The young father couldn't believe the fact that his daughter died suddenly. Even after his daughter was buried, he still felt that her daughter had just entered a long sleep. Therefore, the first two sentences of the poem, "Maybe you are really tired from crying, maybe you need to sleep", show a novel idea and set the sad tone of the whole poem. The poet's comfort to his beloved daughter, his caress to her daughter and her desire to wake up from her dream are all expressed through a word "sleep", which has become the eyes and soul of the whole poem.
The word "sleep" is the blood of the whole poem. From top to bottom to the end, the following is all about "sleep". Since it is a tired sleep, a careful father should care for his daughter's dream and do everything possible to create a quiet sleeping environment for her. Through the three "don't", we can see the author's strong desire. He hopes that there will be no noise, screaming birds and frogs around him, and even light and flowing things such as "sunshine" and "breeze" will not be allowed to move on his daughter. Don't poke her eyes, brush her eyebrows. He won't allow her to be disturbed. In order to protect his daughter's sleep, he even changed his usual gentleness and became decisive. He is "bossy" and "no one can wake you up", like whispering, like talking, like comforting, like urging, but he knocks on the floor and hits the most powerful syllable in the lullaby. Who can not be moved by this deep and delicate fatherly love, and who can not be moved by this blood and tears!
The third section is the part that reveals the theme of the whole poem, and it is also the climax of emotion. The first two sentences of this poem personify death again. He hopes to accompany his daughter with evergreen pine trees, soft soil newly dug by earthworms, the lightness of small grass roots that absorb water, and all the quiet and beautiful sounds of nature, because these scenic spots can combine into a mellow and quiet sleeping environment. The last two sentences of the poem are even more straightforward, pointing the sharp pen at the society that caused this unfortunate death. The Voice of Curse is a ruthless exposure of a world full of ugliness and evil, and a challenge of the voice of justice to the dark society. At this time, this poem has surpassed the mourning for girls and has the significance of social progress.
At the end of the poem, my father's lullaby is even more sad. He threw a handful of loess as a quilt for his daughter, sprinkled some paper money and flew slowly. He seems to realize that his daughter has said goodbye to him, but his movements are so light and tiptoe for fear of disturbing her. He thought his daughter was continuing that tired dream, and her heart was contradictory and her consciousness was confused, which was also true and illusory.
In Maybe, the poet's mood is tragic and exciting, such as underground magma, rushing away, ready to erupt at any time. But the poet has always controlled this passion, making it deeply contained in every word and every group of images, and becoming the inner core force of poetry. In terms of language, the poet adopted the way of cold treatment, which greatly compressed his feelings, made them more solid, heroic and heartbreaking. In a word, Maybe is a masterpiece in stagnant water and an outstanding embodiment of Wen Yiduo's poetry creation.