, and illuminate the direction of progress for us with their own light, just like candles.

In the future, I also want to be a person with candle spirit. I like candles.

Write a composition imitating the text of a frightened bird. I remember one day, I was doing my homework The teacher didn't know when he came to see me. Before I knew it, the teacher's hand had gently landed on my head. When I look up at the teacher's face, she should put her finger on my exercise book. Look carefully, alas! There are many typos in my handwriting. "Nothing" is written as "Heaven", "Eye" is written as "Qi" and "Recognition" is written as "Rang". No wonder the teacher frowned and couldn't open it.

I've been really weird lately. From time to time, I will write a long list of typos in my homework. Therefore, whenever I have a class, I am most afraid that someone will pass by me; When I was writing my homework, when I heard footsteps, the whole person was in fear, so I couldn't calm down and write, for fear that someone next to me would find my typos one after another with sharp eyes. The more this happens, the more mistakes you will make in your homework. My deskmate said: Hi, you have recently become a "frightened bird"!

In fact, not only my homework, but also my performance in class is declining. I recall that not long ago in class, the teacher was talking about the sun, but I accidentally read a Chinese book. The teacher asked me to answer, what is the surface temperature of the sun? I was silent, and then I thought about it and had to say three thousand degrees casually. The students laughed and said in unison: twice! At this time, I was ashamed. Since then, there have been few hands in the class. I thought: If I'm wrong, it's another joke.

Everything I did this semester was scary. I am afraid that the teacher will call my name in class. I am afraid that when I am writing my homework, I will see the teacher coming and my notebook frowning.

Yes, as a friend said, it is most appropriate to describe yourself as a "frightened bird"!

5.200-word composition describes the imitation of the text "One Side", and I have experienced many things in the process of growing up. They are like a ship, echoing in my mind. One of them made me unforgettable, even though I only knew her once.

It was a stormy afternoon, and the north wind roared. As soon as the thunder rang, the heavy rain kept falling like a broken bead curtain. I was walking home with an umbrella. Suddenly, a cool breeze blew, and I couldn't help yawning. I just feel that the road is as cold as a cellar, and the air conditioner keeps drilling into my trouser legs. People on the road are all wearing raincoats and umbrellas and rushing home. Walking to the door, I saw the garbage dump opposite my door-because of the rain, I could only vaguely see a thin and short old man tossing and turning in the garbage dump with a bamboo branch in his hand. Who is there? This heavy rain shouldn't be a cleaner, should it? I walked over with questions. Turned out to be an old cleaner in his sixties. She is thin and hunchbacked, and her weather-beaten face is covered with wrinkles. She is wearing a small black mask, a tattered raincoat and a pair of old rain boots. The dustman cleans up the rubbish very carefully-she has a shovel in her left hand and a broom in her right. First sweep the garbage into the shovel with a broom, then hold it with a broom, and finally "send" the garbage into the garbage truck with a shovel. I can't help asking: "Grandma! Are you still cleaning up the garbage in such a heavy rain? Can't you just clean up tomorrow? " At this time, the grandmother wiped the rain on her body (can't tell whether it is rain or sweat) and sneezed, ah! Grandma is ill. But grandma doesn't care about her illness. She picked up the broom again and said to me, "No! If I don't clean up these rubbish quickly today, there will be more bacteria. At that time, the stench will float into the sky, affecting your health and city appearance! " After listening to her words, I looked up at the cleaner and saw that her dark face was covered with wrinkles as deep as a knife, and her thin body was like a withered mummy. I was shocked. Some people will look down on cleaners because of their humble status, think they are dirty, and avoid them as soon as they see them. But who would have thought that in this rainy day, in this humble place, almost no one would find this "city beautician", let alone praise her, but she still did her duty in that ordinary post. Her spirit is worth learning.

Until now, every time I see the garbage beside the garbage dump, I can see in my mind the scene that the old cleaner once braved the downpour to clean up the garbage. I can't forget her. I can't forget her who influenced my life. She taught me the truth of being a man, the true meaning of life, and that people live in this world to make contributions to others. ...

Unit 5, Grade Four: Write a composition according to which text. Love life. Spring is over, you can come again. The flowers have faded, but we can reopen them. But we only have one life. Today, I watched the movie Life Without Rehearsal, and saw that countless people died in traffic accidents every year. The terrible scene made people cry. 200 1 year, there are 55 people on the way home for the New Year. How many people expect their hearts to break like this. There are also car drivers who illegally carry passengers. Because of temporary fatigue, all the people in the car lived in vain, so that they were separated from their relatives in an instant. There are still many people crying because of crossing the road, drunk driving, driving without a license and so on ... According to statistics, the number of people who die in traffic accidents can reach more than 80,000 every year. What a shocking number. Each of us has only one life, and we can't gamble with our own. Only by living safely can we create a better life. I remember a classmate in my class was walking and playing on the road on Sunday when suddenly a white car came from behind at a high speed. Because he couldn't dodge, the wheel ran over his foot and rested for a long time! The fact of blood tells us once again that only by having a perfect life can we have everything! There is no rehearsal in life. We should be proud of obeying traffic laws and cherish life! In the laboratory, researchers tried to separate human skulls, but they did their best to completely separate them. A scientist buried the seed in the skull, and a miracle appeared: the seed germinated, but the seed was weak, but it released huge energy-the skull was completely separated along the seam. I am amazed at the creativity of scientists, and even more amazed at the strong vitality of such a weak seed. An ugly caterpillar may become a colorful butterfly because life is a miracle. Perhaps you have read the works of Hugo, a French writer, but few people know how he fought against disease and created a miracle of life. Hugo began to publish his works at the age of 20, and at the age of 29, he created Notre Dame de Paris, which caused a sensation in the world, but at the peak of his creation, he suddenly suffered from a malignant heart attack. This year, he was 40 years old. People are very sorry about the fall of this superstar. But Hugo is not pessimistic. Under the guidance of the doctor, he exercised, boxed, ran, swam and climbed mountains ... He struggled tenaciously with his illness, improved his health, strengthened his physique and picked up a pen again ... Until his later years, he made unremitting efforts to create Les Miserables. At the age of 60, he wrote it at the age of 80. He radiates the brilliance of his life to the world. Taiwan Province writer Xing Linzi's understanding of life stems from his love for life. /kloc-when he was 0/2 years old, he suffered from "rheumatoid arthritis". Most of his joints were damaged, and he could not walk, lift his shoulders, lift his hands and turn his head. It is such a disabled person who has persisted for decades and has written more than 40 books, which is known as "ten provinces". Encourage and inspire world progress with spirit and cherish life. Life is irreversible. Let's cherish life, let limited life create infinite value, let the fire of life burn brighter and release more energy! Example 1 seize three typical cases, describe and discuss them, praise the power of life, praise the miracle created by life, encourage people to cherish life and make life create greater value. Once, I saw a grasshopper by a flower bed. I took it home with great interest and put it in a birdbath. But this ant didn't stop, banging, so I couldn't sleep. I turned over and got out of bed to see: it was flapping its wings desperately and struggling. Suddenly my conscience scolded me, and I couldn't help letting go. My family has a pot of Clivia, which I picked up. This is great vitality. I have heard the story of Heidi's sister since I was a child: she was severely paraplegic and couldn't go to school. She taught herself all the courses in primary and secondary schools with tenacious perseverance and obtained a master's degree in philosophy awarded by Jilin University. She studied acupuncture and cured many patients. He translated books and presented his works to people ... She worked hard and kept creating, playing a perfect life movement with an incomplete body. Life is only given to insects and plants once, because once is more precious, we should cherish life, make life meaningful, and let limited life create infinite value. Imitation of Example 2 is a simple and easy learning method for students. Give three typical examples and briefly discuss the view that life is only once. To cherish life and make it more meaningful, we must constantly create our own life value. Fan Wen 3 cares about life. Sun is like a young child, staring at something and blushing. "Get up, lazy boy, and follow me to the vegetable field to remove weeds." My mother is waking me up. "Hurry up, or Hua will fly away," the child replied childishly. After a while, my mother and I came to the vegetable garden with hoes. Looking around, it was golden yellow, and I was fascinated by the ups and downs of those flowers. I ran between flowers and vegetables, as carefree as the princess of these flowers, completely forgetting that I came to weed the vegetable fields with my mother. My mother is weeding among the flowers, and I see the hoe rise and fall from time to time. Look up at me from time to time, as if I were afraid I wouldn't find it if I ran into the vegetable garden. I jumped out of the flowers and reached out my chubby little hand to catch those beautiful butterflies. "Ah, I got it, I got it." I held the caught butterfly tightly and ran to my mother: "Mom, I caught it, I caught it."

7. Imitate the text "Fingers" and write a 600-word composition "Human Five Features". In my opinion, there is no distinction between beauty and ugliness in people's five senses. They live on people's heads, enjoy supreme status and control the normal work of limbs. They have their own strengths and weaknesses, but they are all well-proportioned. The position of the nose on the face is really unique. He lives in the center, with eyebrows, eyes and mouth. Enjoy a carefree life. However, from another perspective, the nose, as an important organ of the five senses, also has many survival risks. He has to endure the stench of toilets and sewers for a long time, and only he can digest the suffocating smell of disinfectant water and waste gas from factories. He needs to identify spoiled food, and more importantly, he needs his help. Natural and man-made disasters often hurt him, so he said. Almost without exception, a cold will have symptoms such as stuffy nose and runny nose, and it is nothing more than the nose itself that suffers. In order to wipe off his runny nose, he is often rubbed red or even scratched by facial tissues, but he never complains. His professionalism is the most admirable. His mouth is under his nose, which is definitely not the best position, and once he meets a lazy master, the snot from the upstream has no choice but to get into your mouth. The contribution of mouth is self-evident. It allows you to taste delicious food from all over the world and express your feelings in words. But I don't think your mouth was born to enjoy life. Although food is always tasted by him first, words are always expressed by him. However, you can understand your mouth from the words "illness comes from your mouth and disaster comes from your mouth". If any part of the body is uncomfortable, it is up to him to taste the bitter fruit. He often ends up with a dumb man eating Rhizoma Coptidis ― I really feel sorry for him. Although his nose is prominent and his mouth is delicious, God did not give them the most important role in people's hearts when he created them. Besides, how can you have both? The most important thing on a person's face is his eyes. Some people say that the eyes are the windows to the soul. We can see the beautiful world outside through him, and more importantly, others can feel our hearts through him. I can't imagine what kind of disaster his disappearance will bring us. Helen Keller, a blind writer, expressed her heartfelt desire for light in the book If You Give Me Three Days of Light. The beauty of sparkling eyes comes from the soul. Looking all around and listening all around, it can be seen that the importance of ears is second only to that of eyes. Sweet and elegant music rushes into our lives through our ears, which makes people get spiritual comfort after a meal. He can make people listen to the teachings of the wise, so as to standardize their words and deeds and cultivate good conduct. At the same time, ears are the only place where beautiful women choose to wear accessories, but beauty comes at a price. Piercing ears and hanging earrings can really make the facial features look more beautiful, but the pain when piercing them will make the ears unforgettable. I guess the most annoying thing about ears is that they are twins, but they will never reunite. My little eyebrow is the last of the five senses. He seems useless, but in fact he is very useful! When it rains, it is incumbent on the eyebrows to protect the eyes from the wind and rain. He can indeed be called the umbrella of the eyes, and his importance is reflected in this. It is said that God created human beings. If it is true, then I really admire God's cleverness. The five senses perform their duties, but they complement each other, which is a dream combination. I have no preference for the five senses, because everyone can't lack any one.

8. Imitating writing an article is imitating writing an article, which is a method of imitating a model essay. Imitation writing is an important means of combining reading with composition, and it is also an effective way to master writing quickly. Imitation means reading, digesting and absorbing the model essay as a composition, and then imitating the helpful contents in the model essay according to the specific requirements of your own practice.

When practicing imitation writing, we can start from the following aspects: First, imitate writing composition topics. The topic is the eyes of the article, and a good composition topic itself is very attractive. Second, imitate the genre of the article. The articles we have read include fairy tales, fables, narratives, expositions, thoughts after reading, poems, letters, diaries and various practical articles. Different genres have different writing methods, and we can quickly master these writing methods through imitation. Third, imitate the narrative way. Common narrative methods include time sequence, development sequence, orientation sequence and so on. There are also sequence, flashback and interpolation, which can be imitated according to your own practice needs. Fourth, imitate the structural method. Some articles are the total score structure, while others are the total score structure, including the details of the articles, the methods of beginning and ending, etc. , can be appropriately imitated. Fifth, imitate expression. The expressive techniques of composition are ever-changing, such as metaphor, personification, symbol, dynamic and static combination, scene description and so on. , can imitate. Of course, there are many aspects that can be imitated. As long as we usually read a lot, we can do it easily according to our own work needs. But parody is not the ultimate goal, the purpose is to be able to use it flexibly through parody practice.

9. The article that imitates the composition and cooks cigarettes dreams of misty rain and is homesick. I haven't returned to my hometown for a long time. I wonder if the smoke in my hometown is still rising in Ran Ran.

The vague memory of my youth tells me that I have a hometown, but I have never been back since I was sensible. There will always be indifferent and elegant scenes in my mind from time to time: outside the pavilion, beside the ancient road, kitchen smoke rises from the roof and connects with the sky. Smoke curled up, and a little boy sat in the field and watched the smoke drift away.

So I must be pursuing this memory, so I asked my parents about my hometown. However, what I didn't expect was that my parents were at a loss. Is everything in my mind really a dream? I can't help feeling depressed. But I still don't want to give up hope, so I silently put him in my heart, trying to find a trace of him in my life. Soon after, I reunited with my long-lost grandmother, and I told her my problem conveniently. My kind grandmother couldn't help laughing and told me the truth. When I was very young, my parents seldom went home for a while because of work, so I actually spent a childhood at my grandmother's house. My grandmother's house is remote and close to the suburbs. My parents seldom come to see me, so I can only watch the scenery every day. Every day, besides watching the scenery, I just wait for dinner. And whenever the smoke rises, it is the happiest time of my day, because it symbolizes the end of the day and means that I am one day closer to seeing my busy parents. With grandma's story, this memory has become more and more clear in my mind, and it has also strengthened my insistence on cooking smoke in my hometown.

For me, the smoke from cooking in my hometown symbolizes my hope of love for my parents. I hope the smoke will never stop and Ran Ran will rise forever.

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10. What is parody of an article? Observe the structure of parody articles and analyze rhetorical methods. For example, this time, I came to the grassland, where the sky is more lovely than other places. When the sky is so clear and the air is so fresh, I always want to sing a song to express my happiness. A thousand miles under the sun, but not boundless. There are mountains all around, the small autumn mountain on the ground is green, and the sheep will be green for a while. Everywhere I go, it's like embroidering the endless green carpet with big white flowers. This article uses the rhetorical method of metaphor, which needs to be imitated. This article centers on what Lao She saw when he came to the grassland. The first sentence expresses Lao She's love for grassland beauty. Therefore, when copying, we should also pay attention to the fact that the first sentence or the second sentence is a key sentence. If the structure of the article is a total score, it should also be a total score. If the article is a spoof, move it. Content. Let's go