Yueyang Tower: An Extended Composition of 600 Words

1. The story of Yueyang Tower was rewritten into a 600-word composition. In just four years, my good friend Teng was demoted to Baling County.

Teng Amethyst is very sad and angry, but what can he do? He can only come up with experience to govern here. In the second year, the originally poor and backward county became a prosperous city. In eight words, it means "harmony between the government and the people, and everything goes smoothly."

Since Teng Amethyst has made such a great contribution, why not reward herself? Therefore, he rebuilt Yueyang Tower and carved poems of poets from the Tang Dynasty to the present. After it was built, people cheered, but he said, "What if it is built? I just want to cry. "

In addition, he asked me to write him an article about Yueyang Tower. I looked at the portrait of Yueyang Tower he gave me, and only Dongting Lake matched him.

Dongting Lake! Connecting with the distant mountains and blending with the Yangtze River, the water is boundless, and the weather is changeable every day, and the scene is endless! Is this the magnificent light of Yueyang Tower? Hehe, the previous description is very detailed! I've seen it in paintings. There are many people and poets here who have been demoted like me. Seeing the natural scenery should cause different feelings, right? On a mild day in spring, the bright sunshine shines on the calm lake without a ripple. The sky is lined with lake light, which reflects the sky and is green from top to bottom.

Sha Ou in the sky flew and stopped, and the fish in the water swam around. The flowers and plants on the shore exude a strong fragrance, which is refreshing.

At night, you can also see the smoke on the lake swept away, and the bright moonlight shines thousands of miles; The moonlight is rippling with water waves and shining with golden light. The reflection of the moon is immersed in the water, just like a piece of jade. The fisherman's song duet is full of infinite joy ... at this time, when you climb Yueyang Tower, you will relax and forget all the honors and disgraces.

Raise a glass and drink, laugh at the breeze, and you will only feel extremely gratified and happy.

2. Begging on your knees: spread out 600 words in section 345 of Yueyang Tower. I saw that the beautiful scenery of Baling County was concentrated in Dongting Lake.

Dongting Lake joins the distant mountains and engulfs the Yangtze River. The water is vast and boundless. The weather is uncertain in the morning and evening, and the scene is ever-changing.

This is the magnificent scene in Yueyang Tower, which has been described in detail by predecessors. Since Dongting Lake leads to Wuxia in the north and Xiaoxiang Water in the south, most exiled officials and frustrated poets gather here, and their mood of enjoying the natural scenery is probably different, right? If the rain doesn't stop and it doesn't clear up for several months, the cold wind will roar and the turbid waves will go straight into the sky.

The sun, the moon and the stars cover their brilliance, and the mountains cover their traces. Businessmen and passengers couldn't get through, the mast fell and the oars broke.

As night falls, it is already dark, and the tigers roar and the apes mourn. When you board this Yueyang Tower, you will have a feeling of leaving Kyoto and missing your hometown. You are worried about slander and afraid of sarcasm. It is full of desolate scenes and your mood is extremely sad.

As for spring, the climate is warm, the sun is shining, the lake is calm, the sky is connected with the water, and a large area of green is endless. Sha Ou sometimes flies and sometimes stops, and beautiful fish sometimes swims near the water surface and sometimes dives into the water.

Vanilla on the shore, orchid in Xiaozhou, fragrant and green. Sometimes it disappears and the bright moon falls thousands of miles. When the lake fluctuates, the moonlight floating on the water shines golden. The lake was calm, and the bright moon shone into the water, as if a piece of jade had sunk, and the fisherman's song was different. How can this kind of fun be endless?

When you board this Yueyang Tower, you will have an open mind and a happy spirit. All the honors and disgraces will be forgotten together, and you will face the breeze with a glass of wine, and you will have a happy mood.

3. The fourth paragraph of Yueyang Tower is opened with (700). The main idea of the above paragraph is that on a mild day in spring, the bright sunshine shines on the calm lake without a ripple. The sky is lined with lake light, which reflects the sky and is green from top to bottom. Sha Ou in the sky flew and stopped, and the fish in the water swam around. The flowers and plants on the shore exude a strong fragrance, which is refreshing. At night, you can also see the smoke on the lake swept away, and the bright moonlight shines thousands of miles; The moonlight is rippling with water waves and shining with golden light. The reflection of the moon is immersed in the water, just like a piece of jade. The fisherman's song duet is full of infinite joy. When you board Yueyang Tower, you will feel relaxed and forget all the honors and disgraces. Raise a glass and drink, laugh at the breeze, and you will only feel extremely gratified and happy.

These two paragraphs are written in sharp contrast. One cloudy and one sunny, one sad and one happy, two contrasts. Emotion moves with the scene, blends with the scene, and has a poetic artistic conception. From these two paragraphs, the last fifth paragraph leads to the main idea of the article. This paragraph denies the two feelings about things written in the first two paragraphs, showing a higher ideological realm.

4. Yueyang Tower is expanded to 1000 words. Reference: Yueyang Tower is rewritten. I live in the Song Dynasty, which is a very open country, but the troops are weak. This is because Zhao Kuangyin, the founding emperor of the Song Dynasty, drank a cup to relieve the pressure of soldiers in order to avoid usurping the throne, and the strength of military commanders was obviously weakened. In this way, my country is getting weaker and weaker, and so is the Song Dynasty, which was difficult to open.

In four years, my good friend Teng was demoted to Baling County. Teng Amethyst is very sad and angry, but what can he do? He can only come up with experience to govern here.

In the second year, the originally poor and backward county became a prosperous city. Four words, that is, "politics and people are in harmony, and everything is thriving." Since Teng Amethyst has made such a great contribution, why not reward herself? Therefore, he rebuilt Yueyang Tower and carved poems of poets from the Tang Dynasty to the present.

After it was built, people cheered, but he said, "What if it is built? I just want to cry. " In addition, he asked me to write him an article about Yueyang Tower.

I looked at the portrait of Yueyang Tower he gave me, and only Dongting Lake matched him. Dongting Lake! Connecting with the distant mountains and blending with the Yangtze River, it is vast and colorful! Is this the magnificent light of Yueyang Tower? Hehe, the narratives of the predecessors are well prepared! Look at the pictures, there are many people and poets who have been demoted like me.

Hum! Like continuous rain, when the whole month is not clear, the cold wind howls and the turbid waves rush to the sky; The sun, the moon and the stars cover their brilliance, and the mountains cover their appearance; Businessmen and passengers couldn't get through, the mast fell and the paddle was broken; As night fell, it was dark, only the tiger was roaring and the ape was crying sadly. When you board Yueyang Tower, you will feel that you have left Beijing and missed your hometown. You are afraid that others will speak ill of you and be laughed at. As soon as I look up, I will see the scene of depression and desolation, and my heart is very sad.

For example, when the spring breeze is warm and the sun is shining, the lake is calm and the sky and the lake are connected, and it is green and boundless; Sha Ou sometimes flies and sometimes stops, and beautiful fish swim around in the lake; The flowers and plants on the lakeshore and sandbar are rich in fragrance and lush in vegetation. Sometimes the smoke on the lake completely dissipates, the bright moonlight pours away, the fluctuating light shines with golden light, the quiet moon is like a jade that sinks into the water, and fishermen sing to each other. How can such fun be endless! When you board Yueyang Tower, you will feel relaxed and happy, sharing weal and woe. It's really fun to drink in the breeze! I often ask for the hearts of ancient nobles, which may be different from the above performance. Why? Don't be happy or sad because of the quality of the object.

Being in a high temple, worrying about Shu Ren; Being in a remote Jianghu, I am worried about my country and people. Then I'm worried about being an official in the imperial court and being an official in a local place. When can I be happy? Then it is necessary to say "worry about the world first, and then enjoy the world."

Without such a person, who am I going back with? .

5. The fourth paragraph of Yueyang Tower is opened with (700). The main idea of the above paragraph is that on a mild day in spring, the bright sunshine shines on the calm lake without a ripple. The sky is lined with lake light, which reflects the sky and is green from top to bottom. Sha Ou in the sky flew and stopped, and the fish in the water swam around. The flowers and plants on the shore exude a strong fragrance, which is refreshing. At night, you can also see the smoke on the lake swept away, and the bright moonlight shines thousands of miles; The moonlight is rippling with water waves and shining with golden light. The reflection of the moon is immersed in the water, just like a piece of jade. The fisherman's song duet is full of infinite joy. When you board Yueyang Tower, you will feel relaxed and forget all the honors and disgraces. Raise a glass and drink, laugh at the breeze, and you will only feel extremely gratified and happy.

These two paragraphs are written in sharp contrast. One cloudy and one sunny, one sad and one happy, two contrasts. Emotion moves with the scene, blends with the scene, and has a poetic artistic conception. From these two paragraphs, the last fifth paragraph leads to the main idea of the article. This paragraph denies the two feelings about things written in the first two paragraphs, showing a higher ideological realm.

6. Exam Notes (Yueyang Tower Notes Rewritten) In the summer of the forty years of the Republic of China, my teacher invigilated Zhou Chuangguan. The next day, he took the test paper in his hand, looked at the time and immediately handed out his test paper, which was even more difficult.

Turn over the table and write the word honesty on the blackboard, asking the composition to remember. Looking at the examination room, in the corner of the classroom, throwing notes and making gestures is a kind of enjoyment, arrogance, just aiming at the answer and copying it after reading it. This is also a grand view of the examination room, which was prepared by the predecessors.

However, if you take the Chinese exam first and then the math exam, and the senior examiner is here, can you enjoy the exam? If my husband's grades are poor, the evil wind is howling, and his voice is strange, he will blame himself, add up his scores, see where he ranks, comfort himself, work hard and study hard next time, and have hope for his scores, then he will not make it into the top ten of the class, which will be extremely heartbreaking and sad, which will piss me off. If you get good grades, you will feel good.

I got the certificate and went home to get the reward. Parents are happy, children are happy, and classmates envy me. I am a master. How happy I am! If you read the test paper, you will be in a good mood. If your wallet and pockets are bulging, you will be happy to have a meal. Oh, honey! Let (yú) taste the first person's heart, or do something different.

What? Don't share happiness, don't count sadness. If the score is high, you will worry about the next exam. If the score is poor, you will worry about being beaten, whether to advance or retreat.

But when will you be happy? Must say: "worry about parents first, then the teacher will be happy"! Hey! Poor score, I don't want to think about the original text: In the spring of the fourth year of Li Qing, Jing Yi, a vine, guarded Baling County. In the second year, the government was harmonious and everything went smoothly.

Is to rebuild Yueyang Tower, add its old system, and engrave Tang Xian's poems on it. Genus (zh incarnation) is for writing.

Guanfu Baling wins in Dongting Lake. Take a distant mountain and swallow the Yangtze River, and the soup (shāng) is endless.

It's sunny in the morning and cloudy at night. This is the grand view of Yueyang Tower, which was prepared by predecessors.

But the northern martial arts, the Antarctic Xiaoxiang, and the poets who moved abroad will all be here, and they will look at things well. It rained cats and dogs for a month, the evil wind roared and the turbid waves were empty. The sun, the moon and the stars are hidden (Yao), and the mountains are hidden.

Business travel is not good, but it is a disaster. At dusk, tigers roar and apes crow.

When you go to the temple building, you are homesick, sad, sad and sad. If it's spring, it's beautiful, calm and the sky is bright and blue.

Li Jing swims in Ji Xiang, Sha Ou. The orchid of Zhi (zhǐ) TΟ ng (Tó ng) is gloomy and green.

Still gone, the moon is thousands of miles away, radiant and still. How happy it is to answer the fisherman's song! When you arrive at Dunsi Building, you will feel relaxed and happy, forget the humiliation, and leave the wine in the wind, which will make you feel happy.

Oh, honey! Give (yú) a taste of the ancient benevolent heart, or do something different from them. What? Don't rejoice in things, don't grieve for yourself.

If you live high in a temple, you will worry about your people; If you stay away from the Jianghu, you will worry about your husband. It's worrying about going in and going out.

But when will you be happy? It must be said that "worry about the world first, and then enjoy the world"! Hey! Wes, who are we going home with? .