Comments on the shortcomings of correcting the composition are as follows:
1. The content before and after is not closely related, some content is too isolated, and the connection with the main body of the article is not close enough. 2. The narrative is simple and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics. 3. The detailed arrangements are inappropriate and the priorities are not clear enough. 4. The content is mostly line outlines and lacks point-based detailed descriptions. 5. It is inconsistent with the flavor of the times and the content is too outdated. 6. The key points are highlighted, the center is clear, and the intention is clear. 7. The views are clear and the likes and dislikes are clear, making it clear at a glance. 8. The theme is directly highlighted in the content, clear and concise, without any redundancy. 9. The theme is serious, the thoughts are noble, and the spirit of enterprise is strong. 10. The center is not clear enough and the purpose is not clear enough. 11. The theme is vague, the meaning of the text is vague, and the purpose of writing is unclear. 12. Although there is a central theme, the expression is not sufficient and powerful, and it is empty and powerless. 13. The theme is not serious enough, and there are still dross in the thought. 14. Narrative Qi theory is well-ordered and not messy, but the context is not clear enough and the layers are slightly weak. 15. The details are appropriate, but the priorities are not clear enough, and the clarity of thinking needs to be improved. 16. The narrative is detailed and specific, the description of details is not vivid enough, and the personality of the characters is not distinctive enough. 17. Rich imagination, unique ideas and not deviating from the reality of life. However, there is no association that can be rooted in life, which limits the reader's thinking and makes people feel that it is not lively and interesting enough. 18. Wonderful imagination comes from life, without losing the reality of life, and is higher than life. But it doesn’t broaden the reader’s horizons enough. . .