off? Key? Word: 6 words in the sixth grade of kapok primary school
Word count: 6 words composition
This article is suitable for the sixth grade of primary school
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This composition is about 6 words in the sixth grade of primary school, and the topic is "Kapok". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. During February and March of the lunar calendar, the magnificent kapok tree of Gundam has blossomed with bright "sparks". The tall pagoda-like kapok tree stood there motionless, guarding our hometown like a soldier. So it's also called hero tree. The flowers on that tree are so bright red that there is no noise at all, just like our brave revolutionary martyrs dyed petals red with blood, so they are heroic flowers. Every spring, the flaming kapok blooms on every branch of the kapok tree. From a distance, it looks like the whole tree is on fire. At this time, the flowers are also reflected in the river, and the bright red flowers contrast with the continuous green peaks in the distance, making the flowers more harmonious and amazing. As soon as I saw the kapok, I remembered the martyrs, and the flame-like petals reminded me of the smoke and fire of the martyrs during the war. It makes me feel even more: without martyrs, there would be no happy life today; In the era when there is no war, I should study harder to serve my country in the future. I love kapok, and I love the revolutionary martyrs who gave us a happy life!
famous teacher's comment: The little author described a kind of plant-kapok. Beautiful language, delicate description and profound central idea. "The tall kapok tree like a pagoda stood there motionless, guarding our hometown like a soldier. So it's also called hero tree. The flowers on that tree are so bright red that there is no noise at all, just like our brave revolutionary martyrs dyed petals one after another with blood, so hero flowers ",the author explained the origin of hero flowers. "Every spring, the flame-like kapok is full of every branch of the kapok tree. From a distance, it looks like the whole tree is on fire. At this time, the flowers are also reflected in the river, and the bright red flowers are contrasted with the continuous green peaks in the distance, which makes the flowers more harmonious and amazing. "Beautiful description shows the characteristics of kapok. The little author expresses his ambition by holding objects. Although he writes about kapok, he is actually alluding to the sacrifices made by martyrs for our happy life. (Xuele China Distinguished Teacher: Teacher Xu Yiwen) 28-12-28 14:33: