The seven-character poem I wrote about snow is as follows:
Original text:
The flowers in the street garden are all gone, and the branches and leaves on the trees are in vain.
thin water freezes to meet the cold day, and the wasteland is frozen and bathed in cold wind.
the sky is vast and sparse, and there are few visitors in the lonely garden.
it's a light snow in the season, and the time turns and it's winter.
Translation:
The artistic conception of the flowers in the park on the street is exhausted, and the leaves on the branches of the trees have failed.
The water has frozen and ushered in a cold day, and the cold wind has frozen in the wasteland.
There are vast and sparse clouds in the sky, and there are few guests in the quiet courtyard.
It's the season of light snow, and time flies, and it's the cold winter.
Extended information:
Methods of writing poems
1. The subtlety of poems is often related to artistic conception. The content is too superficial and straightforward. At first glance, there is no artistic conception, and the works often lack appeal and become limerick without poetry. Therefore, the poet can't simply copy the original appearance of the objective world, but should find a more typical, refined and representative image and implicitly express his feelings he wants to create.
2. Picture of Poetry
Appreciating a good poem is like appreciating a beautiful painting. It presents an immersive picture for us with the power of words, which makes us feel as if we are in it and follow the author's thoughts and emotions.
Therefore, a good poem has a very high demand for visualization. The main feature of visualization is that it can't "directly say that it likes prose", but it should tell pictures and photos, and the kind of pictures that are hard to achieve feel poetry, and there are paintings in poetry.