The teacher's comments on the composition will directly affect the students' enthusiasm for writing, so write carefully. Below, I collected and sorted out the "essay evaluation model essay" for everyone. Welcome to read and learn from them!
Composition evaluation 1
1. The article can be closely linked with life, and the case narrative is concrete and vivid, with touching beginning and real feelings.
2. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, exciting and exciting.
Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, full of emotion and truth, and it is very interesting to read. A large number of spoken English in life is used to make the article more natural and close to the people. The ending is clear and meaningful.
This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines. According to the sequence of events, the article describes the events. The language is fluent and the level is clear, which seems to be enjoyable from beginning to end.
The article is full of respect and gratitude from beginning to end, affectionate and touching, which is the shocking force of this article. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, full of fun, which makes people fondle it. The author is ingenious in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing. The language is lively and interesting. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
6. The examples are vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics. It can be seen that you are a conscientious person in life. The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is really interesting and well written.
7. The full-text language is fluent and the writing is free and easy, which is a relatively successful work.
8. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate. Through the description of the environment, the mood of the characters is set off. Very artistic. Miscellaneous but not chaotic, but detailed and focused. The ending is just right and the center is clear. The language is simple and profound and thought-provoking.
9. Start with feelings and end with feelings. This will make the article coherent from beginning to end, and at the same time make the theme of the article cyclical and infectious. The description is full of passion, concise at the beginning, focused and detailed.
10. The atmosphere of the article is fully and appropriately rendered. What is the focus of the article? Made a detailed and vivid description. This is an amazingly noble idea. It is both practical and contains simple and profound philosophy, and it is both exciting and emotional to read.
1 1. The close-up is unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence and is very kind to read.
12. This article is full of passion. Between the lines, can you understand the rights of small authors? The full text has clear levels and fluent sentences.
13. The case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting, compared with the previous metaphor? Come down in one continuous line. Finally, the author showed his rights in a few words. Emotion is touching.
14. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main features of things, and the length is short and pithy, which is worth reading.
15. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life, and it makes people feel cordial to read.
16. the article is novel at the beginning, which has the effect of pulling one hair and moving the whole body, so that readers can have an impact on the characters as soon as they meet? The article is well organized and forms a complete image.
Composition evaluation II
1, the little author observes carefully and narrates orderly.
2. The use of some subtle words invisibly adds a lot of interest to the composition.
3. The composition is elegant, beautiful, smooth and coherent, especially the characters' language is humorous.
4. The composition is reasonable,
Through vivid language description, readers seem to be in a dream.
6. The composition has clear clues, prominent themes, and focuses on ….
7. The details are quite clever. Extremely rich in skills.
8. Delicate description of the characters' language, manner and movements is a major feature.
9. Delicate description, strong flavor of life, accurate and vivid words and sentences.
10, accurate language, vivid image, extremely rich and specific content.
1 1. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics.
12, the composition comes from life, so the language is not very beautiful, but it is really interesting and reasonable.
13. Write ... in detail.
14, the language is lively and interesting.
15, make a lot of use of spoken English in life to make the composition more natural and friendly.
16, with feeling switch and feeling at the end. This can make the composition consistent from beginning to end, and at the same time, it can repeat the theme of the composition, which is very infectious.
17, the praise of the characters at the end is sincere and touching.
18, the implicit ending of the composition is both topical and intriguing.
19, the end focuses on expressing emotions, taking care of the beginning and summarizing and correcting the composition. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.
20. The vivid depiction of details is just the opposite of revealing the inner world of the characters, which is success.
2 1, the composition is concise with …, and its taste is endless.
22. At the end of the composition, revealing the central sentence is really clear, and the concluding language is short and powerful.
Composition evaluation 3
1. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, full of fun, which makes people fondle it.
2. The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible.
Your article is like a slow flowing stream, delicate and smooth. Beautiful writing, sincere and delicate feelings, very personal style. May you continue to pick the waves of life on the road of writing and make your style more perfect!
4. The language of the article is fluent, which also shows the teacher's feelings.
This article is highly ideological and artistic, which is unforgettable for a long time. Ingenious conception, using comparative techniques to deepen the theme; The plot is also quite clever, and the whole story is both unexpected and reasonable. The language is unpretentious, and the author's love and hate are all contained in the narrative, which can make readers feel and think deeply.
6. Your imagination is so strange, bold and rich that the teacher is surprised. Your fairy tales, with magical imagination, can be described as "original". The vivid description makes people feel fresh and interesting. Hat horn is a lovely little fox, and the joys and sorrows you have given it are simply amazing. The teacher applauded for you. I believe you are not far from the writer's dream.
7. I can have a reasonable imagination and reflect a meaningful philosophy ... The writing is smooth and concise, which gives full play to my imagination. It is a good article ... The article is elegant and smooth, clear-cut, especially the humor of the characters' language, plus the use of some subtle words, which adds a lot of interest to the article.
8. You are the teacher's bosom friend. I hope we can learn from each other and collect a bunch of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.
9. Your composition is excellent, which not only describes the appearance of the chicken, but also describes its eating behavior, barking and quarrelling.
10, the writing of this article is beautiful and fresh, full of certain philosophy. It is written that "I" walked by the sea, and the sea not only gave me the enjoyment of beauty, but also caused my meditation and association. It can be said that the sea has given me a space to swim, and I am immersed in life for the sea, making the sea a "person" with noble personality strength. After reading this article, it gives people a sense of beauty and is thought-provoking.
Composition evaluation 4
1. This rich content is similar to what the writer wrote ... Your practice is real, and reading is really a great enjoyment ... Your composition is very specific, and I enjoy reading it ... You must like it to write so many words as a document at ordinary times. ...
2. The dry content is like boiled water, with no taste at all. A little more kind words will be delicious ... not as good as Vivienne Liu's words (or give names to other poor students). Don't you feel a little embarrassed ... your composition is like an old lady's mouth, dry and empty, and it leaks straight. ...
3. Smooth and vivid sentences, like Lushan Waterfall, are very smooth ... The metaphor is very appropriate, which shows that you have been carefully observing ... How did you come up with such a clever anthropomorphic sentence ... How appropriate this rhetorical question is used here ... This exclamatory sentence expresses your true feelings at that time ... The ancient poems are quoted just right, and I will use the poems I have learned in my composition in the future ... for the use of two-part allegorical sayings.
4. The composition is uneven and uncomfortable to read, just like walking on a bumpy road in the country, and you will easily fall down if you are not careful ... The sentence seems to be cut off and incomplete ... After reading it carefully, you will find something meaningless ... Don't be afraid of trouble, the good article has been changed ... You should learn to correct every sentence yourself. ...
These parts are clearly divided ... these parts are properly divided ... each section has a meaning and clear paragraphs. ...
6. The hierarchy is chaotic. One section contains so much content that I feel breathless when I read it ... There are too few sections to add ... The middle part can be divided into several parts ... One or two departments should not be separated, but merged ... This section has little to do with the above sections.
7. Focus ... The key part is written in detail, which is good ... The event is described in detail ... The scenic spots are described in the order of sightseeing, and the key points are ...
8. The first part is too wordy ... I can't see the point of this composition ... It's not the point, so it should be written simply. ...
9. Introduce the customs of Yongfeng in chronological order.
10. Vivid scenes can be reflected by concrete examples.
1 1. The details are just right, and the festive atmosphere is written.
12. The words used are accurate and vivid, reflecting the traditional liveliness and people.
13. It reflects the author's infinite happiness.
14. While describing traditional customs, you can write your own unique feelings.
15. Inappropriate details, covering everything, running account, no focus.
16. Some customs are not specified.
17. I didn't write my own unique feelings.
18. The language is dull and not vivid enough.
19. Chaos and disorder.
20. This article is a narrative. The description of the event process is detailed and concrete, although there are many contents, it seems to be orderly.
Composition evaluation 5
1。 The article reveals the love for _ between the lines, and skillfully uses the dynamic three-dimensional perception to make _ melt in the four seasons of the year, and with the extension of time, it shows dynamic and vitality. In addition, the young author has always been with a heart of exploring the unknown, a desire for knowledge and a love for the motherland, which makes every reader feel happy.
2。 You are like a little painter, painting your beautiful scenery one by one. The four seasons are different and the scenery is different. A few short words show your love for _ _, and the scenes blend. Well done!
3。 Your composition is full of emotion, and your love for _ is between the lines. Finally, speak out loud and express the main idea: "love _, very good!" " Beautiful language, a large number of rhetorical devices such as personification, vividly describes the four seasons scenery of _.
4。 The author wrote about the busyness and fullness of the morning and the beauty of the scenery in the morning. At the end, "a year's plan lies in spring, and a day's plan lies in morning." On this beautiful morning, we embarked on the journey of life, which expressed the author's good wish to cherish the good times and take the road of life well.
5。 The scenery of the four seasons in X is really beautiful. Your exercises are clear and informative, and your words are particularly vivid and accurate.
6。 Vivid and concrete, people can't help but release handwritten scrolls. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing.
7。 The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.
8。 For the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene, and the scene naturally blends into one. The full text is fresh and elegant, kind and euphemistic, simple and not vulgar, and it is worth learning.
9。 The full text is clear, vivid and compact, and interesting. This article is lyrical in narration. The ending focuses on expressing emotions, giving consideration to the beginning and summarizing the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.
10。 The article is meticulous, orderly, vivid and concrete, which can be called a masterpiece. The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible. The details are quite ingenious. Extremely rich in skills.
1 1。 The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.
12。 The article has clear clues, prominent themes and close development. The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read and reluctant to let go.
13。 At the beginning, I used a scene metaphor, which is quite innovative; Flashback the beginning and render the artistic conception.
14。 The article is novel at the beginning, which has the effect of pulling one hair and moving the whole body. Let readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.
15。 This article can read fresh and interesting language and descriptions … between the lines, it is full of childlike interest in childhood, and laughter is endless, which is a masterpiece. Appropriate details and the combination of reality and reality are two characteristics, and … are richer and more vivid.